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Port Royal Equines
09:25:53 Elfie
I plan on having arts made for my other fewspot OC eventually.
Port Royal Equines
09:25:09 Elfie
TheLastApostate on Deviant.
Galloping_Gems
09:22:27 Gemstone
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Why is the dun such a good combo with a golden color?
Imperial Warmbloods
09:21:04 Imp/Impie/Impy
I second that question, >3<
Blue Diamond
09:20:00 Bluey
Elfie
Love those! Who's the artist?
Imperial Warmbloods
09:19:51 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ Elfie
Whoa, that`s so pretty, o.o
Port Royal Equines
09:17:00 Elfie
The quality looks like crap as an avatar but if anyone wants to see the full image it's posted to my profile. :3
starmutt
09:15:12 marsh 🌈
pupper :D
Port Royal Equines
09:14:34 Elfie
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Cleo got arts.
Insignia Elites
09:12:55 Em

EWE and world class bravery <3 how lucky!
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Blue Diamond
09:12:20 Bluey
Looking for someone to help match a couple of my mares! PM me!
Blue Diamond
09:11:44 Bluey
Congrats, Peep!
Sunni
09:11:41 Sunni bunny
Anyone ever watch when the wind blows?
Pony Loving Pons
09:10:57 Peep/sam
And I got cheesecake, I vote it as better xD
Pony Loving Pons
09:10:08 Peep/sam
Thanks!
Glacier Bay Cove
09:09:03 Arctic Katz
Congratulations, Sam
Pony Loving Pons
09:07:21 Peep/sam
I got a boyfriend 😁
MakeEm Fancy
09:04:51 Ally 💜
Come match mine XD @Angels
Angels angels
08:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh geez week 4s are monday
Angels angels
08:55:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel
All my mares are matched. I just need to start buying items and straws lol
Except one mare is still week 3

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Port Royal Equines
09:25:53 Elfie
I plan on having arts made for my other fewspot OC eventually.
Port Royal Equines
09:25:09 Elfie
TheLastApostate on Deviant.
Galloping_Gems
09:22:27 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Why is the dun such a good combo with a golden color?
Imperial Warmbloods
09:21:04 Imp/Impie/Impy
I second that question, >3<
Blue Diamond
09:20:00 Bluey
Elfie
Love those! Who's the artist?
Imperial Warmbloods
09:19:51 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ Elfie
Whoa, that`s so pretty, o.o
Port Royal Equines
09:17:00 Elfie
The quality looks like crap as an avatar but if anyone wants to see the full image it's posted to my profile. :3
starmutt
09:15:12 marsh 🌈
pupper :D
Port Royal Equines
09:14:34 Elfie
-HEE Click-
Cleo got arts.
Insignia Elites
09:12:55 Em

EWE and world class bravery <3 how lucky!
-HEE Click-
Blue Diamond
09:12:20 Bluey
Looking for someone to help match a couple of my mares! PM me!
Blue Diamond
09:11:44 Bluey
Congrats, Peep!
Sunni
09:11:41 Sunni bunny
Anyone ever watch when the wind blows?
Pony Loving Pons
09:10:57 Peep/sam
And I got cheesecake, I vote it as better xD
Pony Loving Pons
09:10:08 Peep/sam
Thanks!
Glacier Bay Cove
09:09:03 Arctic Katz
Congratulations, Sam
Pony Loving Pons
09:07:21 Peep/sam
I got a boyfriend 😁
MakeEm Fancy
09:04:51 Ally 💜
Come match mine XD @Angels
Angels angels
08:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh geez week 4s are monday
Angels angels
08:55:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel
All my mares are matched. I just need to start buying items and straws lol
Except one mare is still week 3

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Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:20 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Hello! Some of you already know me^^ it's me Dark! I've been making art for a long time and unfortunately worked on a very old, laggy iPad. Now that I have a new iPad, I'm open to learning!!
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I am open to criticism and help!
I am also interested in:
how much is it worth?
Tier?
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old art is in my gallery

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:29 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:21 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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latest art to criticize

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:24 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:38 AM


Gem
 
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Hi!!!! I LOVE this piece!!!!! I saw it on Imp's stable a few days ago and was just blown away. I adore the contrast and the lighting and the drama. It's truly stunning and I would totally steal it. I had to stare for a bit to find anything to critique haha!!! ❤️
A few little things:
  • Looking at the jewelry on the tail, the cuffs should be casting a very small shadow on the horse to illustrate that they're not just markings. Along the same point, the cuff closer to the base of the tail, there is hair growing out of it. Logically I think the hair would be trapped inside the cuff? So maybe erase the few strands there. And if I'm totally misinterpreting it and they are meant to be markings, please ignore lol
  • As I mentioned, I adore the lighting. It makes it super dramatic and just gorgeous. The only spot I would adjust slightly is the chest/front shoulder. It seems unnaturally light when the direct light source is on the opposite side of the horse.
  • Because the background is so vibrant and green, I think it would make sense to have a bit more of that color incorporated/cast onto the horse. However, for this piece it feels like more of a stylistic choice and would work either way.
  • Last tiny thing, looking at where the tail docks to the horse's rump, I feel like the rump should be in front of the base of the tail. Meaning that there should be some sort of shading making a distinction between the two areas with shading rather than a direct connection. If this doesn't make sense I'd be happy to sketch what I mean.

    Lots of love!!! ❤️
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:45 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you^^
First art on the new ipad - a lot of work go get better but ur tips are awesome as always^^
Gem!
oh and yea they are fur markings not jewelry but thank you!^^

Edited at January 31, 2025 10:48 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 11:54 AM


Gem
 
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Okay haha!! I would suggest maybe making the tail markings less shiny then so they don't look quite so metallic but they're still super cool :D
You're most welcome 🥰
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 04:46 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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new art for Criticism and price help!
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Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:15 AM


Gem
 
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Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:19 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you for always being here XD^^
I only do the black for the vampire - the dark atmosphere is supposed to make it a little creepier ^^
and yeah - hair is my biggest problem ;C

Gem said:
Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3



Edited at February 8, 2025 11:20 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:21 AM


Wolf Dancer
 
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So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:22 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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<3 <3

Wolf Dancer said:
So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!



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