Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 192 Season: Winter

$: 0

Forecast:

Clear with Temps dropping into the Teens

Forecast:

Thu 09:49am

Stables Online: 95

09:46:02 Louise

then my best boy pops her out -HEE Click-

09:36:43 Louise

sometimes testing freshmen pop a good one lol

Nightingales Ridge

09:35:25 Issy

Wowweeee Louise

09:33:19 Louise

wow -HEE Click-

09:28:47 Void Malign

It's wild that I'm now using AI for work. At least it's useful

09:26:18

-HEE Click- such a shiny 1/1 foal and an e in jumping too

Transformers Acres

09:22:54 Geek, Eek

My family: Find God/Jesus.

Me, a HelPol: Um... I found other deities though.

True conversation. :')

09:18:57 Crowley

Ven
Oh gods lol

Stormsong Manor

09:17:57 Ven

We had a meetup planned like... twelve years ago? It never materialized because the people who were planning it had some not so great ideas

09:17:25 Crowley

Geek
My mom's dog never listens lol

Glacier Bay Cove

09:16:47 Arctic Katz

Unpopular idea of mine. What would it be like meeting you in person and talking about HEE

Transformers Acres

09:09:13 Geek, Eek

Crowley

Nice. My dog, Sassy, growls whenever she's told to go join the living. She stays with me in my room, I hate socializing.

09:04:56 Crowley

Told my mom's dog to come out and join the living and she actually came out from under the chair. 💀

The Night Circus

09:04:53 Columet

Thanks

Sunfeather Stables

09:04:23 SF

Congratulations!!

Nightingales Ridge

09:04:05 Issy

Wow nice

The Night Circus

09:02:47 Columet

lol ok
-HEE Click-

09:01:05 Snow❆Gem

@eury

Well said. :)

08:59:56 Void Malign

LB status is a solid indication of horse strength. So, it definitely can make a difference if you're trying to strengthen lines

08:59:45 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Oh hello! :D I hope you have a good day! *hugs*

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Rules Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat

09:46:02 Louise

then my best boy pops her out -HEE Click-

09:36:43 Louise

sometimes testing freshmen pop a good one lol

Nightingales Ridge

09:35:25 Issy

Wowweeee Louise

09:33:19 Louise

wow -HEE Click-

09:28:47 Void Malign

It's wild that I'm now using AI for work. At least it's useful

09:26:18

-HEE Click- such a shiny 1/1 foal and an e in jumping too

Transformers Acres

09:22:54 Geek, Eek

My family: Find God/Jesus.

Me, a HelPol: Um... I found other deities though.

True conversation. :')

09:18:57 Crowley

Ven
Oh gods lol

Stormsong Manor

09:17:57 Ven

We had a meetup planned like... twelve years ago? It never materialized because the people who were planning it had some not so great ideas

09:17:25 Crowley

Geek
My mom's dog never listens lol

Glacier Bay Cove

09:16:47 Arctic Katz

Unpopular idea of mine. What would it be like meeting you in person and talking about HEE

Transformers Acres

09:09:13 Geek, Eek

Crowley

Nice. My dog, Sassy, growls whenever she's told to go join the living. She stays with me in my room, I hate socializing.

09:04:56 Crowley

Told my mom's dog to come out and join the living and she actually came out from under the chair. 💀

The Night Circus

09:04:53 Columet

Thanks

Sunfeather Stables

09:04:23 SF

Congratulations!!

Nightingales Ridge

09:04:05 Issy

Wow nice

The Night Circus

09:02:47 Columet

lol ok
-HEE Click-

09:01:05 Snow❆Gem

@eury

Well said. :)

08:59:56 Void Malign

LB status is a solid indication of horse strength. So, it definitely can make a difference if you're trying to strengthen lines

08:59:45 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Oh hello! :D I hope you have a good day! *hugs*

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Refresh

Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now! ←

My Subscriptions

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help

1

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Posts: 0
#106539
Give Award

Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Posts: 2670
#106543
Give Award

my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Posts: 1522
#106696
Give Award

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Posts: 0
#106698
Give Award

Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help

1