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Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

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Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

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EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.
SavageMare
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3 months | 170k
6 months | 360k
12 months | 900k

20 re-rolls | 170k
50 re-rolls | 360k

Willing to trade for AAs but trades must be fair <3
Bermuda Triangle
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Wild Wind Stables
10:02:06 Wind
Perlino Dun Rabicano and Brown Rabicano Frame foals for 800 each. Both X breed and rated EPP or PPP.
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Platinum Plaits
02:09:20 Payton
Barn sale! All EEW-EWW, including a 1/1 and 2 yearlings! Open to offers!
-HEE Click-
Secretariat Ranch
02:01:56 SR
PEE ISH Stallion EE SplSpl P2P2 1/4

-HEE Click-
Exo-K
02:00:19 Exo/EK
Check out my shop

-HEE Click-
Exo-M
01:59:33 EM
EEE ISH Colt RnRn 5k

-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
12:51:26 Ally 💜
EEE+ fillies and colts
-HEE Click-
Gemini
12:20:06 
EEE+ including EWW mare for auction - only 5k

-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
10:41:13 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


-HEE Click-
EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.
SavageMare
10:36:20 Moody
Upgrades Available

3 months | 170k
6 months | 360k
12 months | 900k

20 re-rolls | 170k
50 re-rolls | 360k

Willing to trade for AAs but trades must be fair <3
Bermuda Triangle
10:28:00 Lost
Auction ends tomorrow

Eee-www well bred mares

-HEE Click-
Wild Wind Stables
10:02:06 Wind
Perlino Dun Rabicano and Brown Rabicano Frame foals for 800 each. Both X breed and rated EPP or PPP.
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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