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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Dreamtide Stables

04:15:28

@Grace it means only 5 other horses have the same written description for their color! So if you are breeding for color rarity then yes, its good!

God is Mighty Stable

04:15:03 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

downpour*

God is Mighty Stable

04:14:54 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Gem
Oh, no! It was pouring today like crazy. Flooded my poor goats shelter. I had to move them to the barn in the cold downpoor, O-O

Gemstone Stable

04:13:31 Snow❆Gem

@willow

I've been sick for days. Not fun. >.<

04:13:04 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Grace, its a nice colour rarity

God is Mighty Stable

04:12:16 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Gem
How are you doing?

Gemstone Stable

04:11:47 Snow❆Gem

@willow

Yes, but I have to leave very shortly.

04:11:45

Is a 1 out of 6 in breeding approvals for color good for a mare just curious

God is Mighty Stable

04:09:29 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Gem you still on?

Gemstone Stable

04:07:52 Snow❆Gem

@min

;P

@eve

Looks like its not coming up anymore. :D Thank you!

Minerva

04:05:39 Min

Lol fair enough Gem

Gemstone Stable

04:05:24 Snow❆Gem

@eve

Lady of the hour! I'll try again. :)

04:04:42 evebot

I put a fix in. See if you still get that error when switching chats. If you do, then please make a forum bug report.

Gemstone Stable

04:04:17 Snow❆Gem

@min

Well, if you don't have the size barns/pastures. and if the numbers are kinda all over the place, its harder on me brain. lol ;P

Gemstone Stable

04:03:18 Snow❆Gem

@anna

:)

Minerva

04:03:05 Min

It says how many horses are in the barns though, so you can work it out from that

04:02:11 Anna/Jewel

Gem- I agree

Gemstone Stable

04:00:15 Snow❆Gem

I wish the button for 'Display barns' on your horses page told you how many stall spaces you have left. I have to go to my home page to look now. :(

Gemstone Stable

03:58:54 Snow❆Gem

@min

Yupper.

Minerva

03:58:30 Min

Oh yikes, yeah I've no idea what that's about!

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Dreamtide Stables

04:15:28

@Grace it means only 5 other horses have the same written description for their color! So if you are breeding for color rarity then yes, its good!

God is Mighty Stable

04:15:03 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

downpour*

God is Mighty Stable

04:14:54 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Gem
Oh, no! It was pouring today like crazy. Flooded my poor goats shelter. I had to move them to the barn in the cold downpoor, O-O

Gemstone Stable

04:13:31 Snow❆Gem

@willow

I've been sick for days. Not fun. >.<

04:13:04 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Grace, its a nice colour rarity

God is Mighty Stable

04:12:16 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Gem
How are you doing?

Gemstone Stable

04:11:47 Snow❆Gem

@willow

Yes, but I have to leave very shortly.

04:11:45

Is a 1 out of 6 in breeding approvals for color good for a mare just curious

God is Mighty Stable

04:09:29 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Gem you still on?

Gemstone Stable

04:07:52 Snow❆Gem

@min

;P

@eve

Looks like its not coming up anymore. :D Thank you!

Minerva

04:05:39 Min

Lol fair enough Gem

Gemstone Stable

04:05:24 Snow❆Gem

@eve

Lady of the hour! I'll try again. :)

04:04:42 evebot

I put a fix in. See if you still get that error when switching chats. If you do, then please make a forum bug report.

Gemstone Stable

04:04:17 Snow❆Gem

@min

Well, if you don't have the size barns/pastures. and if the numbers are kinda all over the place, its harder on me brain. lol ;P

Gemstone Stable

04:03:18 Snow❆Gem

@anna

:)

Minerva

04:03:05 Min

It says how many horses are in the barns though, so you can work it out from that

04:02:11 Anna/Jewel

Gem- I agree

Gemstone Stable

04:00:15 Snow❆Gem

I wish the button for 'Display barns' on your horses page told you how many stall spaces you have left. I have to go to my home page to look now. :(

Gemstone Stable

03:58:54 Snow❆Gem

@min

Yupper.

Minerva

03:58:30 Min

Oh yikes, yeah I've no idea what that's about!

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January 20, 2020 02:26 PM

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I've been doing a bit of art lafter watching jellos join.me, so I would love for people to critique it! (Mods, will not be sold, auctioned, or used.)

January 20, 2020 02:29 PM

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I'm no artist, but maybe more contrast in the first? They all are so lovely!

January 20, 2020 02:31 PM

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Mysterious Echoes said:

I'm no artist, but maybe more contrast in the first? They all are so lovely!

Thank you!

January 21, 2020 03:16 PM

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For the second one, the shadow doesn't seem to line up right with the light source. These are all beautiful, though, absolutely lovely.

January 21, 2020 04:43 PM

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White Crown Stables said:

For the second one, the shadow doesn't seem to line up right with the light source. These are all beautiful, though, absolutely lovely.

Thank you! I'll remember that on my next piece.

January 21, 2020 04:47 PM

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I would also love critique on this piece

February 3, 2020 12:03 AM

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personally i would go thicker on some strands of hair and just keep practicing hair movement. For me i like to go on youtube and search horses in slow motion so i can see the way their hair moves in different ways:) your art is gorgeous though and i love the concepts

February 3, 2020 12:04 AM

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also if youre interested i would LOVE to do a collab with you:DDD

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