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FirstLightFarms
05:20:17 puck
Also holy shit how did you splash so fast
Dash and Duchess
05:20:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Puck, Oh no TOT
-
Wilf, this was versa's doing TOT
Sleepwalker Centre
05:20:00 Walker
lucky for you I need to stop throwing balloons at you bc the flash is giving me a headache
Wolf Dancer
05:19:57 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Puck sounds like a yes after triria starts lol
Wolf Dancer
05:19:38 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
Rude lol poor KPH won't be able to keep up lol
FirstLightFarms
05:19:30 puck
NO I'm trying to accept bonus prizes in my mail 😭😭
All Breeds
05:19:23 Fawn
How are y'all so far yeesh xD
Dash and Duchess
05:19:12 DD | ~Squizard~
How am i at #1 most splashed TOT
Wolf Dancer
05:19:00 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Puck
Are you needed to splashed too? lol
Dash and Duchess
05:18:38 DD | ~Squizard~
puck, XD check your mail >:D
Glacier Bay Cove
05:18:34 Arctic Katz
Also saving for RO
Sleepwalker Centre
05:18:21 Walker
puck,
why is your profile flashing at me
Lucky
05:17:07 luvky
i think that's me done, i need to save cash for RO and NOT spend it all on water balloons
FirstLightFarms
05:16:44 puck
As soon as I'm done making questions... it's 2 balloon 2 furious for y'all 😎 this is my favorite HEE event
Lucky
05:15:52 luvky
DD, i'm also attacking versa, the battle to get her to first is tough
Crestwood Eq.
05:15:48 Ivy / poison ivy
Yes team northhhhh
Crestwood Eq.
05:15:36 Ivy / poison ivy
Comes back briefly
Dash and Duchess
05:15:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Fawn, I'm at 1002 TOT
-
Versa, I'm coming for you XD
All Breeds
05:15:00 Fawn
139 times since I got off earlier. Y'all are brutal x.x
Sleepwalker Centre
05:14:56 Walker
>sits nearby innocently<

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FirstLightFarms
05:20:17 puck
Also holy shit how did you splash so fast
Dash and Duchess
05:20:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Puck, Oh no TOT
-
Wilf, this was versa's doing TOT
Sleepwalker Centre
05:20:00 Walker
lucky for you I need to stop throwing balloons at you bc the flash is giving me a headache
Wolf Dancer
05:19:57 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Puck sounds like a yes after triria starts lol
Wolf Dancer
05:19:38 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
Rude lol poor KPH won't be able to keep up lol
FirstLightFarms
05:19:30 puck
NO I'm trying to accept bonus prizes in my mail 😭😭
All Breeds
05:19:23 Fawn
How are y'all so far yeesh xD
Dash and Duchess
05:19:12 DD | ~Squizard~
How am i at #1 most splashed TOT
Wolf Dancer
05:19:00 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Puck
Are you needed to splashed too? lol
Dash and Duchess
05:18:38 DD | ~Squizard~
puck, XD check your mail >:D
Glacier Bay Cove
05:18:34 Arctic Katz
Also saving for RO
Sleepwalker Centre
05:18:21 Walker
puck,
why is your profile flashing at me
Lucky
05:17:07 luvky
i think that's me done, i need to save cash for RO and NOT spend it all on water balloons
FirstLightFarms
05:16:44 puck
As soon as I'm done making questions... it's 2 balloon 2 furious for y'all 😎 this is my favorite HEE event
Lucky
05:15:52 luvky
DD, i'm also attacking versa, the battle to get her to first is tough
Crestwood Eq.
05:15:48 Ivy / poison ivy
Yes team northhhhh
Crestwood Eq.
05:15:36 Ivy / poison ivy
Comes back briefly
Dash and Duchess
05:15:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Fawn, I'm at 1002 TOT
-
Versa, I'm coming for you XD
All Breeds
05:15:00 Fawn
139 times since I got off earlier. Y'all are brutal x.x
Sleepwalker Centre
05:14:56 Walker
>sits nearby innocently<

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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