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Angels angels
08:59:39 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I love tobi matches lol
I have so many this RO
Demon Souls
08:59:33 
Ahh wrong chat so sorry!!
Demon Souls
08:59:22 
Hosting 2 arenas cross country & dressage
a clowns dandy world
08:58:54 Snickers bar,dandy
No matches for her yet
-HEE Click- , throwing my fist up
CWY country
08:57:46 C
-HEE Click-
Hoping that it gets the tobi.

-HEE Click-
I'm hoping with her track record that the tobi and the silver pass on to the foal.
Angels angels
08:56:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ally
Me to lol I hope the foal catches the grey
I found a grey TB stud but he didn't match her ;-;
Rising Stars Stable
08:56:35 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
What a nice random capture
Glens color bombs
08:55:52 TB color bomb keeper
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:55:39 Ally 💜
I love the second one!
Angels angels
08:54:01 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Super color frame match

-HEE Click-
Grey tobi match
Didn't realize it could also get homo tobi lol
MakeEm Fancy
08:51:46 Ally 💜
Thank you!
CWY country
08:50:59 C
Ally, that's super pretty. Also, congrats on your husband getting the job!
Angels angels
08:50:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh so pretty!
MakeEm Fancy
08:50:02 Ally 💜
I have this
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
08:48:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have a possible visual prl silver tobi frame match and a possible grey tobi match both AA for RO. I hope they don't dodge the color and give me atleast one W DX
MakeEm Fancy
08:47:39 Ally 💜
Literally so happy about it. It means he will be getting the hours he needs and he will be getting benefits! His last job kept sending him home because of labor costs and they denied him getting benefits because of it :(
a clowns dandy world
08:47:27 Snickers bar,dandy
-HEE Click-

Pertyyyyy
Rising Stars Stable
08:46:27 Willow ~ AA Breeder
That is exciting! I need to go do Chemistry, bye guys
Angels angels
08:45:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yay Ally!!
MakeEm Fancy
08:45:40 Ally 💜
On a good note my husband had an interview yesterday and got the job! They hired him the same day basically :D he starts the 25th and I literally cried because this will help us so much

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Angels angels
08:59:39 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I love tobi matches lol
I have so many this RO
Demon Souls
08:59:33 
Ahh wrong chat so sorry!!
Demon Souls
08:59:22 
Hosting 2 arenas cross country & dressage
a clowns dandy world
08:58:54 Snickers bar,dandy
No matches for her yet
-HEE Click- , throwing my fist up
CWY country
08:57:46 C
-HEE Click-
Hoping that it gets the tobi.

-HEE Click-
I'm hoping with her track record that the tobi and the silver pass on to the foal.
Angels angels
08:56:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ally
Me to lol I hope the foal catches the grey
I found a grey TB stud but he didn't match her ;-;
Rising Stars Stable
08:56:35 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
What a nice random capture
Glens color bombs
08:55:52 TB color bomb keeper
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:55:39 Ally 💜
I love the second one!
Angels angels
08:54:01 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Super color frame match

-HEE Click-
Grey tobi match
Didn't realize it could also get homo tobi lol
MakeEm Fancy
08:51:46 Ally 💜
Thank you!
CWY country
08:50:59 C
Ally, that's super pretty. Also, congrats on your husband getting the job!
Angels angels
08:50:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh so pretty!
MakeEm Fancy
08:50:02 Ally 💜
I have this
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
08:48:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have a possible visual prl silver tobi frame match and a possible grey tobi match both AA for RO. I hope they don't dodge the color and give me atleast one W DX
MakeEm Fancy
08:47:39 Ally 💜
Literally so happy about it. It means he will be getting the hours he needs and he will be getting benefits! His last job kept sending him home because of labor costs and they denied him getting benefits because of it :(
a clowns dandy world
08:47:27 Snickers bar,dandy
-HEE Click-

Pertyyyyy
Rising Stars Stable
08:46:27 Willow ~ AA Breeder
That is exciting! I need to go do Chemistry, bye guys
Angels angels
08:45:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yay Ally!!
MakeEm Fancy
08:45:40 Ally 💜
On a good note my husband had an interview yesterday and got the job! They hired him the same day basically :D he starts the 25th and I literally cried because this will help us so much

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I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:07 AM

Former Stable
 
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LOL
But I want to get better and I could use some help.
So....Criticize Me Please! <3
XD

Recent Examples:

(First Appy)
https://s33.postimg.cc/gkhm39qu7/Horse_HEEOrder.jpg


https://s33.postimg.cc/ppldj8ryn/Horse_Liver-_Premade-4.jpg

Click For Quality On both! <3

Edited at September 8, 2018 11:09 AM by Lazy Duck Elites
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:46 AM


WildWillow
 
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What cute art ideas!

First of all, smudge in small circles. It looks like the coats of your horse are pulled down. Also,it looks as though you need to take more time cutting out the horse. The first horse still has some of the original background around the leg and the last horse looks like the cut out was rushed. Take your time and focus. Hard work pays off!

Also, try to blend the hooves into the ground on the first image. In the second image, the horse is missing it's back hooves! Try redrawing the hooves. There are many great tutorials on DeviantArt for redrawing hooves.

Another thing I thought I'd mention is that the top horse looks blue toned and the background is red toned. Try to color in some red and orange highlights on the horse to help it seem although it is actually in the background. The second image looks foggy in the background which means it probably isn't sunny out which contradicts the highlighting on your horse. Try to make the horse look as though it is actually in the fog as well.

The manes and tail look quite stiff as well. Mess around with some different blending options to make the mane and tail flow rather than be rigid. Making the eyes pop would also bring a nice touch to the art.

Other than that, it looks like your on the right track! :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 04:41 PM

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Lighting is key!!! and instead of blending the whole body just blend the face and the legs, and if you add white highlights it will make the horse pop.
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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These are a really great start and you really look like you're moving along splendidly in your art journey.

It seems like what you're stuggling with right now, which will really make a difference, is your pieces look rushed. I would suggest slowing down and not having a time frame in mind. Enjoy what you're doing.

I think i go back over my horses cutouts atleast 2 times. And if i notice a single pixel out of line, i go back again.

With manes and tails, i make sure to pull every strand, and do so with a small brush (3 pixels)
It takes FOREVER, but the result is a beautiful, lush, realistic mane / tail.

I think once you start focusing on crispness, you will really see a jump forward in your art. :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:03 PM

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Thank You All! <3

I slow down on my next piece and post it here! <3
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 07:06 PM

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Sorry! I forgot about this LOL

Here is one I just finished :D

https://s33.postimg.cc/ouf6340q7/HEE_AVATAR.jpg

Am I improving?
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:26 PM

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Another recent :)

https://s33.postimg.cc/d1hcyqjnz/Banner_HEE_Premade_Tobi.jpg
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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These ideas are all great, you're off to a great start :)

I'd have to agree with Jello though in that your pieces are rushed. Patience is key, never rush through a piece just to get it done. It will really increase your works quality.

Also try using a smaller brush for hair. They seem very stringy and thick at the moment. Pull out each strand on its own, and keep in mind the way natural manes and tails flow.

Lighting and shadows are also crucial. If the lighting of the horse and BG don't match, it's impossible to sell the realistic aspect of the piece. Make sure shadows are cast in the correct directions, especially on the horse, and that areas not in direct sunlight on the horse are darker.

Hope this helps! :)
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 09:15 PM

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Thank You! <3

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