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11yo EWW X mare for sale for 80k. -HEE Click-

I have lots of EWE combo horses for sale. Prices range from 15k-20k. I also have W combo mares for sale for 1k. Need them all sold. -HEE Click-
Lovely angels
10:42:14 Angel's angels (SA)
EWE TB Combo mares 40k need gone!!
Rainy ruins
10:41:54 
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EEE-EWW with exception of one color PPP
$2,000 and up

EWW filly currently $52,000
Gem
10:41:38 Tier 1 Artist
WAY too many horses up for sale!
SD W RID, ISH, KNN - some LB or previously LB!
AD RID
E SD geldings
Open to offers on all!
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Merryland Farm
10:36:45 Merry
Three premade art pieces available - one full image and two stable sets. Reasonable prices!
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Barbury Estates
10:20:33 Amelia
-HEE Click-
All sorts of foals for sale, most of them are E combos. All are below 2k. Come get them now!
BlueBirdFalls
10:19:14 Blu
EWW X Stud
for sale
Color: Mahogany Bay Roan Sabino
Decent producer, Would make a good show gelding.
Asking what I paid for him.
-HEE Click-
Horse Haven Stables
10:19:11 HHS⎹ Lyla
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EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Blueberry Ledge
10:17:04 
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WWW-EEW
PON and short SH auctions.
Lots of color.
Disney Acres
10:16:46 
WEE TB filly blood bay 65k will lower
-HEE Click-

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Summit Stables
10:48:30 Summit
11yo EWW X mare for sale for 80k. -HEE Click-

I have lots of EWE combo horses for sale. Prices range from 15k-20k. I also have W combo mares for sale for 1k. Need them all sold. -HEE Click-
Lovely angels
10:42:14 Angel's angels (SA)
EWE TB Combo mares 40k need gone!!
Rainy ruins
10:41:54 
-HEE Click-

EEE-EWW with exception of one color PPP
$2,000 and up

EWW filly currently $52,000
Gem
10:41:38 Tier 1 Artist
WAY too many horses up for sale!
SD W RID, ISH, KNN - some LB or previously LB!
AD RID
E SD geldings
Open to offers on all!
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Merryland Farm
10:36:45 Merry
Three premade art pieces available - one full image and two stable sets. Reasonable prices!
-HEE Click-
Barbury Estates
10:20:33 Amelia
-HEE Click-
All sorts of foals for sale, most of them are E combos. All are below 2k. Come get them now!
BlueBirdFalls
10:19:14 Blu
EWW X Stud
for sale
Color: Mahogany Bay Roan Sabino
Decent producer, Would make a good show gelding.
Asking what I paid for him.
-HEE Click-
Horse Haven Stables
10:19:11 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Blueberry Ledge
10:17:04 
-HEE Click-
WWW-EEW
PON and short SH auctions.
Lots of color.
Disney Acres
10:16:46 
WEE TB filly blood bay 65k will lower
-HEE Click-

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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