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Gypsy Family Farm
12:25:46 
He's so shiny on the chestnut looking part.
MC Ace
12:22:22 McFossil
Oh pretty Gypsy.
Sunni
12:21:26 Sunni bunny
Thank you Diva
Gypsy Family Farm
12:17:30 
Random chimera I did not know I owned. Fun color combo. -HEE Click-
Moonrose Magic
12:12:54 🎀 Diva
2.30am
Sunni
12:06:35 Sunni bunny
Dose the games day start at 12am?
CWY country
11:49:53 C
Oh, I'll have to get a picture of our newest addition that we got a few months ago. He's about a six month old kitten who has one eye.
KPH Equestrian
11:45:51 Rapcoon | Jester
oh my goodness šŸ˜he's so handsome🄰
CWY country
11:36:46 C
-Click-

Hopefully this works?
KPH Equestrian
11:24:18 Rapcoon | Jester
aw cute<3
CWY country
11:17:23 C
The one in my lap, is a big black cat with a white spot on his chest that adopted the family when he was living as a stray alley cat. His name is Kopi.
KPH Equestrian
11:13:53 Rapcoon | Jester
I've got 5 too xD via cat distribution system lol
CWY country
11:12:58 C
We have 5 cats in the house. All have been rescues from not so good circumstances.
KPH Equestrian
11:11:43 Rapcoon | Jester
he is strange
-Click-

C
aww<3
CWY country
11:10:12 C
Pretty kitty.

I currently have one of our cats on my lap at my desk doing biscuits on my leg.
KPH Equestrian
11:09:47 Rapcoon | Jester
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:08:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Kph -*Snatch*
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:07:19 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Right omg
KPH Equestrian
11:07:17 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:07:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Superman rihu

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Gypsy Family Farm
12:25:46 
He's so shiny on the chestnut looking part.
MC Ace
12:22:22 McFossil
Oh pretty Gypsy.
Sunni
12:21:26 Sunni bunny
Thank you Diva
Gypsy Family Farm
12:17:30 
Random chimera I did not know I owned. Fun color combo. -HEE Click-
Moonrose Magic
12:12:54 🎀 Diva
2.30am
Sunni
12:06:35 Sunni bunny
Dose the games day start at 12am?
CWY country
11:49:53 C
Oh, I'll have to get a picture of our newest addition that we got a few months ago. He's about a six month old kitten who has one eye.
KPH Equestrian
11:45:51 Rapcoon | Jester
oh my goodness šŸ˜he's so handsome🄰
CWY country
11:36:46 C
-Click-

Hopefully this works?
KPH Equestrian
11:24:18 Rapcoon | Jester
aw cute<3
CWY country
11:17:23 C
The one in my lap, is a big black cat with a white spot on his chest that adopted the family when he was living as a stray alley cat. His name is Kopi.
KPH Equestrian
11:13:53 Rapcoon | Jester
I've got 5 too xD via cat distribution system lol
CWY country
11:12:58 C
We have 5 cats in the house. All have been rescues from not so good circumstances.
KPH Equestrian
11:11:43 Rapcoon | Jester
he is strange
-Click-

C
aww<3
CWY country
11:10:12 C
Pretty kitty.

I currently have one of our cats on my lap at my desk doing biscuits on my leg.
KPH Equestrian
11:09:47 Rapcoon | Jester
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:08:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Kph -*Snatch*
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:07:19 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Right omg
KPH Equestrian
11:07:17 Rapcoon | Jester
fern
-Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:07:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Superman rihu

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The Official Art Critique Forum February 26, 2022 10:43 PM


Tranquility
 
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So, right off the bat I think the lighting needs to be stronger on the horse. On the edges, you could possibly paint a single line to highlight the edge of the horse and just make the lighting stronger in general.
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The mane of the horse is confusing my eyes, sort of. Is it supposed to be a braid? Anyways, pretty, but I would thicken the overall mane to lay across the shoulder better.
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The jewelry lighting almost looks inversed or something to me, it fits the overall lighting though and it your style, so I love it! I would just try to make the jewelry on the face stand out more against the white face.
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Your markings are really realistic and tie in great with the horse and overall piece!
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Overall, lovely job and I would love a piece from you someday! 😊
The Official Art Critique Forum February 26, 2022 10:51 PM


Silent Hill Equines
 
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Critique on my latest piece?
Any long term changes I need to make for future pieces?
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 03:05 PM


Ironclad Roan Estate
 
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Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:09 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Ironclad Roan Estate said:
Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.


out of everything, i'd say the hair needs the mos the long lighting wise, the ends are very light when they shouldn't be. when shading, treat the hair liek the body. Use add layers around the edges of the hair for lighting, ESPECIALLY with harsh down/back lighting, and make the ' middle ' of the hair darker compared to the edges.
Id also make the feet a bit darker, not by too much though. But make sure to leave a bit of unshaded area on the right hand side of the feet for this pice, since it is sort of back lighted.
something not lighting related, but try not to blend the horse out as much, your body prep is beautiful but i feel like you may have lost some details
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:12 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Silent Hill Equines said:
Critique on my latest piece?
Any long term changes I need to make for future pieces?


this lighting on thsi is really good! it's one of the first things that i noticed, which is good because it's eye catching, i love it <3
as for critique, your hair is quite smoother out, rather than the layers and shades within the hair standing out. Hair in manip should look relatively shady if that makes sense? there are plenty of tutorials in the forums and on youtube as far as hair is concerned, but over all i'd say you ahve real potential to make some gorgeous pieces :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 04:15 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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anyways, i'm back again :D plead click on this peice because it's huge... like 3200x4000 and 85MB huge. And make sure to zoom because i need to be judged super hard. i don't care if it sounds harsh lmao i want it to be harsh

Edited at March 1, 2022 06:01 PM by Bermuda Estate
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 05:35 PM


Ironclad Roan Estate
 
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Thank you! I'll work on each of these suggestions and post the edited piece here.

Bermuda Estate said:

Ironclad Roan Estate said:
Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.


out of everything, i'd say the hair needs the mos the long lighting wise, the ends are very light when they shouldn't be. when shading, treat the hair liek the body. Use add layers around the edges of the hair for lighting, ESPECIALLY with harsh down/back lighting, and make the ' middle ' of the hair darker compared to the edges.
Id also make the feet a bit darker, not by too much though. But make sure to leave a bit of unshaded area on the right hand side of the feet for this pice, since it is sort of back lighted.
something not lighting related, but try not to blend the horse out as much, your body prep is beautiful but i feel like you may have lost some details


The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:20 PM


HMH Reality Check
 
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Bermuda Estate said:
anyways, i'm back again :D plead click on this peice because it's huge... like 3200x4000 and 85MB huge. And make sure to zoom because i need to be judged super hard. i don't care if it sounds harsh lmao i want it to be harsh


1. Is this piece already spoken for? If not, can I buy it from you?
2. The body prep is beautiful, the horse looks a bit bright compared to the BG, but I do really like the glowy golden horse. Your hair as always is super pretty. The lighting on it looks a bit bright, there's not much highlights in the BG. Your markings are flawless.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:29 PM


Bermuda Estate
 
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aww thankyou :) i've dimmed the lighting about to match the BG, and no it isn't spoken for but it is going for auction 0-0
The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 06:40 PM


HMH Reality Check
 
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Bermuda Estate said:
aww thankyou :) i've dimmed the lighting about to match the BG, and no it isn't spoken for but it is going for auction 0-0


I'm gonna keep my eye on that one, lol

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