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Blue Diamond
09:20:41 Bluey
Anyone ever listened to Kall Me Kris's podcast?
Spotted Dreams KNN
09:08:48 Spotted ~ Galaxy
I just meant regular clown vibes but sure lmao
Bug in a Rug
09:08:02 Bug | Flea | KPH
I really hope you did mean serious clown because thats way funnier xD
Spotted Dreams KNN
09:06:33 Spotted ~ Galaxy
I don't know why, but he gives off serious clown vibes LOL

-HEE Click-
Beyond The Horizon
08:57:35 Beyond Or Nat
My luck has been terrible today. First I go to leave my apartment to get back to work from my lunch break, only to not be able to open my door. My doorknob broke…so I put in a maintenance request and thankfully they replaced it within an hour. Here we are, I got back home from my sister’s birthday dinner and realize it’s really warm. Go to my thermostat and it’s 75 degrees in here. So just put in another maintenance request, they probably sick of me 😭
starmutt
08:56:58 marsh 🌈
Just opened my eyes (4 hours overslept), anyone got irl pets I can doodle for a bit? DM me xD
Spotted Dreams KNN
08:55:19 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Sorry just saw your 2nd message lol
Spotted Dreams KNN
08:55:05 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Emily you cam find upgrades for sale in Sales Chat or the designated forum threads (:
Emyln Moon
08:54:31 
oops sorry wrong chat
Emyln Moon
08:53:49 
can i get an upgrade?
Spotted Dreams KNN
08:53:38 Spotted ~ Galaxy
I remember once I won an art contest with a KNN gelding of mine who looked like he was covered in gold confetti
Galaxy TBs
08:52:10 Star/Galaxy/Sunny
Ok cool, thanks
Cadence Farms
08:50:47 evebot
Yes, sometimes I ask chat.
Hummingbird Meadows
08:50:22 Bird
@Eve, don't you sometimes ask people to share a horse in the chat too?
Cadence Farms
08:49:03 evebot
With card view I just start looking through people's barns for something cool looking.
Galaxy TBs
08:45:45 Star/Galaxy/Sunny
Eve how do you choose your featured horses? Because I would love to have another featured someday.
MakeEm Fancy
08:45:41 Ally 💜
Cons of having two puppies...They body slam each other 🤦🏻‍♀️
Chromatic
08:42:47 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
I've only bred one across three accounts xD
Glacier Bay Cove
08:40:05 Arctic Katz
Wow, Peacock
Aura Show Horses
08:40:00 Peacock/ Pea
thanks chrome!

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Blue Diamond
09:20:41 Bluey
Anyone ever listened to Kall Me Kris's podcast?
Spotted Dreams KNN
09:08:48 Spotted ~ Galaxy
I just meant regular clown vibes but sure lmao
Bug in a Rug
09:08:02 Bug | Flea | KPH
I really hope you did mean serious clown because thats way funnier xD
Spotted Dreams KNN
09:06:33 Spotted ~ Galaxy
I don't know why, but he gives off serious clown vibes LOL

-HEE Click-
Beyond The Horizon
08:57:35 Beyond Or Nat
My luck has been terrible today. First I go to leave my apartment to get back to work from my lunch break, only to not be able to open my door. My doorknob broke…so I put in a maintenance request and thankfully they replaced it within an hour. Here we are, I got back home from my sister’s birthday dinner and realize it’s really warm. Go to my thermostat and it’s 75 degrees in here. So just put in another maintenance request, they probably sick of me 😭
starmutt
08:56:58 marsh 🌈
Just opened my eyes (4 hours overslept), anyone got irl pets I can doodle for a bit? DM me xD
Spotted Dreams KNN
08:55:19 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Sorry just saw your 2nd message lol
Spotted Dreams KNN
08:55:05 Spotted ~ Galaxy
Emily you cam find upgrades for sale in Sales Chat or the designated forum threads (:
Emyln Moon
08:54:31 
oops sorry wrong chat
Emyln Moon
08:53:49 
can i get an upgrade?
Spotted Dreams KNN
08:53:38 Spotted ~ Galaxy
I remember once I won an art contest with a KNN gelding of mine who looked like he was covered in gold confetti
Galaxy TBs
08:52:10 Star/Galaxy/Sunny
Ok cool, thanks
Cadence Farms
08:50:47 evebot
Yes, sometimes I ask chat.
Hummingbird Meadows
08:50:22 Bird
@Eve, don't you sometimes ask people to share a horse in the chat too?
Cadence Farms
08:49:03 evebot
With card view I just start looking through people's barns for something cool looking.
Galaxy TBs
08:45:45 Star/Galaxy/Sunny
Eve how do you choose your featured horses? Because I would love to have another featured someday.
MakeEm Fancy
08:45:41 Ally 💜
Cons of having two puppies...They body slam each other 🤦🏻‍♀️
Chromatic
08:42:47 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
I've only bred one across three accounts xD
Glacier Bay Cove
08:40:05 Arctic Katz
Wow, Peacock
Aura Show Horses
08:40:00 Peacock/ Pea
thanks chrome!

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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