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Insignia Elites
07:58:39 Em
Well thank you so much!
Angels angels
07:58:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah I don't need it lol
Insignia Elites
07:57:16 Em
Thank you! I can send it back!
Angels angels
07:57:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel
There you go lol
Insignia Elites
07:55:52 Em
Just a water xD I see them all the time and then this fetch comes and they aren't showing up in the store
Angels angels
07:55:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em what do you need lol
Insignia Elites
07:52:26 Em
Why do items never show up when you need it for a quest xD
Angels angels
07:44:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Trying to find a very specific colored horse is not easy sometimes lol
Galloping_Gems
07:38:59 Gemstone
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Dark green won, the other colors clashed 😂🤪
Galloping_Gems
07:35:51 Gemstone
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Needing name ideas for this boy
Galloping_Gems
07:34:16 Gemstone
Ooooo smart!
Bluebonnet Estates
07:33:42 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Gemstone
Honestly I'd go blue or purple, I think the red halter we have would be too bright and clash too hard, considering he has blue eyes
Galloping_Gems
07:27:20 Gemstone
Thank you
Glacier Bay Cove
07:26:52 Arctic Katz
@Gemstone
Glacier Bay Cove
07:26:39 Arctic Katz
Definitely a red halter
Glacier Bay Cove
07:26:11 Arctic Katz
My newest piece is so NICE
Galloping_Gems
07:25:47 Gemstone
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Such a cute gelding, im thinking red halter. Thoughts?
Glacier Bay Cove
07:25:37 Arctic Katz
Making art projects helps me feel less stressed about future ROs and other events
Angels angels
07:23:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I am way less stressed about RO lol I only need to make about 610k more by RO to have everything I need. And my show horses will bring that in no problem
Galloping_Gems
07:21:55 Gemstone
Thanks

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Insignia Elites
07:58:39 Em
Well thank you so much!
Angels angels
07:58:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah I don't need it lol
Insignia Elites
07:57:16 Em
Thank you! I can send it back!
Angels angels
07:57:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel
There you go lol
Insignia Elites
07:55:52 Em
Just a water xD I see them all the time and then this fetch comes and they aren't showing up in the store
Angels angels
07:55:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em what do you need lol
Insignia Elites
07:52:26 Em
Why do items never show up when you need it for a quest xD
Angels angels
07:44:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Trying to find a very specific colored horse is not easy sometimes lol
Galloping_Gems
07:38:59 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Dark green won, the other colors clashed 😂🤪
Galloping_Gems
07:35:51 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Needing name ideas for this boy
Galloping_Gems
07:34:16 Gemstone
Ooooo smart!
Bluebonnet Estates
07:33:42 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Gemstone
Honestly I'd go blue or purple, I think the red halter we have would be too bright and clash too hard, considering he has blue eyes
Galloping_Gems
07:27:20 Gemstone
Thank you
Glacier Bay Cove
07:26:52 Arctic Katz
@Gemstone
Glacier Bay Cove
07:26:39 Arctic Katz
Definitely a red halter
Glacier Bay Cove
07:26:11 Arctic Katz
My newest piece is so NICE
Galloping_Gems
07:25:47 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Such a cute gelding, im thinking red halter. Thoughts?
Glacier Bay Cove
07:25:37 Arctic Katz
Making art projects helps me feel less stressed about future ROs and other events
Angels angels
07:23:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I am way less stressed about RO lol I only need to make about 610k more by RO to have everything I need. And my show horses will bring that in no problem
Galloping_Gems
07:21:55 Gemstone
Thanks

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Art critique July 3, 2018 04:14 AM

Former Stable
 
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I was looking for someone opinions on my art
I currently charge 8k for a horse avatar do you think that price is right or should I change it

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https://i.imgur.com/KRwOGTn.jpg

I look forward to hearing your suggestions
Art critique July 3, 2018 08:58 AM


WildWillow
 
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Hi Kiralee!

Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.
That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.
However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.

For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!

I hope this helps!
WildWillow
Art critique July 6, 2018 07:17 AM

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WildWillow said:
Hi Kiralee!
Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.
For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!
I hope this helps!WildWillow














Thanks I didn’t redraw the mane/tail as I cannot at the moment Something I am working on

https://i.imgur.com/oHcNVYN.jpg

Here is another example

Edited at July 6, 2018 07:18 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 6, 2018 02:25 PM


WildWillow
 
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Hi again Kirralee!

The mane and tail on your newer piece is very good! If you are able too, on the edges of your mane I would take a blur tool or a smudge tool on a low power and go over the edges a bit. It would help make your mane and tail flow nicely.
Your horse looks a bit small compared to the background. Choosing a background that has a wider area will help your horse fit in well.
I'm unsure if you added the white markings but it looks like you did. I would go over them with a smudge tool to make it look like it is actually part of the coat rather than sitting on top.
Also, the horse's front hoof seems a bit squished. If it had to be cut that way from the stock, I would recommend either redrawing the hoof or taking parts of the other hooves to blend together to form a new one. Also, I would recommend taking a smudge tool and going over the very bottoms of the hooves so they look as though they are truly on the ground.
The last thing I would like to point out is the flower in the mane. The flower is very sharp while the horse is blurred. To fix this, you could either blur the flower or sharpen the horse.

Other than that, I can tell a huge improvement between the previous one and your most recent one!
Art critique July 7, 2018 05:02 AM

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https://i.imgur.com/Bb5U16R.jpg



My first attempt at drawing a mane and tail

Edited at July 7, 2018 06:01 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 7, 2018 06:47 AM

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Definitely better then me IÂ’ll say that right now 😂😂
Art critique July 17, 2018 06:20 AM

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https://s15.postimg.cc/m3duz3gpn/7_AD34_FA6-1_E59-40_FF-_BA15-67938431_DCF1.jpg

First line art

Edited at July 17, 2018 06:20 AM by Kirralee stud farm

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