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Angels angels
01:11:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I took two years off after high-school before college so I am normally a bit older than most of my classmates
Crestwood Eq.
01:11:46 Ivy / poison ivy
until i skipped a grade, i was always a year ahead in math
Snitches' Stitches
01:11:08 Snitch
My college only had an entrance exam for language. Math/english placement was based on ACT scores
Crestwood Eq.
01:10:46 Ivy / poison ivy
I entered early too. Wylder, who turn 14 in june is going into 8th grade because he started a year later than me
Cozmic Elite
01:10:01 
I almost got held back a year, didn't realize I needed glasses til grade 8. Couldn't see what I was learning Lol
Angels angels
01:09:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Same in college with the lower level maths. You could take a test to skip them but that was too much work lol
Lunalovegood
01:09:32 Loony/Loony Tune
Angel don’t blame you
Lunalovegood
01:09:06 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy if I was in America (Here goes me forgetting how humble I am about cleverness XD)
I’d probably have skipped a grade

I wish you could here, My class is still so immature XD
Angels angels
01:08:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I almost skipped a grade in elementary school but I was too lazy to take the test required for it lol
Snitches' Stitches
01:08:26 Snitch
I entered school a year early so I was always the youngest lol
Crestwood Eq.
01:07:45 Ivy / poison ivy
but it's not common
Crestwood Eq.
01:07:25 Ivy / poison ivy
loony

yep. we can skip grades
Lunalovegood
01:06:42 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy what, in America (I guess that is where you guys are) you can skip grades!!
Sweet Valley
01:05:31 Anna/Jewel
Okay! I am in 9th grade and doing Geometry. I didn't skip any years though
Crestwood Eq.
01:04:46 Ivy / poison ivy
going into 10th. skipped 8th
Sweet Valley
12:59:19 Anna/Jewel
Ivy- so what grade are you in?
Sweet Valley
12:56:31 Anna/Jewel
That's cool.
Crestwood Eq.
12:55:24 Ivy / poison ivy
Hobo

same
Angels angels
12:55:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My fiance's older sister is also the 9th lol
Glacier Bay Cove
12:54:48 Arctic Katz
my younger sister, Her birthday is April 15th

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Angels angels
01:11:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I took two years off after high-school before college so I am normally a bit older than most of my classmates
Crestwood Eq.
01:11:46 Ivy / poison ivy
until i skipped a grade, i was always a year ahead in math
Snitches' Stitches
01:11:08 Snitch
My college only had an entrance exam for language. Math/english placement was based on ACT scores
Crestwood Eq.
01:10:46 Ivy / poison ivy
I entered early too. Wylder, who turn 14 in june is going into 8th grade because he started a year later than me
Cozmic Elite
01:10:01 
I almost got held back a year, didn't realize I needed glasses til grade 8. Couldn't see what I was learning Lol
Angels angels
01:09:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Same in college with the lower level maths. You could take a test to skip them but that was too much work lol
Lunalovegood
01:09:32 Loony/Loony Tune
Angel don’t blame you
Lunalovegood
01:09:06 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy if I was in America (Here goes me forgetting how humble I am about cleverness XD)
I’d probably have skipped a grade

I wish you could here, My class is still so immature XD
Angels angels
01:08:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I almost skipped a grade in elementary school but I was too lazy to take the test required for it lol
Snitches' Stitches
01:08:26 Snitch
I entered school a year early so I was always the youngest lol
Crestwood Eq.
01:07:45 Ivy / poison ivy
but it's not common
Crestwood Eq.
01:07:25 Ivy / poison ivy
loony

yep. we can skip grades
Lunalovegood
01:06:42 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy what, in America (I guess that is where you guys are) you can skip grades!!
Sweet Valley
01:05:31 Anna/Jewel
Okay! I am in 9th grade and doing Geometry. I didn't skip any years though
Crestwood Eq.
01:04:46 Ivy / poison ivy
going into 10th. skipped 8th
Sweet Valley
12:59:19 Anna/Jewel
Ivy- so what grade are you in?
Sweet Valley
12:56:31 Anna/Jewel
That's cool.
Crestwood Eq.
12:55:24 Ivy / poison ivy
Hobo

same
Angels angels
12:55:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My fiance's older sister is also the 9th lol
Glacier Bay Cove
12:54:48 Arctic Katz
my younger sister, Her birthday is April 15th

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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