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Minerva

03:00:31 Min

-HEE Click-

Yesssss good boy

Minerva

02:57:17 Min

Holy shit Mori what are you feeding him xD Also shhhhh because my 2yo has gone up yet another rug size and you're making me nervous xD

02:56:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oh my gosh how did he go up 2 hands in 5 months 0-0

Black Moon Magic

02:55:27 Mori

He was 15.3 in February 😅
He's outgrown both his parents at this point

Black Moon Magic

02:50:50 Mori

I prefer trotters to pacers for standardbreds, I can never find a good way to ride a pace

Hummingbird Meadows

02:50:08 Bird

I just took a bath and Finley was sitting on the edge. He put his accidentally put his tail in the water and is now confused about how it got wet.

02:50:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oof big boy

02:49:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mori
Awe lol sad
When I get my first horse some day I want a gaited horse

Black Moon Magic

02:49:38 Mori

He's 3 and (currently) 17.2

02:49:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Night
Not a fan of the Int and Hrt

Black Moon Magic

02:49:13 Mori

Angel
He's a trotter, but he failed before making it to race training

02:48:26 Night

Angel, if youre lurking, what's your opinion on this lol, I can't decide
-HEE Click-

02:48:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mori
Ooo is your standardbred gaited

Black Moon Magic

02:45:59 Mori

My Standardbred is starting another growth spurt 😅

02:44:02 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

I also love solid coats, blood bay and bright bay are my favorites.

Ranch Lands Training

02:43:46 Lilly/PON Addict

Very jealous. I caught a EWW palomino mare and somehow ended up with an exclusively blue roan WWW bloodline

02:43:39 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

I love roans

02:42:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I have managed to avoid roans thus far somehow lol

Ranch Lands Training

02:41:50 Lilly/PON Addict

I had so many blue roans before my break. I atleast want some variety in my roans this time around 😂

02:41:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Just do an embryo from each

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Minerva

03:00:31 Min

-HEE Click-

Yesssss good boy

Minerva

02:57:17 Min

Holy shit Mori what are you feeding him xD Also shhhhh because my 2yo has gone up yet another rug size and you're making me nervous xD

02:56:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oh my gosh how did he go up 2 hands in 5 months 0-0

Black Moon Magic

02:55:27 Mori

He was 15.3 in February 😅
He's outgrown both his parents at this point

Black Moon Magic

02:50:50 Mori

I prefer trotters to pacers for standardbreds, I can never find a good way to ride a pace

Hummingbird Meadows

02:50:08 Bird

I just took a bath and Finley was sitting on the edge. He put his accidentally put his tail in the water and is now confused about how it got wet.

02:50:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oof big boy

02:49:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mori
Awe lol sad
When I get my first horse some day I want a gaited horse

Black Moon Magic

02:49:38 Mori

He's 3 and (currently) 17.2

02:49:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Night
Not a fan of the Int and Hrt

Black Moon Magic

02:49:13 Mori

Angel
He's a trotter, but he failed before making it to race training

02:48:26 Night

Angel, if youre lurking, what's your opinion on this lol, I can't decide
-HEE Click-

02:48:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mori
Ooo is your standardbred gaited

Black Moon Magic

02:45:59 Mori

My Standardbred is starting another growth spurt 😅

02:44:02 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

I also love solid coats, blood bay and bright bay are my favorites.

Ranch Lands Training

02:43:46 Lilly/PON Addict

Very jealous. I caught a EWW palomino mare and somehow ended up with an exclusively blue roan WWW bloodline

02:43:39 Prism/Chrome/Rainy

I love roans

02:42:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I have managed to avoid roans thus far somehow lol

Ranch Lands Training

02:41:50 Lilly/PON Addict

I had so many blue roans before my break. I atleast want some variety in my roans this time around 😂

02:41:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Just do an embryo from each

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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