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08:08:16 Snow❆Gem

My first ever homebred WWW mare died. :(

-HEE Click-

08:07:55 Kelan/Rain

Moonrise
With her being a WWE, I don't think it would go well since he needs high scope and she's unlikely to have that

08:07:00 Heyy it's Capp

Personally I would not do that match, you're mare is a WWE, she's going to be weakest in jumping traits and his scope is *low*

08:06:58 Kelan/Rain

Happy Monday

Moonrise Stables

08:05:41

-HEE Click-
how does this look?

08:04:34

Oh she's gorgeous, Solar

08:04:16

I think I may keep her for the chimmy...I'm just BUMMED

Embervale Acres

08:03:40 Solar Phoenix

She grew up so gorgeous 😍
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Bridgewater Farm

07:58:21 Undercover Merry

I didn't get any for literally ten real life years but the past year or so, I've captured a handful of W combos and EEEs, and one EWW

07:55:47 Anna/Jewel

I havent gotten any wilds with good rates

Bridgewater Farm

07:53:18 Undercover Merry

I know right!? Even for a wild, her training is a bit ridiculous for an EEE lol

07:52:45 Anna/Jewel

Glen- Well you are lucky cuz I haven't bred ANY Chimmys yet

07:52:34 Irish Capp

Wilds lol

Bridgewater Farm

07:52:12 Undercover Merry

What the absolute heck? -HEE Click-

Embervale Acres

07:51:10 Solar Phoenix

Um...guess I'm going to have to wait until her week 7 to see her strengths XD
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07:48:10

Oh I know, I'm just bummed lol

07:47:40 Anna/Jewel

So pretty, Glen.

The ratings are bad because her parents are wild. Wild horses usually have bad ratings and they pass that to their children.

07:46:02

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I've never had a chimera before...why are the ratings so badddddd

07:42:22 Ivy / poison ivy

Bye again xp

07:41:31 Ivy / poison ivy

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08:08:16 Snow❆Gem

My first ever homebred WWW mare died. :(

-HEE Click-

08:07:55 Kelan/Rain

Moonrise
With her being a WWE, I don't think it would go well since he needs high scope and she's unlikely to have that

08:07:00 Heyy it's Capp

Personally I would not do that match, you're mare is a WWE, she's going to be weakest in jumping traits and his scope is *low*

08:06:58 Kelan/Rain

Happy Monday

Moonrise Stables

08:05:41

-HEE Click-
how does this look?

08:04:34

Oh she's gorgeous, Solar

08:04:16

I think I may keep her for the chimmy...I'm just BUMMED

Embervale Acres

08:03:40 Solar Phoenix

She grew up so gorgeous 😍
-HEE Click-

Bridgewater Farm

07:58:21 Undercover Merry

I didn't get any for literally ten real life years but the past year or so, I've captured a handful of W combos and EEEs, and one EWW

07:55:47 Anna/Jewel

I havent gotten any wilds with good rates

Bridgewater Farm

07:53:18 Undercover Merry

I know right!? Even for a wild, her training is a bit ridiculous for an EEE lol

07:52:45 Anna/Jewel

Glen- Well you are lucky cuz I haven't bred ANY Chimmys yet

07:52:34 Irish Capp

Wilds lol

Bridgewater Farm

07:52:12 Undercover Merry

What the absolute heck? -HEE Click-

Embervale Acres

07:51:10 Solar Phoenix

Um...guess I'm going to have to wait until her week 7 to see her strengths XD
-HEE Click-

07:48:10

Oh I know, I'm just bummed lol

07:47:40 Anna/Jewel

So pretty, Glen.

The ratings are bad because her parents are wild. Wild horses usually have bad ratings and they pass that to their children.

07:46:02

-HEE Click-

I've never had a chimera before...why are the ratings so badddddd

07:42:22 Ivy / poison ivy

Bye again xp

07:41:31 Ivy / poison ivy

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January 29, 2023 11:14 AM

ShiningStar Stables

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This is one of my more recent pieces, and I want some critique on it! I really want to improve, so rip it apart!

January 29, 2023 06:25 PM

Rivendell Steeds

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Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

January 29, 2023 07:09 PM

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I know some great mane tutorials I can send you if you'd like. I've seen white horses with black hair on this game, I think the mane just has too many strands and not enough movement. I'd love to share the tutorials that helped me. Just PM me!

January 29, 2023 07:17 PM

Bellbird Estate

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I agree here

Rivendell Steeds said:

Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

also, I would lower the saturation so the horse doesn't have a green hue, since it's standing over ice not grass.

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