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Ooo I got a Wc bravery girl
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Ironhorse
02:39:39 Sting
Wrong time to start a new Stable.
I need some more EBS for capture day lol.
Waiting for maps to roll around in the store
Opal Equestrian Park
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I'm making a blooket about HEE! It's currently in progress, and I made sure I only used pics I screenshotted from my account(s)
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Hey, do any of you guys play blooket?
Maco Stables
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Boulder Creek
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Until about 12 pm game time
Maco Stables
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Is the capture party still going?
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Haha NOW I get a capture 5 SSS quest 🤣 Looks like I'll be doing a few more then lol
Honey Moon
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I think this is my best capture. Of course it's roan
MANIA
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ok cool, tysm! :)
Honey Moon
01:58:32 Honey
Ah very nice Tosk
Kodiak Valley
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Oop I misunderstood lol
Honey Moon
01:58:17 Honey
Most horses will show their weakness week 4, unless they are all up already. But by week 5 they should be all up, ideally.
Dirty Paws
01:57:23 ♘Tosk
The rid is a plain Jane but the wub is Ee aa prlprl
Dirty Paws
01:57:02 ♘Tosk
A www rid mare and a www wub mare
MANIA
01:56:23 
training wont show their weaknesses until week 5 right? or should i see a difference at week 4
The Unknown
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Got a couple patterned EEE TBs and that's it
Blue Wolf Ranch
01:54:53 Bison | Blue
Dang got a WPP mare
Blue Wolf Ranch
01:54:23 Bison | Blue
Let's go! Gotten 1 EEE KNN mare so far
Honey Moon
01:53:07 Honey
What breed Tosk?

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ZequineZ
02:43:20 ZEZ - ZZ
Ooo I got a Wc bravery girl
-HEE Click-
Ironhorse
02:39:39 Sting
Wrong time to start a new Stable.
I need some more EBS for capture day lol.
Waiting for maps to roll around in the store
Opal Equestrian Park
02:36:46 ~Opal~
I'm making a blooket about HEE! It's currently in progress, and I made sure I only used pics I screenshotted from my account(s)
Opal Equestrian Park
02:34:28 ~Opal~
Hey, do any of you guys play blooket?
Maco Stables
02:22:13 Maco
Ok, thanks!
Boulder Creek
02:21:16 
Until about 12 pm game time
Maco Stables
02:16:46 Maco
Is the capture party still going?
Minerva
02:10:39 Min
Haha NOW I get a capture 5 SSS quest 🤣 Looks like I'll be doing a few more then lol
Honey Moon
01:59:13 Honey
-HEE Click-
I think this is my best capture. Of course it's roan
MANIA
01:58:32 
ok cool, tysm! :)
Honey Moon
01:58:32 Honey
Ah very nice Tosk
Kodiak Valley
01:58:24 Grimm(us)
Oop I misunderstood lol
Honey Moon
01:58:17 Honey
Most horses will show their weakness week 4, unless they are all up already. But by week 5 they should be all up, ideally.
Dirty Paws
01:57:23 ♘Tosk
The rid is a plain Jane but the wub is Ee aa prlprl
Dirty Paws
01:57:02 ♘Tosk
A www rid mare and a www wub mare
MANIA
01:56:23 
training wont show their weaknesses until week 5 right? or should i see a difference at week 4
The Unknown
01:55:17 Unknown | Dark
Got a couple patterned EEE TBs and that's it
Blue Wolf Ranch
01:54:53 Bison | Blue
Dang got a WPP mare
Blue Wolf Ranch
01:54:23 Bison | Blue
Let's go! Gotten 1 EEE KNN mare so far
Honey Moon
01:53:07 Honey
What breed Tosk?

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 10:06 AM


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Click Here for the Google doc
Chapters posted: 26 / 26

This book was self-published in Hungary, 7 years ago, when I was 17. The publisher has no problem with me translating it into English and sharing it online. That being said the translation is far from perfect, and there might be certain lines in there that work for me (because I see it in Hungarian also) but won't work for native English speakers. (I'd be more than happy if these were pointed out by the way.)

The book is more like a self-healing story than directed at the general public. It's also kind of like a diary from that time while I was writing. Many real life events are placed into it with a few twists. The story is about a 17 year-old girl, in high school, who has a fear of crowds and social anxiety. She's a gamer, spends most of her time alone trying to be as invisible as possible, until a certain person suddenly enters her life and turns it upside down. The book shows her struggle against her fears and emotions, with a touch of fantasy.

Since this is a completely finished work which is well in my past I am not looking for critisism of any kind. You're more than welcome to share your opinion though!

I will try my best to update regularly. I have to go through the translation one more time before posting to check for errors and to make the formatting in the Google doc. I will post here when a new chapter is up.


Edited at May 21, 2021 01:14 PM by HRS
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 11:17 AM


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ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 12:23 PM


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Yay, I'm glad you like it! :D

Thistleberry Farm said:
ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!


The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 04:29 PM

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 06:17 PM


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Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3

Edited at April 18, 2021 06:17 PM by FirstLightFarms
The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:08 AM


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I'm happy to hear you like it ^^ Thank you for reading <3

FirstLightFarms said:
Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3


The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:31 AM


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I added 3 more chapters :D
The Soul of Music April 22, 2021 08:50 AM


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I added 2 more chapers.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 11:04 AM


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New chapters added.
At the time I was writing I didn't notice that the number 9 was skipped at numbering the chapters, and the book was published without a chapter 9 as well. So I kept this little twist here too. Don't worry, nothing is missing from the story, the only thing that was skipped is the chapter number.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 05:29 PM


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I really like how these plots are starting to get twisted around each other!

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