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 God is Mighty Stable
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500 start on WEE combos
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Vancouver
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Autumn is coming!
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Sterling Stables
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RFS Thoroughbreds
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Galaxy Art Auciton
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Port Royal Equines
11:51:19 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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PPP+ brave mares at auction for 1k! Only a few hours left to bid.

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EEE mares for sale for 7k!

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Glacier Bay Farms
11:40:56 Arctic Katz
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DragonFyre Estate
11:14:50 Whip
Clearout auction. WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
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Hunter Estate
11:06:30 
Accepting offers on these WWW SH mares. Pm me
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Bug in a Rug
10:52:25 Flo
Capture party clearout! 500 ebs start
PEE+
Some EEE-E
Possible bravery, not yet rated
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 Fluffy's Cosy Home
12:23:43 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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 God is Mighty Stable
12:14:48 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
Hot auction

500 start on WEE combos
ends soon
Vancouver
12:03:55 Ana
Autumn is coming!
-HEE Click-
Sterling Stables
11:58:59 
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:54:50 TB'S / T3 Artist
Galaxy Art Auciton
SB is 50
Get it before its gone
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
11:51:19 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
PPP+ brave mares at auction for 1k! Only a few hours left to bid.

-HEE Click-
EEE mares for sale for 7k!

-HEE Click-
Shiny EWW ISH Broods! Y194.
Glacier Bay Farms
11:40:56 Arctic Katz
For sale -HEE Click- for 320 ebs
DragonFyre Estate
11:14:50 Whip
Clearout auction. WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
-HEE Click-
Hunter Estate
11:06:30 
Accepting offers on these WWW SH mares. Pm me
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Bug in a Rug
10:52:25 Flo
Capture party clearout! 500 ebs start
PEE+
Some EEE-E
Possible bravery, not yet rated
Will be set free
-HEE Click-

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Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:51 PM

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This is my latest. I actually smudged it! And I think it turned out good BUT that is just me. If you think there is anything that would have made this better/ you would change PLEASE (!) let me know!


Edited at March 14, 2018 01:51 PM by Ruby Quater Horses
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:54 PM

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You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:56 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

Thank you! Will remember all that an the next one! xD
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 02:00 PM

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The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 02:07 PM

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Midnight storm Arce said:
The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

OK thank you!

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