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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Spring

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Morning Frost, but Warming

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Sun 04:30pm

Stables Online: 143

Sunni

04:29:57 Sunni bunny

Oh! Lucky! That is one pretty WWW.

04:29:46 Ivy / poison ivy

Al*

04:29:42 Ivy / poison ivy

Ceci

She looks like how i feel like taylor swift would look as a horse.

Sunni

04:29:34 Sunni bunny

I think am sick, I feel like an running a fever.
I hate this so much.

Lucky

04:29:05 luvky

Well that is interesting
-HEE Click-

04:28:32 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I can throw her older full sister at you

04:28:06 Ceci / (Call me) AL

-HEE Click-

No, actually she does have colour <3

04:27:30

I have a strong feeling she will disappear into my barns.

04:26:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL

-HEE Click-

I have a strong feeling she will be very white when an adult

04:26:19 Ivy / poison ivy

And here we start our venture into the color territory hehe -HEE Click-

Lucky

04:25:45 luvky

Al
yess that's what i'm hoping for. I'm a sucker for liver chestnuts.

04:24:57 Ivy / poison ivy

EMMMM!!

hiiiii

04:24:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Lucky, I suppose you can get the liver variant of chestnut

Lucky

04:24:46 luvky

Tosk
Oh wow that is cuteeee hehe

Lucky

04:24:27 luvky

Tosk
yes i feel like that's exactly what's gonna happen too me TvT

04:24:23

Oh this is pretty
-HEE Click-

04:23:41

I tend to reroll mine into ugliness xD karma for being greedy

Lucky

04:22:37 luvky

Yess i love the chestnut too ^^ but i can't help but think she could look better hahaha

Niallator Acres

04:22:00 Ivy - Niallator side

Can't wait to rate you -HEE Click-

04:21:36 Tosk's KNN

I think she's beautiful. But that's probably because I like that crisp chestnut

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Sunni

04:29:57 Sunni bunny

Oh! Lucky! That is one pretty WWW.

04:29:46 Ivy / poison ivy

Al*

04:29:42 Ivy / poison ivy

Ceci

She looks like how i feel like taylor swift would look as a horse.

Sunni

04:29:34 Sunni bunny

I think am sick, I feel like an running a fever.
I hate this so much.

Lucky

04:29:05 luvky

Well that is interesting
-HEE Click-

04:28:32 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I can throw her older full sister at you

04:28:06 Ceci / (Call me) AL

-HEE Click-

No, actually she does have colour <3

04:27:30

I have a strong feeling she will disappear into my barns.

04:26:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL

-HEE Click-

I have a strong feeling she will be very white when an adult

04:26:19 Ivy / poison ivy

And here we start our venture into the color territory hehe -HEE Click-

Lucky

04:25:45 luvky

Al
yess that's what i'm hoping for. I'm a sucker for liver chestnuts.

04:24:57 Ivy / poison ivy

EMMMM!!

hiiiii

04:24:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Lucky, I suppose you can get the liver variant of chestnut

Lucky

04:24:46 luvky

Tosk
Oh wow that is cuteeee hehe

Lucky

04:24:27 luvky

Tosk
yes i feel like that's exactly what's gonna happen too me TvT

04:24:23

Oh this is pretty
-HEE Click-

04:23:41

I tend to reroll mine into ugliness xD karma for being greedy

Lucky

04:22:37 luvky

Yess i love the chestnut too ^^ but i can't help but think she could look better hahaha

Niallator Acres

04:22:00 Ivy - Niallator side

Can't wait to rate you -HEE Click-

04:21:36 Tosk's KNN

I think she's beautiful. But that's probably because I like that crisp chestnut

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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