Critique and my own faults.

Rumble submission round 2

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I doubt it would've made much of a difference.

I honestly didn't know really edit an image. I kind of have a hard time reading at times. Mainly focus.

What I submitted vs what I could of Submitted. My fault for not trying really.

Anyways, given the before and after what could of I have done to make the orginal more appealing without adding a background?

More spiders?

Better shading/lighting?

Better appealing coat color?

Better markings?

More Webs?

Darker?

The other

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Actual submission