Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 193   Season: Spring   
$: 0
Forecast: Partly Cloudy with Afternoon Drizzle
Forecast:
Wed 11:31pm  
Stables Online:  96   Go Raid
Chatbox
Cadence Farms
11:31:28 evebot
Also gifyu seems promising
Cadence Farms
11:30:59 evebot
imgur is still allowed
Alpine Acres
11:21:31 Lily/Alpine
no, they run at around 12:15 GT :)
Lucky Ducky Lane
11:15:54 
Shows have not run, correct?
Redwood Original
11:13:07 
Thank you!
Alpine Acres
11:12:43 Lily/Alpine
Redwood
yup, just select 'list' under views/sort>view at the bottom of your barn page
Dash and Duchess
11:12:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Redwood, all the barn views are still at the bottom of the page so yes :)
Redwood Original
11:11:38 
Anybody know if I can go back to the old list in my barns instead of the pictures?
Nightfall Dressage
11:10:27 Witchy

W/E/P: 1
P/W/E: 1
E/W/P: 1
E/E/P: 2
W/P/S: 1
E/P/P: 1
S/E/E: 2
P/E/P: 3
E/P/S: 1
P/E/S: 1
A/W/P: 1
A/W/S: 1
E/S/S: 1
P/S/P: 1
W/S/A: 1
Sub/W/P: 4
E/S/A: 1
A/E/S: 2
Sub/W/S: 4
E/A/A: 3
W/A/Sub: 3
Sub/E/S: 7
E/A/Sub: 6
W/Sub/Sub: 7
E/Sub/Sub: 8
RO wasnt too shabby
Cozmic Elite
11:06:58 
I just saw and got to pet a lil puppy, what a cutie.
Nightfall Dressage
11:00:40 Witchy
-HEE Click- EEK
Hummingbird Meadows
10:59:38 Bird
Ooo, season 2 of Wednesday is out!
Bug in a Rug
10:59:26 Bug | Flea | KPH
yeah that's true pheezy. I always use direct links because they paste into forums properly, but I know some folks don't
pandemoniu_m
10:58:33 pheezy
direct links dont show any porn but its just an issue of clarity. easier to stop using a website completely than making rules like "you can use this site but only direct links or it will show bad ads", a lot of people will continue not to use direct links i think
KPH Equestrian
10:52:34 Rapcoon | Jester
Eve, if it's a direct link like this, is it ok, or still showing them?
-Click-
KPH Equestrian
10:44:25 Rapcoon | Jester
aw shit. It's taking over >.<
Alpine Acres
10:43:37 Lily/Alpine
Arctic, it's allowed, check the latest news post :)
Glacier Bay Cove
10:40:37 Arctic Katz
Is imgur still allowed, or is it on the list of sites that are not allowed
Cadence Farms
10:38:24 evebot
freeimage has porn. Try gifyu it's delightful.
KPH Equestrian
10:37:17 Rapcoon | Jester
elfie
this one! Love it so far, it feels very similar to postimages but dark mode xD
-Click-

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests
Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Cadence Farms
11:31:28 evebot
Also gifyu seems promising
Cadence Farms
11:30:59 evebot
imgur is still allowed
Alpine Acres
11:21:31 Lily/Alpine
no, they run at around 12:15 GT :)
Lucky Ducky Lane
11:15:54 
Shows have not run, correct?
Redwood Original
11:13:07 
Thank you!
Alpine Acres
11:12:43 Lily/Alpine
Redwood
yup, just select 'list' under views/sort>view at the bottom of your barn page
Dash and Duchess
11:12:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Redwood, all the barn views are still at the bottom of the page so yes :)
Redwood Original
11:11:38 
Anybody know if I can go back to the old list in my barns instead of the pictures?
Nightfall Dressage
11:10:27 Witchy

W/E/P: 1
P/W/E: 1
E/W/P: 1
E/E/P: 2
W/P/S: 1
E/P/P: 1
S/E/E: 2
P/E/P: 3
E/P/S: 1
P/E/S: 1
A/W/P: 1
A/W/S: 1
E/S/S: 1
P/S/P: 1
W/S/A: 1
Sub/W/P: 4
E/S/A: 1
A/E/S: 2
Sub/W/S: 4
E/A/A: 3
W/A/Sub: 3
Sub/E/S: 7
E/A/Sub: 6
W/Sub/Sub: 7
E/Sub/Sub: 8
RO wasnt too shabby
Cozmic Elite
11:06:58 
I just saw and got to pet a lil puppy, what a cutie.
Nightfall Dressage
11:00:40 Witchy
-HEE Click- EEK
Hummingbird Meadows
10:59:38 Bird
Ooo, season 2 of Wednesday is out!
Bug in a Rug
10:59:26 Bug | Flea | KPH
yeah that's true pheezy. I always use direct links because they paste into forums properly, but I know some folks don't
pandemoniu_m
10:58:33 pheezy
direct links dont show any porn but its just an issue of clarity. easier to stop using a website completely than making rules like "you can use this site but only direct links or it will show bad ads", a lot of people will continue not to use direct links i think
KPH Equestrian
10:52:34 Rapcoon | Jester
Eve, if it's a direct link like this, is it ok, or still showing them?
-Click-
KPH Equestrian
10:44:25 Rapcoon | Jester
aw shit. It's taking over >.<
Alpine Acres
10:43:37 Lily/Alpine
Arctic, it's allowed, check the latest news post :)
Glacier Bay Cove
10:40:37 Arctic Katz
Is imgur still allowed, or is it on the list of sites that are not allowed
Cadence Farms
10:38:24 evebot
freeimage has porn. Try gifyu it's delightful.
KPH Equestrian
10:37:17 Rapcoon | Jester
elfie
this one! Love it so far, it feels very similar to postimages but dark mode xD
-Click-

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1    2    3    4 

Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 06:53 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
Posts: 6841
#153878
Give Award
Ello!
I've been doing art for quite a few years on HEE, but I feel like my art should be improved more than it is, so I'm asking for some critique on my art! I'm not asking "what can I do to make my art look more like [insert name]'s art", I'm just asking what can I do to improve and make my art look better! Even if you think that everything is perfect except for how I (example) drew the mane or shaded the hooves, then let me know! Or if you think the whole thing is terrible, then please let me know, and suggest ways (or tips if you know any) which I can improve!
All humbleness aside, I'm not too bad of an artist on HEE, but I'd like to be doing sooo much better than what I'm doing now.


I'm going to somewhat make this into a project. Every month, at the end of the month, I'll post a few images on this page which I made the previous month. Then I'll try to apply some of the tips and critique to pieces I make the next month and repeat the cycle. By, let's say.... July of 2019, I'd like to see that I've improved a TON!

I'll also be hosting free art giveaways through this page and possibly offer discounts in my art shop to anyone who gives helpful critique!


Here's some info about my art experience on HEE:
- I started doing art around yr65 (I joined yr61) by coloring linearts. (If I get enough requests, I'll see if I can find a link to the first lineart I colored xD )
- I started doing manips maybe 6 months after that
- I do ALL of my art on PaintToolSAI, a downloadable drawing program. SAI was specifically made for graphic design/drawing, not photomanipulation, so it took me a few years to figure out how to effectively use it for making manips
- Around December 2016 is when I finally "figured out" how to effectively make manips using SAI
-It has now been almost 2 years since then, and though I have definitely improved, I feel that I should be quite a bit more improved


Please note that because I use PaintToolSAI, not Photoshop or GIMP (gimp doesn't work on my laptop for some reason) I do not have access to all the PS/GIMP settings or brushes.


So, because I'm asking for Critique, I'd like to set a few rules, just so there are no hard feelings being passed around. Remeber; everyone may have different opinions or prefer different styles :)
1. Don't be rude
-please don't insult my art or just say that it looks bad. If you do think it looks bad, then please elaborate and tell me why or what I can do to fix it!
-don't tell people that their tips are bad or get into arguments. I would like everyone to be able to have a say without being afraid they'll be harassed for saying it. :)

2. Elaborate/ Don't be Vague
-if you dislike something about a piece or think I could have done something differently, then please say so! But then please elaborate and give me tips or ways which you think I could improve.
-or if you like something that I did on a piece, then please say so! Not all critique has to be negative!

3. You Don't Have to Critique Every Image
-you certainly can if you'd like, but you don't have to critique every image
-If you want, you can also go through my DA and link+critique some of the pieces which I have not posted


That's it! Thank you all sooooooooooooo much for the help!


Stuff to Improve upon for this month based on critique:
-Look for less "awkward" stock that matches the BG better
-Manes and Tails (lol this one is probably gonna be here for a few months)
-positioning and size of horses compared to their BGs
-applying just enough contrast and shading to the horse/ grounding horse
-fixed light source

Edited at April 15, 2018 08:16 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 06:55 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
Posts: 6841
#153882
Give Award
Art Examples (updated 4/ 15/ 2018)
***Because I just started this forum, for the next few months I'll be uploading both old and new art examples***

Link to my DA :
https://skystream11.deviantart.com/
1. https://img00.deviantart.net/ab0d/i/2017/242/8/d/rm__old_friends_by_skystream11-dblttsv.png

2. https://orig00.deviantart.net/7c3f/f/2017/078/e/a/rising_star_w_words_by_skystream11-db2wg6f.jpg

3. https://orig00.deviantart.net/bb99/f/2017/240/4/b/valkyrie_w_creds_by_skystream11-dbllf7o.jpg

4. https://img00.deviantart.net/6dbd/i/2017/287/1/4/rm___sky_fire_by_skystream11-dbql4uo.png

5. https://orig00.deviantart.net/b252/f/2017/315/b/b/serenis_w_markings_w_words_by_skystream11-dbthlbm.jpg

6. https://orig00.deviantart.net/c2a2/f/2018/006/c/6/a1_friesan_w_words___markings_by_skystream11-dbz676z.jpg

7. https://orig00.deviantart.net/3282/f/2018/046/8/7/symphony_of_colour_w_creds_by_skystream11-dc39hcv.jpg
-fix shading

8. https://orig00.deviantart.net/0b23/f/2018/051/a/2/heart_breaker_w_words_by_skystream11-dc3st4z.jpg

9. https://pre00.deviantart.net/3dea/th/pre/f/2018/051/8/a/stormwarning_full_image_by_skystream11-dc3u99s.png

10. https://orig00.deviantart.net/7c33/f/2018/075/7/6/bluecrimsonpassion_w_words_by_skystream11-dc63e87.jpg

11. https://orig00.deviantart.net/4eda/f/2018/088/3/3/hee____horse_avatar___dimmy_s_phoenix_by_skystream11-dc7bqco.jpg

12. https://orig00.deviantart.net/70bb/f/2018/093/e/f/dimmy_s_asi_w_words_by_skystream11-dc7rtcd.jpg

Edited at April 16, 2018 03:21 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:12 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#153895
Give Award
You are absolutely amazing keep doing what you are doing
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:14 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#153896
Give Award
Your art is gorgeous! <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:17 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#153897
Give Award
Wow I love it so much! The bottom one I like the most! I think the one right above it has a weirder, like, um.. how do I elaborate? The fire looks like a stock image, if you get what I mean, but it still looks amazing! That's all I can really find wrong with them, they look really pretty.

Edited at April 15, 2018 07:20 PM by Starset Acres
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:19 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
Posts: 6841
#153900
Give Award
Aww thanks everyone <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:20 PM


The Dark Arts
 
Posts: 101
#153902
Give Award
Excuse me? What? Improve? Oh my lord, dear I think you're mistaken, you can't possibly get better than your artwork! Astounding skills, I hope I can one day make art like yours! <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:28 PM


Helicon Show Horses
 
Posts: 3404
#153908
Give Award
Half of these I haven't seen before, Skye. I don't stalk you, lol, but dang. I think in general there are a few that have kind of awkward poses, like maybe you chose stock that wasn't quite right here or there. Specifically, I think the first photo is gorgeous except the front legs bother me because they're very strangely placed and possibly uneven to my perception and don't speak of movement, but the hind end is saying 'trot' to me. The same idea with the third from bottom, just an awkward looking pose to me, that's all.

Hopefully that helps. I'm not an artist, just an artist employer. ;P


Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:32 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
Posts: 6841
#153912
Give Award
Thanks Helicon and Celestrial!

Helicon, lol if the 3rd one from the bottom seems a tad awkward (specifically around the head/ shoulders) it may be because I had to reposition the head/neck a smidge. I'm still working on that xD

Edited at April 15, 2018 07:37 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
Posts: 4150
#153916
Give Award
Skye these are all absolutely stunning pieces! I am honestly loving each and every one of these and would die if I had talents even close to yours. You are a fantastic artist! One thing you could possibly work on is making sure you have consistent tail textures though? I see some of these pieces have absolutely flawless, smooth tails but a few such as 2, 8, and 10 seem to have rougher, unblended tails? Also as Helicon mentioned, there are just a few tiny details with leg positions and such that are a bit off. Other than that, you've got absolutely gorgeous art and a whole heap of talent! :D

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1    2    3    4 

Refresh