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Aerospace Equines

04:40:34 Aero's AAs

EEE fb filly.
(EWE x PWE)
-HEE Click-

03:57:13 Potato

-HEE Click-
Tons of E, EE, EEE combo foals and one W comb for cheap sale. Less then 3,100$ releasing soon

03:22:42 Echo <3

WWW SH Svenned colt out of MF Jett for sale
-HEE Click-

Hazardous Ranch

02:17:42 LF:Brindles/Chimeras

Dash and Duchess

01:46:53 T1 Artist, W+ seller

Desperately seeking a tesoro straw!!

Port Royal Equines

01:29:05 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!

-HEE Click-
Brindle, Bravery, and Geldings for sale! I need em gone ASAP. All cheap.

MANIA

01:25:31

EEE TB stallion for breeding - need EEP of any combo to breed, known EE producer and EEE.

$500
-HEE Click-

Platinum Plaits

01:20:13 Payton

Or see: -HEE Click-

Platinum Plaits

01:17:45 Payton

All EEW-EWW stallion sale! Many with rare colours, including a 1/1!
-HEE Click-

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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