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Lynx Glory
10:31:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx
although i have lots of bravery horses :')
Lynx Glory
10:31:23 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ah thank you i needed that lol. trying to collect maps myself, my luck at getting maps from explore is kinda trash
Elysium Opalus
10:26:13 anti gen ai
I got a bunch of maps from explore since my explore mares are too OP
Ill share some in the hidden falls if it lets me aa
Lynx Glory
10:25:11 ⛈ whisper/lynx
but i do get what you mean about wiping the shiny colours away. i agree with that lol
Elysium Opalus
10:24:54 anti gen ai
There could have been a no- varnish or no- pangare item but
You can reroll it off easy
Lynx Glory
10:24:21 ⛈ whisper/lynx
elysium
i don't really dislike roan, but sometimes i find varnish quite pretty
God is Mighty Stable
10:24:21 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Same, I don't like varnish very much
Lynx Glory
10:23:53 ⛈ whisper/lynx
willow and elysium
ohh okay makes sense
Elysium Opalus
10:23:50 anti gen ai
Personally I doht mind roans. But im not a varnish fan because it baically washed out shiny colors for my eyes, but thats my personal preference.
Elysium Opalus
10:22:44 anti gen ai
Because apparently it was a thing to not like roans in this game. The LB and gene pool was flooded with roans. Player preference basically, nothing bad to it lol
God is Mighty Stable
10:21:41 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Lynx
Some people really don't like roans would be my guess
Elysium Opalus
10:21:40 anti gen ai
Its giving end of FMC WP hidden falls dump

I love it
Let's flood the hidden falks here too eheheheh
Lynx Glory
10:20:56 ⛈ whisper/lynx
still dont get why non-roan captures exist TT
God is Mighty Stable
10:20:11 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
I dumped items as well
MakeEm Fancy
10:15:32 Ally 💜
Items dumped as well
Glacier Bay Cove
10:08:36 Arctic Katz
Okay, items dumped
Lynx Glory
10:04:09 ⛈ whisper/lynx
glacier
that's our cue!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:00:16 Arctic Katz
I am curious, which items will show up in the hidden falls next
Statesman
09:41:00 Sun's Spl TB's
I know Dx
Columet Farms
09:39:53 The Coffee Purist
Oh no she’s picky

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Lynx Glory
10:31:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx
although i have lots of bravery horses :')
Lynx Glory
10:31:23 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ah thank you i needed that lol. trying to collect maps myself, my luck at getting maps from explore is kinda trash
Elysium Opalus
10:26:13 anti gen ai
I got a bunch of maps from explore since my explore mares are too OP
Ill share some in the hidden falls if it lets me aa
Lynx Glory
10:25:11 ⛈ whisper/lynx
but i do get what you mean about wiping the shiny colours away. i agree with that lol
Elysium Opalus
10:24:54 anti gen ai
There could have been a no- varnish or no- pangare item but
You can reroll it off easy
Lynx Glory
10:24:21 ⛈ whisper/lynx
elysium
i don't really dislike roan, but sometimes i find varnish quite pretty
God is Mighty Stable
10:24:21 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Same, I don't like varnish very much
Lynx Glory
10:23:53 ⛈ whisper/lynx
willow and elysium
ohh okay makes sense
Elysium Opalus
10:23:50 anti gen ai
Personally I doht mind roans. But im not a varnish fan because it baically washed out shiny colors for my eyes, but thats my personal preference.
Elysium Opalus
10:22:44 anti gen ai
Because apparently it was a thing to not like roans in this game. The LB and gene pool was flooded with roans. Player preference basically, nothing bad to it lol
God is Mighty Stable
10:21:41 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Lynx
Some people really don't like roans would be my guess
Elysium Opalus
10:21:40 anti gen ai
Its giving end of FMC WP hidden falls dump

I love it
Let's flood the hidden falks here too eheheheh
Lynx Glory
10:20:56 ⛈ whisper/lynx
still dont get why non-roan captures exist TT
God is Mighty Stable
10:20:11 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
I dumped items as well
MakeEm Fancy
10:15:32 Ally 💜
Items dumped as well
Glacier Bay Cove
10:08:36 Arctic Katz
Okay, items dumped
Lynx Glory
10:04:09 ⛈ whisper/lynx
glacier
that's our cue!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:00:16 Arctic Katz
I am curious, which items will show up in the hidden falls next
Statesman
09:41:00 Sun's Spl TB's
I know Dx
Columet Farms
09:39:53 The Coffee Purist
Oh no she’s picky

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Art Critique July 1, 2018 08:21 PM

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Stunning! At least 40-50k
Art Critique July 1, 2018 08:25 PM

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I adore this! I would pay 35-50k. I think the hooves need a tad bit of fixing but other than that, amazing!
Art Critique July 1, 2018 08:35 PM


Chidori
 
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Thank you everyone<3 I'll make sure to work on your suggestions. Hopefully I can get some more examples soon:)
Art Critique July 1, 2018 08:45 PM


Charmed Acres
 
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Hi, just popping in to say that your mane and tail work in this is absolutely gorgeous! <3

But I'd definitely work on matching the background to the horse more, especially when you're putting out such high quality horses! Yes, as everyone else pointed out, the hooves definitely do need some attention, but there are tricks to hiding some little flaws like that until you've mastered them ;)

I would also really love to see a light source added and some more highlights on the horse, and possibly a faint outline to really bring the horse forward more from the background, since you didn't blur much of it (really, that's just artist preference though).

If this particular horse was on a different background with hidden or fixed hooves, I'd probably easily pay 80-100k for it. But this is just judging from the one image, and it really depends on if you can consistently put out this high caliber work on 80-90% of your pieces <3

I look forward to seeing what you can do in the future! This is seriously a great start!

EDIT: I didn't notice you have a second piece up there linked to DA. I think on that one, the mane and tail need the most work. They don't seem to "flow" as well as the first one does. But this is adorable and a super cute concept!
I'd also maybe sharpen the actual horse layer more to be as sharp as you have the mane and tail, and add more definition in the muzzle and face, and add some eye color for sure. This one also kind of needs a bit of an outline because the legs kind of blend together in a couple of places, and the current sharp edge of the neck stands out as too sharp to me and I'd like to see a little bit of a light color breaking up that sharp line.


Edited at July 1, 2018 08:51 PM by Charmed Acres
Art Critique July 1, 2018 10:38 PM


Chidori
 
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Charmed Acres said:
Hi, just popping in to say that your mane and tail work in this is absolutely gorgeous! <3

But I'd definitely work on matching the background to the horse more, especially when you're putting out such high quality horses! Yes, as everyone else pointed out, the hooves definitely do need some attention, but there are tricks to hiding some little flaws like that until you've mastered them ;)

I would also really love to see a light source added and some more highlights on the horse, and possibly a faint outline to really bring the horse forward more from the background, since you didn't blur much of it (really, that's just artist preference though).

If this particular horse was on a different background with hidden or fixed hooves, I'd probably easily pay 80-100k for it. But this is just judging from the one image, and it really depends on if you can consistently put out this high caliber work on 80-90% of your pieces <3

I look forward to seeing what you can do in the future! This is seriously a great start!

EDIT: I didn't notice you have a second piece up there linked to DA. I think on that one, the mane and tail need the most work. They don't seem to "flow" as well as the first one does. But this is adorable and a super cute concept!
I'd also maybe sharpen the actual horse layer more to be as sharp as you have the mane and tail, and add more definition in the muzzle and face, and add some eye color for sure. This one also kind of needs a bit of an outline because the legs kind of blend together in a couple of places, and the current sharp edge of the neck stands out as too sharp to me and I'd like to see a little bit of a light color breaking up that sharp line.



Wow thank you so much Charmed! I'm honored you gave me so many tips:) I love your art!
I definitely did more work on the first horses mane. The second one I used a much bigger brush so not as much detail there. I did notice that my second example the horse didn't really fit it or match the rest of the picture. I'll definitely try what you suggested. And keep them in mind when making more. My goal is to eventually make art worth 100k so everything is greatly appreciated:) I really needed a detailed list like this to help me think more about how to change a picture rather than just add to it. Thank you<3<3
Art Critique July 1, 2018 11:08 PM

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I love your style for the mane and tail! Everything is beautiful <3 I agree with previous comments about some of those tiny little technical details, but your art is really beautiful art all together. I also think that maybe 50-65K starting out would be a good price range judging off of the first piece which I can tell you really put a lot of work into. The 2nd one is pretty as well and I adore the concept, but the details look a little bit more rushed. Great job though! <3

Edited at July 1, 2018 11:09 PM by Blue Jay Designs
Art Critique July 2, 2018 11:31 AM


Chidori
 
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Blue Jay Designs said:
I love your style for the mane and tail! Everything is beautiful <3 I agree with previous comments about some of those tiny little technical details, but your art is really beautiful art all together. I also think that maybe 50-65K starting out would be a good price range judging off of the first piece which I can tell you really put a lot of work into. The 2nd one is pretty as well and I adore the concept, but the details look a little bit more rushed. Great job though! <3

Thank you for your opinion Blue Jay! Im glad that you see potential in my art it really encourages me to keep working on them. My second example was rushed for an art contest deadline. I guess its bad that you can tell XD But I like that I put up some art that needs help. Ive learned so much from you all!
Art Critique July 4, 2018 04:07 AM


Chidori
 
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OK! I made another piece and tried to listen to all of your suggestions so Id love to hear your opinions one more time. Also what you would pay for this one. I think it is much better quality than the previous two:) I stayed up all night making this one I was so excited how well it was turning out!

Here it is! https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=16110883
When I added this to my horse page the image is really small and you cant really see any detail. Can anyone please help me with this?

This link is to my DA page its probably better quality https://www.deviantart.com/davinab/art/Necrozma-HEE-752864254?ga_submit_new=10%3A1530692761

I did a ton of work to this piece. I really hope you all like it, Im proud:) Heres the original horse stock for you to compare https://www.deviantart.com/chunga-stock/art/E-Friesian-leaping-up-front-view-562790913
Art Critique July 4, 2018 04:36 AM


Skye's Paradise
 
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I agree on the mane and tail on the second example. Your third piece is awesome! I really love it! Love the forelock!! Keep up the great work. I'd pay 60-70k on this one. :)
Art Critique July 4, 2018 04:40 AM


Chidori
 
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Skye's Paradise said:
I agree on the mane and tail on the second example. Your third piece is awesome! I really love it! Love the forelock!! Keep up the great work. I'd pay 60-70k on this one. :)

Thank you! Much appreciated:)

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