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WWE rated RID stallion up for breeding at 5k mush with no minimum breed requirement. He has produced many EEEs and EWEs.
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PEE 800. Would be a great show gelding
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Sunflowerz
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Check out this handsome TB stud PWW
Skyrim
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WWE rated RID stallion up for breeding at 5k mush with no minimum breed requirement. He has produced many EEEs and EWEs.
Zodiac Stars
12:49:12 
Looking to buy an upgrade. I have 160k ready to send over. Please pm me
Boulder Creek
12:32:51 
Pretty Pony Pageant
August Show:

- Cross Country
- Matchy Matchy
- Working Equitation *
- Get Spotted
~ Flower Festival
~ Beach Ride

Everyone is welcome to join!
Free to Enter!
Win EBs!

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Maleficents
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30 minutes left

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Sunni
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Question about the value of my WWW colt.
Neptunes Waters
12:00:36 
-HEE Click-

PEE 800. Would be a great show gelding
Mooncloud Magic
11:41:18 🧸 Diva
WWW KNN freshie straws
-HEE Click-

WWW LB knn mare embryos
-HEE Click-

Selling W+ knn
-HEE Click-
Elysium Opalus
11:33:43 free palestine
0.0%/G1/short gens
WEEs and KNN
WC Braves
Rare colors
CHEAP sales studs and broods
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Daybreak
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Bits for sale $80

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The Official Art Critique Forum February 3, 2022 06:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Not a Manipulation, but Tips on shading? I'll gladly accept any tips and critiques
The Official Art Critique Forum February 4, 2022 03:00 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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id love some thoughts on this!
please note, i know the hair is weird for a horse thats underwater, but its hard for me to draw it as i don't have a tablet yet!
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The Official Art Critique Forum February 5, 2022 03:28 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Thistleberry Farm said:
id love some thoughts on this!
please note, i know the hair is weird for a horse thats underwater, but its hard for me to draw it as i don't have a tablet yet!
iuygu-1-1


it's pretty good to say it's hard for you to draw hair :) i would maybe draw on some smaller fly always coming off from the mane, like little squiggly ones to help with the underwater feel. i'd also smooth the body out a bit more as it looks quite sharp, however if that's your style then by all means leave it.
something i find that pulls a piece together is get a very light color( for thsi peice it'd be baby blue but it's usually very light cream/yellow) and draw a few fly aways , then change the layer to 'add'
The Official Art Critique Forum February 5, 2022 03:30 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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guys please this is huge, but i need some critique since i haven't done manips in a long while
^ also pricing help would be nice

Edited at February 5, 2022 03:49 AM by Bermuda Estate
The Official Art Critique Forum February 5, 2022 07:06 AM


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Bermuda Estate said:
guys please this is huge, but i need some critique since i haven't done manips in a long while
^ also pricing help would be nice


Looks good! That background is fantastic! Your lighting looks pretty good! The body prep and hair looks really nice! I would have added some lighting on the outsides of the horses leafs and barrel
The Official Art Critique Forum February 5, 2022 06:03 PM


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Bermuda Estate said:
guys please this is huge, but i need some critique since i haven't done manips in a long while
^ also pricing help would be nice


That looks really great, so majestic!
There's just a couple things I can think of to point out, but they're mainly stylistic and just my opinion of what I would personally do, not necessarily "problems" or anything
One thing is the horse looks very smooth and sleek, whereas the background, especially the rock the horse is standing on, looks more rough and textured, and the styles don't quite match. I think I would personally leave a little more detail on the horse (not smudged out so much), especially the upper hind leg/butt area, to match the more textured look of the background.
I think maybe darkening the hoof that's in contact with the rock a little bit might help it look a little more natural, since that's where the shadow is.
Finally, I would personally leave the rock upon which the horse is standing with a lot more detail, as in much less blurred out, since it's in the foreground of the piece, which I think might help with adding depth, but also just matching it to the level of detail on the horse.
Anyhow, I think this is really really well done, these are all just super nitpicky stylistic things. In terms of lighting, composition, hair, etc. it's all really incredible! Pricing wise, I think something like this could definitely sell for somewhere around 100-150k

Edited at February 5, 2022 06:05 PM by Night Shadow Stables
The Official Art Critique Forum February 16, 2022 04:16 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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back with another one haha
the hair is pissing me off and idk hwo to do in on this because it jsut doesn't look right :/
The Official Art Critique Forum February 16, 2022 05:17 AM


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For me, it's really hard to see with the watermark, but I would add some more definition and carry the mane down the neck a bit, make the tail less "perky", add some loose strands, pretty piece!
The Official Art Critique Forum February 16, 2022 08:09 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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if there is anything else i could change for the better please let me know. i knwo i seen desperate when i post here all the time but i'm just striving for improvement:) that sounds like a school essay oh my god
oo and pricing? i usually charge 80-100k but if been told that i'm either under or over pricing :/
The Official Art Critique Forum February 16, 2022 02:55 PM


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For pieces like that, your definitely undercharging

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