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6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 300k or offer. Has produced EWE's and EEE's.

I also have EWE RID mares for 70k and EEE RID mares for 15k. Feel free to offer.
Peacock Estate
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Peacock appy auction, I/SH!
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Palais de Lys
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EEE RID colt.
Merryland Farm
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Two premade mini sets available for 25k each - Tier 2 art at Tier 4 prices!! -HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
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Cheap quality I/SH including:
EEE Colts
PEW Mare
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Sunfeather Stables
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Cool looking WB filly for sale!
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She Craves Genesis
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EWE Chestnut Tobiano filly . Wk4 + tracked. 30k
Blacknight Legend
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Alaskan Bay
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X, RID, KNN, and SH
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MakeEm Fancy
01:07:30 Ally 💜
WPP KNN mare
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Skyrim
12:40:36 Wynter/Ghostly
-HEE Click-
6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 300k or offer. Has produced EWE's and EEE's.

I also have EWE RID mares for 70k and EEE RID mares for 15k. Feel free to offer.
Peacock Estate
12:38:28 Lily
Peacock appy auction, I/SH!
-HEE Click-
Palais de Lys
12:31:11 
-HEE Click-
EEE RID colt.
Merryland Farm
12:30:45 Merry
Two premade mini sets available for 25k each - Tier 2 art at Tier 4 prices!! -HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:15:24 pheezy
-HEE Click-

Cheap quality I/SH including:
EEE Colts
PEW Mare
PEE-W Dunskin Mare
etc
Sunfeather Stables
12:11:30 SF / Sunfeather
Cool looking WB filly for sale!
-HEE Click-
She Craves Genesis
11:54:35 pheezy 2
-HEE Click-

EWE Chestnut Tobiano filly . Wk4 + tracked. 30k
Blacknight Legend
11:50:40 Knightie
-HEE Click-
Alaskan Bay
11:37:48 
X, RID, KNN, and SH
Accepting offers on all
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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