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Amelia Stormhand
12:01:35 Handy
Need gone, chimera (I think)

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Pegasus Lane
11:55:06 Peggy (or) Peg
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My rumble entries are available to purchase! Take a peek ;)
Whitewolf
11:49:17 
WEE Combo colts for sale 3k each.
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
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WWW SH stallion for auction
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The Old Gods
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DragonFyre Estate
11:27:23 Whip
WWW AALB stud for offers. No sabino and no roan on top of being a consistently higher AALB stud. PM me to discuss.
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Looking for T1 arts for my new filly!!
Please PM me if you'd be interested <3
Ambrosia
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WWE appy PON colt for sale. Pm offers
Green River Stables
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EWE AA combo mares auction
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Disney Acres
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EEW TB mare 40k will lower
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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