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10:34:09 Ivy / poison ivy

i dont know but i need RO

FireStallionStables

10:34:05 FSS/Fire

-HEE Click-
FSS Pink Pony Club

10:32:09 [1k+ brindles] Angel

How is there still a week before RO .-.

10:23:16 Ivy / poison ivy

snitch

im studying too lol

Snitches' Stitches

10:19:49 Snitch

Ivy
lol. I'm like half on cause I'm supposed to be studying before my class

10:17:49 Ivy / poison ivy

wylder and i have run out of things to talk about...

10:16:02 Ivy / poison ivy

My people are here!

10:15:36 Ivy / poison ivy

Snitch!!!!!

Snitches' Stitches

10:15:18 Snitch

Hi Ivy!

10:12:28 Ivy / poison ivy

We have xD

10:11:42 Ivy / poison ivy

does anyone want me to tell wylder hi for them

Calela Eventing

10:11:29 Cali

We have! I'll be on and off for the rest of the day as well.

10:10:32 Lily/Alpine

We've been very consistent lately xD
I'll be back, just popping out to get a hot water bottle from our neighbour

10:10:30 Ivy / poison ivy

Cali

^^

LILYYY

Calela Eventing

10:10:10 Cali

Ivy
Oop, forgot about that

10:09:54 Lily/Alpine

Kudos, ooooh a bloody shoulder! Pretty :)

10:09:37 Ivy / poison ivy

Yay!

watch all caps cali

Calela Eventing

10:09:21 Cali

TRIOOO

Kudos

10:09:20 finnyyy

-HEE Click- luck with capture wow, what a beauty

10:07:05 Ivy / poison ivy

hiiiiii triooooo

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10:34:09 Ivy / poison ivy

i dont know but i need RO

FireStallionStables

10:34:05 FSS/Fire

-HEE Click-
FSS Pink Pony Club

10:32:09 [1k+ brindles] Angel

How is there still a week before RO .-.

10:23:16 Ivy / poison ivy

snitch

im studying too lol

Snitches' Stitches

10:19:49 Snitch

Ivy
lol. I'm like half on cause I'm supposed to be studying before my class

10:17:49 Ivy / poison ivy

wylder and i have run out of things to talk about...

10:16:02 Ivy / poison ivy

My people are here!

10:15:36 Ivy / poison ivy

Snitch!!!!!

Snitches' Stitches

10:15:18 Snitch

Hi Ivy!

10:12:28 Ivy / poison ivy

We have xD

10:11:42 Ivy / poison ivy

does anyone want me to tell wylder hi for them

Calela Eventing

10:11:29 Cali

We have! I'll be on and off for the rest of the day as well.

10:10:32 Lily/Alpine

We've been very consistent lately xD
I'll be back, just popping out to get a hot water bottle from our neighbour

10:10:30 Ivy / poison ivy

Cali

^^

LILYYY

Calela Eventing

10:10:10 Cali

Ivy
Oop, forgot about that

10:09:54 Lily/Alpine

Kudos, ooooh a bloody shoulder! Pretty :)

10:09:37 Ivy / poison ivy

Yay!

watch all caps cali

Calela Eventing

10:09:21 Cali

TRIOOO

Kudos

10:09:20 finnyyy

-HEE Click- luck with capture wow, what a beauty

10:07:05 Ivy / poison ivy

hiiiiii triooooo

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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#106543
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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#106698
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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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