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I have:
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-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
05:00:34 pheezy
-HEE Click-
Palais de Lys
03:59:42 
-HEE Click-
Vwry cheap EEE, EEW, EWW and geldings for aucrion (1k)
Checkers Catch
03:58:20 
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
W horses for less then 7k
Dream Stables
02:43:45 Ava
looking 4 3 mo upgrade
Alpine Acres
01:01:33 Lily/Alpine
EEE SH mare, 4k!
-HEE Click-
Velstra
12:27:39 Misa
Two EEP 2yr old fillies for sale!
Perfect for the next rollover, beautiful coats.
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
11:54:00 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Geldings, EEE mares, and PPP-A+ brave stock. All tracked and trained!
-HEE Click-
EWW shiny ISH Broods. Lc & Embryos available. Buyout only!

-HEE Click-
Help me test him Y194?
Demon Souls
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Hosting 2 areans with 50ebs entry fee
MC Ace
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All mares in this barn are up for offers. PM Me.

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The Official Art Critique Forum June 29, 2021 08:08 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Thank you kindly, Gem! ^^
The Official Art Critique Forum July 16, 2021 09:57 AM


Tanglewood
 
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Aight, looking for critique on the piece in general, but specifically on the mane/tail (I tried a new technique for those.) I'm aware the background wasn't blurred out smoothly, that's just laziness on my part xD But otherwise, rip it to shreads! (Would love a good reflection/shadow tutorial if anyone has one.)
The Official Art Critique Forum July 21, 2021 02:41 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

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The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2021 07:44 PM

Former Stable
 
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This is sick. I love the idea.
My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground.
Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good
As far as getting it to look dynamic, add streaks of bubbles in a downward motion (like this: https://dissolve.com/video/Underwater-splash-bubbles-slow-royalty-free-stock-video-footage/001-D26-9-733) and more air bubbles around the back end of the horse. Adding whiter splashes and ripples near the contact points of water can help and here are some brushes you can download if you have PS: https://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/57610-free-splash-photoshop-brushes
Hope this helps

CC Knabbstruppers said:
I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

ante-hamersmit-0n-Aqtb7-FL-0-unsplash.png




Edited at July 27, 2021 07:46 PM by Timber Canyon
The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2021 08:10 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Timber Canyon said:
This is sick. I love the idea.
My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground.
Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good
As far as getting it to look dynamic, add streaks of bubbles in a downward motion (like this: https://dissolve.com/video/Underwater-splash-bubbles-slow-royalty-free-stock-video-footage/001-D26-9-733) and more air bubbles around the back end of the horse. Adding whiter splashes and ripples near the contact points of water can help and here are some brushes you can download if you have PS: https://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/57610-free-splash-photoshop-brushes
Hope this helps

CC Knabbstruppers said:
I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

ante-hamersmit-0n-Aqtb7-FL-0-unsplash.png





Thank you so much Timbie! X3

Also, I'll go ahead and chuck the finished product in as well: Did a bit of blurring in that background, but I feel like it's still too much. ^^'

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Edited at July 27, 2021 08:22 PM by CC Knabbstruppers
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 02:34 PM

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The only stock I used for this piece was lineart for the horse. Everything else is hand painted. With that being said, tear it apart. Tell me what's ugly, what's pretty, and what can be improved upon.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 06:06 PM


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Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.

Edited at July 28, 2021 06:07 PM by Yellowtail Ranch
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 06:22 PM

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Yellowtail Ranch said:
Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.


On the sand you can see that there is a shadow, but the horse doesn't have a shadow. I'd start by adding that :) You could also add a touch of shadowing under the mane, to give it more depth. The horse itself looks nice. The pinkish sand actually looks quite nice, I would just add a light source, whether that be finding a stock image of a sunset and adding that in or making your own, it would add more life into the piece.
The Official Art Critique Forum August 3, 2021 10:33 AM


Trillium Acres
 
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Screen-Shot-2021-08-03-at-11-13-48-AM.pngAny critiques on this are appreciated! Its obviously not finished, and I need to fix the hooves, but other than that I'm curious as to what I can do to make this better:) This is my first time doing art in about a year and a half lol

Edited at August 3, 2021 10:39 AM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum August 3, 2021 10:42 AM

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Critique on this, please! I painted the pattern myself :)

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