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Glacier Bay Cove

08:13:41 Arctic Katz

YAY, getting better at not throwing all of my Ebs away in the store

Lynx Glory

07:53:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx

glacier
ooh yes xD my mom would love to have one too lol. her favourite bird species

Glacier Bay Cove

07:53:04 Arctic Katz

I would love to have a pet hummingbird

Lynx Glory

07:53:02 ⛈ whisper/lynx

but it's just not a reality for us and our home. too small, and we would prefer a large home where birds can still fly.

Lynx Glory

07:52:32 ⛈ whisper/lynx

i've always wanted a green cheeked conure and a tiel lol

Versailles

07:50:15 Versa

Ivy,
She's a green cheek conure. Conures are pretty loud. Not nearly as bad as sun conures, though lol

Wisteria Run Farm

07:49:55 Solar/Ria

Well, at least KNNs seem to like being good at Dressage lol
-HEE Click-

Crestwood Eq.

07:44:02 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

What type of bird is Icarus?

Kaldwin Stud

07:43:03 Tano

Aww I miss having tiels. My last one passed when I was 17 and I decided it wasn't really practical to get another and try to find a rental that would accept birds. So I've been 7 years without but I really miss having them around

Versailles

07:40:31 Versa

I mean, tiels aren't too noisy. They rarely scream. It's Icarus mostly

Crestwood Eq.

07:37:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

oh dear. must be loud

Versailles

07:35:51 Versa

Ivy,
Currently riled up, got a bunch of thunderstorm and flood warnings. They're not pleased with the thunder lol

Hummingbird Meadows

07:34:21 Bird

Honestly his favorite toy is a pool noodle. XD

Crestwood Eq.

07:33:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

how are the birds?

Versailles

07:32:57 Versa

Hi Ivy :)

Hummingbird Meadows

07:32:54 Bird

He does like the laser. I want to take him outside, but it's been so hot.

Crestwood Eq.

07:32:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa!

Versailles

07:32:22 Versa

Oh god, just make sure it's not rechargeable

Glacier Bay Cove

07:31:49 Arctic Katz

How about a battery operated laser pointer, would he like that

Hummingbird Meadows

07:30:40 Bird

@Glacier, no. I try to use a teaser wand and play with him, but he's not super interested

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Glacier Bay Cove

08:13:41 Arctic Katz

YAY, getting better at not throwing all of my Ebs away in the store

Lynx Glory

07:53:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx

glacier
ooh yes xD my mom would love to have one too lol. her favourite bird species

Glacier Bay Cove

07:53:04 Arctic Katz

I would love to have a pet hummingbird

Lynx Glory

07:53:02 ⛈ whisper/lynx

but it's just not a reality for us and our home. too small, and we would prefer a large home where birds can still fly.

Lynx Glory

07:52:32 ⛈ whisper/lynx

i've always wanted a green cheeked conure and a tiel lol

Versailles

07:50:15 Versa

Ivy,
She's a green cheek conure. Conures are pretty loud. Not nearly as bad as sun conures, though lol

Wisteria Run Farm

07:49:55 Solar/Ria

Well, at least KNNs seem to like being good at Dressage lol
-HEE Click-

Crestwood Eq.

07:44:02 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

What type of bird is Icarus?

Kaldwin Stud

07:43:03 Tano

Versailles

07:40:31 Versa

I mean, tiels aren't too noisy. They rarely scream. It's Icarus mostly

Crestwood Eq.

07:37:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

oh dear. must be loud

Versailles

07:35:51 Versa

Ivy,
Currently riled up, got a bunch of thunderstorm and flood warnings. They're not pleased with the thunder lol

Hummingbird Meadows

07:34:21 Bird

Honestly his favorite toy is a pool noodle. XD

Crestwood Eq.

07:33:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

how are the birds?

Versailles

07:32:57 Versa

Hi Ivy :)

Hummingbird Meadows

07:32:54 Bird

He does like the laser. I want to take him outside, but it's been so hot.

Crestwood Eq.

07:32:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa!

Versailles

07:32:22 Versa

Oh god, just make sure it's not rechargeable

Glacier Bay Cove

07:31:49 Arctic Katz

How about a battery operated laser pointer, would he like that

Hummingbird Meadows

07:30:40 Bird

@Glacier, no. I try to use a teaser wand and play with him, but he's not super interested

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Critique

July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

Former Stable

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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#206055
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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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