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Sunni

12:51:13 Sunni bunny

Wild that's a pretty decent catch right there.

Wild_Potatoes

12:39:12

-HEE Click-
Woah

Boulder Creek

12:39:10

The dapples are so pretty on the dunskin
-HEE Click-

Cozmic Elite

12:38:35 CƐ

Fair enough

Alpine Acres

12:37:09 Lily/Alpine

Cozmic
I name my mares after mythological goddesses and everyone else just gets a name that fits whatever mood I'm in that day xD

Cozmic Elite

12:36:03 CƐ

Lilly, most of my horses are either their ID numbers or something Silly Lol

Alpine Acres

12:35:21 Lily/Alpine

Cozmic
loll, I hate naming horses because I'm so indecisive xD

Cozmic Elite

12:34:03 CƐ

-HEE Click-
Naming skills 0/10 ;)

Alpine Acres

12:33:26 Lily/Alpine

Witchy
I'll drive by your stable with him if he keeps up with his current behaviour xD

KPH Equestrian

12:32:38 Rapcoon | Jester

just a few xD

Nightfall Dressage

12:31:45 Witchy

Lily
I'll steal him from you lol I need to add more boys to my string

Lucky

12:29:59 luvky

kph
that might be a couple capture passes XD

Alpine Acres

12:28:51 Lily/Alpine

-12500 in profits today, if he keeps up with this it's the glue factory -_-
-HEE Click-

Lilac Fields

12:10:13 Lillie

-HEE Click-
FINALLY an EEE Stallion with WC bravery🥹

Cozmic Elite

12:00:28 CƐ

Insane

KPH Equestrian

11:58:20 Rapcoon | Jester

322 whole capture passes xD

Cozmic Elite

11:51:50 CƐ

Has anyone looked at hidden falls recently?

Boulder Creek

11:39:47

Would it be similar to this one for in-game genetics?
-HEE Click-

Or more a real world using genetic testing and all the complicated language that corelate between coat color and genes?
I'm in an Equine Coat Genetics group on FB and that goes over my head sometimes.
I need the #ExplainItToMeLikeI'mFive version

KPH Equestrian

11:37:40 Rapcoon | Jester

Ants have gotten into my room. This means war. I've placed a concoction of borax, sugar, and warm water where I lost my lolipop to the buggers, we'll see how they like that >:)

pandemoniu_m

11:35:39 pheezy

speaking of guides im debating making updated genetics/color profiles/patterns guides with pictures now that ive been studying it so much in-game and for my irl stock

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Sunni

12:51:13 Sunni bunny

Wild that's a pretty decent catch right there.

Wild_Potatoes

12:39:12

-HEE Click-
Woah

Boulder Creek

12:39:10

The dapples are so pretty on the dunskin
-HEE Click-

Cozmic Elite

12:38:35 CƐ

Fair enough

Alpine Acres

12:37:09 Lily/Alpine

Cozmic
I name my mares after mythological goddesses and everyone else just gets a name that fits whatever mood I'm in that day xD

Cozmic Elite

12:36:03 CƐ

Lilly, most of my horses are either their ID numbers or something Silly Lol

Alpine Acres

12:35:21 Lily/Alpine

Cozmic
loll, I hate naming horses because I'm so indecisive xD

Cozmic Elite

12:34:03 CƐ

-HEE Click-
Naming skills 0/10 ;)

Alpine Acres

12:33:26 Lily/Alpine

Witchy
I'll drive by your stable with him if he keeps up with his current behaviour xD

KPH Equestrian

12:32:38 Rapcoon | Jester

just a few xD

Nightfall Dressage

12:31:45 Witchy

Lily
I'll steal him from you lol I need to add more boys to my string

Lucky

12:29:59 luvky

kph
that might be a couple capture passes XD

Alpine Acres

12:28:51 Lily/Alpine

-12500 in profits today, if he keeps up with this it's the glue factory -_-
-HEE Click-

Lilac Fields

12:10:13 Lillie

-HEE Click-
FINALLY an EEE Stallion with WC bravery🥹

Cozmic Elite

12:00:28 CƐ

Insane

KPH Equestrian

11:58:20 Rapcoon | Jester

322 whole capture passes xD

Cozmic Elite

11:51:50 CƐ

Has anyone looked at hidden falls recently?

Boulder Creek

11:39:47

KPH Equestrian

11:37:40 Rapcoon | Jester

Ants have gotten into my room. This means war. I've placed a concoction of borax, sugar, and warm water where I lost my lolipop to the buggers, we'll see how they like that >:)

pandemoniu_m

11:35:39 pheezy

speaking of guides im debating making updated genetics/color profiles/patterns guides with pictures now that ive been studying it so much in-game and for my irl stock

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Critique

March 25, 2019 02:45 PM

Zephyr Elites

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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

*Click for better quality*

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites

Critique

March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)

Critique

March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

Former Stable

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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.

For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.

Critique

March 29, 2019 04:30 PM

Cedar Brook

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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡

Critique

April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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