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Sunni
11:47:57 Sunni bunny
Oh! That went right over my head XD
Fossil's Dreams
11:47:39 PK or Fossil
oh my lord
Eagle Creek
11:47:35 Eagle
DD,
I love that art!
I need to start thinking about getting my girl art xD
Alpine Acres
11:47:33 Lily/Alpine
Sunni
OML - oh my lord :D
Fossil's Dreams
11:47:26 PK or Fossil
Univerally used ones
Sunni
11:47:01 Sunni bunny
Lily what dose OML mean?
Sorry also that's cool to know.
Now I don't have to text haha when I find something funny.
Alpine Acres
11:46:44 Lily/Alpine
DD
for sure! I'm thinking of getting art for my WWW boy
Fossil's Dreams
11:46:36 PK or Fossil
Many of our folks do not use english as a first language. Translation apps recognize the ones HEE allows
Alpine Acres
11:46:13 Lily/Alpine
PK, sure! :D
Insignia Elites
11:46:09 Em
I cannot win money hunt for my life lol
Dash and Duchess
11:46:08 DD | ~Squizard~
Lily, thank you!! I just had to show off her and her new arts xD
Alpine Acres
11:45:53 Lily/Alpine
Anna
LMAO - laughing my ass off xD
Fossil's Dreams
11:45:47 PK or Fossil
Thank You Lily!
Alpine Acres
11:45:35 Lily/Alpine
DD
ahh she's to die for!
Fossil's Dreams
11:45:28 PK or Fossil
Yes I believe it is now considered Univerally used like OMG & LOL
Sweet Valley
11:45:16 Anna/Jewel
I have no idea what LMAO means lol so
Dash and Duchess
11:44:59 DD | ~Squizard~
-HEE Click-
Im never getting over this filly xD and now with those arts I may just die 😂
Alpine Acres
11:44:50 Lily/Alpine
OMG, OML, LOL, LMAO, and IRL are permitted, according the rulebook
Sunni
11:44:28 Sunni bunny
Pk so wait RL is allowed but other forums of chat speak isn't?
Just curious, haha.
Fossil's Dreams
11:43:49 PK or Fossil
LOL, OMG are allowed. I know those for sure

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Sunni
11:47:57 Sunni bunny
Oh! That went right over my head XD
Fossil's Dreams
11:47:39 PK or Fossil
oh my lord
Eagle Creek
11:47:35 Eagle
DD,
I love that art!
I need to start thinking about getting my girl art xD
Alpine Acres
11:47:33 Lily/Alpine
Sunni
OML - oh my lord :D
Fossil's Dreams
11:47:26 PK or Fossil
Univerally used ones
Sunni
11:47:01 Sunni bunny
Lily what dose OML mean?
Sorry also that's cool to know.
Now I don't have to text haha when I find something funny.
Alpine Acres
11:46:44 Lily/Alpine
DD
for sure! I'm thinking of getting art for my WWW boy
Fossil's Dreams
11:46:36 PK or Fossil
Many of our folks do not use english as a first language. Translation apps recognize the ones HEE allows
Alpine Acres
11:46:13 Lily/Alpine
PK, sure! :D
Insignia Elites
11:46:09 Em
I cannot win money hunt for my life lol
Dash and Duchess
11:46:08 DD | ~Squizard~
Lily, thank you!! I just had to show off her and her new arts xD
Alpine Acres
11:45:53 Lily/Alpine
Anna
LMAO - laughing my ass off xD
Fossil's Dreams
11:45:47 PK or Fossil
Thank You Lily!
Alpine Acres
11:45:35 Lily/Alpine
DD
ahh she's to die for!
Fossil's Dreams
11:45:28 PK or Fossil
Yes I believe it is now considered Univerally used like OMG & LOL
Sweet Valley
11:45:16 Anna/Jewel
I have no idea what LMAO means lol so
Dash and Duchess
11:44:59 DD | ~Squizard~
-HEE Click-
Im never getting over this filly xD and now with those arts I may just die 😂
Alpine Acres
11:44:50 Lily/Alpine
OMG, OML, LOL, LMAO, and IRL are permitted, according the rulebook
Sunni
11:44:28 Sunni bunny
Pk so wait RL is allowed but other forums of chat speak isn't?
Just curious, haha.
Fossil's Dreams
11:43:49 PK or Fossil
LOL, OMG are allowed. I know those for sure

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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