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Willow Ridge
02:25:04 Lillie Pt 3
dont say that Angel I might have a job for you..
Prismatic
02:24:45 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Angel
I'd take you up on that...
Angels angels
02:21:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I looove matching lol and all my mares are matched so I am happy to help anyone that needs it
Fantasy Horses
02:21:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
Haha thank you lol
PMing you :P
Willow Ridge
02:21:09 Lillie Pt 3
fantasy
Agreed-_-
Angels angels
02:20:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fantasy
I am always here to help if you need it lol
Fantasy Horses
02:20:08 Fantasy | Fanta
Arg planning matches for RO is really the worst, especially with a bunch of young mares >.<
Sweet Valley
02:19:34 Anna/Jewel
Cool!
Pinewood Equestrain
02:19:32 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Go to forums and you can see mine :)
Pinewood Equestrain
02:19:15 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Anna,
I just started doing art for HEE
Willow Ridge
02:18:51 Lillie Pt 3
-HEE Click-
I got a good batch but this girl was gorgeous and just had to have an E instead of a W😔
Sweet Valley
02:18:13 Anna/Jewel
DO you have an art shop on HEE?
Sweet Valley
02:17:48 Anna/Jewel
WOw you are pretty good, Pine!
Pinewood Equestrain
02:17:24 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
-Click-

And this one is a before and after too
Pinewood Equestrain
02:16:48 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
-Click-

This is a before and after one
Fantasy Horses
02:15:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Prism
Any time
Sweet Valley
02:14:58 Anna/Jewel
Sure, Pine!
Prismatic
02:14:30 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Okay thanks Fantasy and Angel
Angels angels
02:14:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
They are more pain than they are worth
Pinewood Equestrain
02:13:51 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Do you guys want to see a little bit of art before I start a new piece?

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Willow Ridge
02:25:04 Lillie Pt 3
dont say that Angel I might have a job for you..
Prismatic
02:24:45 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Angel
I'd take you up on that...
Angels angels
02:21:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I looove matching lol and all my mares are matched so I am happy to help anyone that needs it
Fantasy Horses
02:21:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
Haha thank you lol
PMing you :P
Willow Ridge
02:21:09 Lillie Pt 3
fantasy
Agreed-_-
Angels angels
02:20:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fantasy
I am always here to help if you need it lol
Fantasy Horses
02:20:08 Fantasy | Fanta
Arg planning matches for RO is really the worst, especially with a bunch of young mares >.<
Sweet Valley
02:19:34 Anna/Jewel
Cool!
Pinewood Equestrain
02:19:32 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Go to forums and you can see mine :)
Pinewood Equestrain
02:19:15 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Anna,
I just started doing art for HEE
Willow Ridge
02:18:51 Lillie Pt 3
-HEE Click-
I got a good batch but this girl was gorgeous and just had to have an E instead of a W😔
Sweet Valley
02:18:13 Anna/Jewel
DO you have an art shop on HEE?
Sweet Valley
02:17:48 Anna/Jewel
WOw you are pretty good, Pine!
Pinewood Equestrain
02:17:24 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
-Click-

And this one is a before and after too
Pinewood Equestrain
02:16:48 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
-Click-

This is a before and after one
Fantasy Horses
02:15:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Prism
Any time
Sweet Valley
02:14:58 Anna/Jewel
Sure, Pine!
Prismatic
02:14:30 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Okay thanks Fantasy and Angel
Angels angels
02:14:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
They are more pain than they are worth
Pinewood Equestrain
02:13:51 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Do you guys want to see a little bit of art before I start a new piece?

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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