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Peach, you can thank Versa for most of that 🤣 I've been drenched 😭
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Aldis has these off-brand cheetos that are SO good
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Artic, thanks lol xD
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I was like "maybe I should drive to the gas station and get some cheetos" but I keep having awkward interactions with the staff there so instead me and my emotional support lettuce are staying in tonight
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The great battle between trying to be healthy and future you wondering who in their right mind didn't buy snacks XD
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Peach, I don't know if you've seen the news page, but I'm drowning 😭
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Peach!
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Puck, what possessed you to do that? 😭
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God is Mighty Stable
08:38:29 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Have fun guys
FirstLightFarms
08:00:04 puck
Trivia starting NOW! Lots of great bonus prizes this time!
FirstLightFarms
07:50:21 puck
-Click-

Trivia starting in ten minutes!
FirstLightFarms
07:33:06 puck
Versa is freaking relentless. My wifi cannot compete with that. Or my hands.
Dash and Duchess
07:32:16 DD | ~Squizard~
Peach, you can thank Versa for most of that 🤣 I've been drenched 😭
Black Moon Magic
07:31:30 Mori
Ooo, cheetos sound almost as good as doritos right now
FirstLightFarms
07:31:18 puck
-Click-

Trivia chat now open!!
Glacier Bay Cove
07:31:18 Arctic Katz
Can't remember the last time I had cheetos
Peachy
07:31:10 peach | abbi
*sorry for caps whoops
Peachy
07:31:01 peach | abbi
DD holy shit cD 2671 is INSANE.
FirstLightFarms
07:30:15 puck
Aldis has these off-brand cheetos that are SO good
Sleepwalker Centre
07:29:46 Walker
oh cheetos sound gooood
Dash and Duchess
07:29:45 DD | ~Squizard~
Artic, thanks lol xD
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Puck, omg 🤣 emotional support lettuce took me out 😭
FirstLightFarms
07:28:32 puck
I was like "maybe I should drive to the gas station and get some cheetos" but I keep having awkward interactions with the staff there so instead me and my emotional support lettuce are staying in tonight
Glacier Bay Cove
07:27:51 Arctic Katz
Throwing you a life jacket, DD
Embervale Acres
07:27:08 Solar Phoenix
The great battle between trying to be healthy and future you wondering who in their right mind didn't buy snacks XD
Dash and Duchess
07:26:41 DD | ~Squizard~
Peach, I don't know if you've seen the news page, but I'm drowning 😭
Dash and Duchess
07:26:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Peach!
Dash and Duchess
07:26:09 DD | ~Squizard~
Puck, what possessed you to do that? 😭
Glacier Bay Cove
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Is tofu good

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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