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Tao
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Secretariat Ranch
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Desperately seeking Tesoro straw!!
Port Royal Equines
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Forgot the link - Geldings.
Port Royal Equines
01:59:07 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
Iso 50pk rerolls.

Dozens of Lvl 6+ Geldings for 4k!

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Bravery mares, Geldings, and more at auction. 1k start.

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Freezer cleanout! These straws need to go. All discounted. Ablb retirees included.

I am also taking embryo offers on all of my EWW+ girls. PM if interested. :)
Epona
01:31:04 Mill$sen
Selling upgrades 200k for 3 month pm me
Abalone Stables
01:28:15 Elite in all Breeds
Looking for a upgrade
Tao
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EPE mare 5k

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Exo-M
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EEE SH 2. year old 5k

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Exo-K
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EEE SH 2 year old for sale 10k, willing to negotiate price just PM me

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Boulder Creek
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The Pretty Pony Pageant Needs You!!!

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Secretariat Ranch
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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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