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Fantasy Horses
12:46:38 Fantasy | Fanta
bye bluey!!
Blue Diamond
12:46:18 Bluey
Goodnight, everyone!
Narran Park
12:39:14 Sting
it doesnt look like my BM entered any...
Fantasy Horses
12:32:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Entered two horses XD
Fantasy Horses
12:32:12 Fantasy | Fanta
+725 profit for me lol
Fantasy Horses
12:31:18 Fantasy | Fanta
Bluey
oof that's rough
Golden Heart
12:29:37 Gold
blue

oop
Narran Park
12:17:45 Sting
Thanks Lovelies!
Just one of those days!

These days are important i guess. Helps me appreciate the good ones.
Blue Diamond
12:16:44 Bluey
Okay.... -12000 in shows today....someone's getting sent to the glue factory....
Alpine Acres
12:15:29 Lily
Sorry to hear that Sting :(
hope it get's better for you!
Glacier Bay Cove
12:13:20 Arctic Katz
Hopefully the rest of your week will get better, Sting
Narran Park
12:10:40 Sting
Ugh. I have had such a shitty day. I'll be glad when this week is over.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:03:15 Arctic Katz
-Click- I can't stop laughing
Glacier Bay Cove
11:57:24 Arctic Katz
Super excited about them
Glacier Bay Cove
11:57:06 Arctic Katz
And working on several art pieces, including a palette or four
Glacier Bay Cove
11:56:06 Arctic Katz
Back to questing tomorrow
3S Cast n Characters
11:41:36 Kitty
Thank you
at Fantasy
Fantasy Horses
11:41:03 Fantasy | Fanta
Kitty
Oh and she's stunning too! Congrats!
KPH Equestrian
11:40:06 Rapcoon | Jester
river
<3
3S Cast n Characters
11:39:35 Kitty
When the filly goes all up in week 4!!!! awsome!!
-HEE Click-

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Fantasy Horses
12:46:38 Fantasy | Fanta
bye bluey!!
Blue Diamond
12:46:18 Bluey
Goodnight, everyone!
Narran Park
12:39:14 Sting
it doesnt look like my BM entered any...
Fantasy Horses
12:32:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Entered two horses XD
Fantasy Horses
12:32:12 Fantasy | Fanta
+725 profit for me lol
Fantasy Horses
12:31:18 Fantasy | Fanta
Bluey
oof that's rough
Golden Heart
12:29:37 Gold
blue

oop
Narran Park
12:17:45 Sting
Thanks Lovelies!
Just one of those days!

These days are important i guess. Helps me appreciate the good ones.
Blue Diamond
12:16:44 Bluey
Okay.... -12000 in shows today....someone's getting sent to the glue factory....
Alpine Acres
12:15:29 Lily
Sorry to hear that Sting :(
hope it get's better for you!
Glacier Bay Cove
12:13:20 Arctic Katz
Hopefully the rest of your week will get better, Sting
Narran Park
12:10:40 Sting
Ugh. I have had such a shitty day. I'll be glad when this week is over.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:03:15 Arctic Katz
-Click- I can't stop laughing
Glacier Bay Cove
11:57:24 Arctic Katz
Super excited about them
Glacier Bay Cove
11:57:06 Arctic Katz
And working on several art pieces, including a palette or four
Glacier Bay Cove
11:56:06 Arctic Katz
Back to questing tomorrow
3S Cast n Characters
11:41:36 Kitty
Thank you
at Fantasy
Fantasy Horses
11:41:03 Fantasy | Fanta
Kitty
Oh and she's stunning too! Congrats!
KPH Equestrian
11:40:06 Rapcoon | Jester
river
<3
3S Cast n Characters
11:39:35 Kitty
When the filly goes all up in week 4!!!! awsome!!
-HEE Click-

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Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 07:03 PM


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https://orig00.deviantart.net/787e/f/2017/338/4/1/horse_in_water__by_midholly-dbvryz7.png
I recently did this piece and was needing some critique. As you can see manes are my struggle :) And also how much would be a good start price and all bid if I were to auction it?
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:23 PM

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I think the mane is the best part, the body is too smoothed out to the point has no definition. The background is also too blurred in my opinion. I would suggest that if you're going to auction it that it be the size of an avatar, not rectangular like it is :)
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:26 PM

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Perhaps more dodging/burning on the horse to give it shadows and highlights. The hair looks awesome. Also maybe the effect of water splashing in the stream as a trot would create quite a disruption on the surface. Maybe a reflection? Those can be a pain to do though
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 10:53 PM


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Okay thank you for these tips of course size will be ajusted if I auction it and will definitely not blur the backroad so much next time and less smudging on the body as well 😀 I think I might give it a bit of a reflection as I felt like it needed something more in the water as well
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 11:08 PM

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Also,too many sharp corners on the limbs.
I would try practicing cutting with a size 4 eraser.

Maybe add a super distorted reflection,and please,put the back right hoof on?

Edited at December 4, 2017 11:09 PM by Darkin

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