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~Savy~
08:43:12 Sav
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Yessss
Sweet Valley
08:43:04 Anna/Jewel
Great rating, ANgel
Angels angels
08:42:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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I wish you had one more W but you dodged the sabino so I love you
Kaldwin Stud
08:41:47 Tano
Oh he's gonna be gorgeous, Lilly!
Minerva
08:41:35 Min
20 points to qualify I believe. Honestly no clue if he's a good contender to be honest- I never figured out AD feds so I gave up lol
Sweet Valley
08:41:23 Anna/Jewel
Thanks. Here's my rare color foal from this RO
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She's 1/1
Shamrock Equines
08:40:52 Crowley
Hey Lilly!
CWY country
08:40:34 C
Anna, they are all beautiful.
Red Horizon Ranch
08:40:05 Red
Also how many yearly points to they need to qualify?
Ranch Lands Training
08:40:03 Lilly/PON Addict
He looks gothic
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Sweet Valley
08:39:36 Anna/Jewel
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My top three rated from breeding this RO and 2 are fillies
Red Horizon Ranch
08:38:45 Red
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Okay thank you Min. Would he be a good one to enter then? Just leveled yesterday
Sweet Valley
08:38:32 Anna/Jewel
Well I don't wanna skip it cuz I need the ebs
Red Horizon Ranch
08:37:30 Red
Anna I usually skip that one but I actually did it for the first time this past capture day
Shamrock Equines
08:37:03 Crowley
Hey Toto!

Gem
Fine currently not with sick yorkie but mom said she is ok.
Minerva
08:36:54 Min
Red depends on where they are in the training "cycle". Best to enter ones that have just levelled i assume. I only enter feds with my SD futurities which are level 1 W geldings and they dont level in a month except the odd time theres 6 training weeks
CWY country
08:36:41 C
My top three best rated foals this month, and all fillies.
-HEE Click-
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Sweet Valley
08:35:29 Anna/Jewel
I'm loosing hope of ever completing this quest. "Capture a triple superb bay horse" It is worth 15k and all the horses i have caught are anything BUT bays
Snow Stable
08:32:36 Snow❆Gem
@ven

Neato!

@myth

Hello. I'm acheing on my left half today... O.o How are you and the sick yorkie?
WhizBar Eventing
08:32:12 Toto
So pretty ven <3

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~Savy~
08:43:12 Sav
-HEE Click-
Yessss
Sweet Valley
08:43:04 Anna/Jewel
Great rating, ANgel
Angels angels
08:42:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
I wish you had one more W but you dodged the sabino so I love you
Kaldwin Stud
08:41:47 Tano
Oh he's gonna be gorgeous, Lilly!
Minerva
08:41:35 Min
20 points to qualify I believe. Honestly no clue if he's a good contender to be honest- I never figured out AD feds so I gave up lol
Sweet Valley
08:41:23 Anna/Jewel
Thanks. Here's my rare color foal from this RO
-HEE Click-

She's 1/1
Shamrock Equines
08:40:52 Crowley
Hey Lilly!
CWY country
08:40:34 C
Anna, they are all beautiful.
Red Horizon Ranch
08:40:05 Red
Also how many yearly points to they need to qualify?
Ranch Lands Training
08:40:03 Lilly/PON Addict
He looks gothic
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
08:39:36 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

My top three rated from breeding this RO and 2 are fillies
Red Horizon Ranch
08:38:45 Red
-HEE Click-
Okay thank you Min. Would he be a good one to enter then? Just leveled yesterday
Sweet Valley
08:38:32 Anna/Jewel
Well I don't wanna skip it cuz I need the ebs
Red Horizon Ranch
08:37:30 Red
Anna I usually skip that one but I actually did it for the first time this past capture day
Shamrock Equines
08:37:03 Crowley
Hey Toto!

Gem
Fine currently not with sick yorkie but mom said she is ok.
Minerva
08:36:54 Min
Red depends on where they are in the training "cycle". Best to enter ones that have just levelled i assume. I only enter feds with my SD futurities which are level 1 W geldings and they dont level in a month except the odd time theres 6 training weeks
CWY country
08:36:41 C
My top three best rated foals this month, and all fillies.
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
08:35:29 Anna/Jewel
I'm loosing hope of ever completing this quest. "Capture a triple superb bay horse" It is worth 15k and all the horses i have caught are anything BUT bays
Snow Stable
08:32:36 Snow❆Gem
@ven

Neato!

@myth

Hello. I'm acheing on my left half today... O.o How are you and the sick yorkie?
WhizBar Eventing
08:32:12 Toto
So pretty ven <3

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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