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Maleficents
12:43:42 Dona
Heading off for tonight, good night everyone!
Wynter's Frost
12:33:51 Wynter/Skyrim
Thanks! It's my first WWW on this account.
Gypsy Family Farm
12:33:21 
Congrats Wynter!
Gypsy Family Farm
12:32:48 
I love her little striped hoof.
Wynter's Frost
12:32:30 Wynter/Skyrim
-HEE Click-
I did not expect this.
Sunni
12:32:28 Sunni bunny
That plus 10 capture map is working hard today.
Sunni
12:31:29 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
Oooo~
Gypsy Family Farm
12:25:46 
He's so shiny on the chestnut looking part.
MC Ace
12:22:22 McFossil
Oh pretty Gypsy.
Sunni
12:21:26 Sunni bunny
Thank you Diva
Gypsy Family Farm
12:17:30 
Random chimera I did not know I owned. Fun color combo. -HEE Click-
Moonrose Magic
12:12:54 🎀 Diva
2.30am
Sunni
12:06:35 Sunni bunny
Dose the games day start at 12am?
CWY country
11:49:53 C
Oh, I'll have to get a picture of our newest addition that we got a few months ago. He's about a six month old kitten who has one eye.
KPH Equestrian
11:45:51 Rapcoon | Jester
oh my goodness šŸ˜he's so handsome🄰
CWY country
11:36:46 C
-Click-

Hopefully this works?
KPH Equestrian
11:24:18 Rapcoon | Jester
aw cute<3
CWY country
11:17:23 C
The one in my lap, is a big black cat with a white spot on his chest that adopted the family when he was living as a stray alley cat. His name is Kopi.
KPH Equestrian
11:13:53 Rapcoon | Jester
I've got 5 too xD via cat distribution system lol
CWY country
11:12:58 C
We have 5 cats in the house. All have been rescues from not so good circumstances.

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Maleficents
12:43:42 Dona
Heading off for tonight, good night everyone!
Wynter's Frost
12:33:51 Wynter/Skyrim
Thanks! It's my first WWW on this account.
Gypsy Family Farm
12:33:21 
Congrats Wynter!
Gypsy Family Farm
12:32:48 
I love her little striped hoof.
Wynter's Frost
12:32:30 Wynter/Skyrim
-HEE Click-
I did not expect this.
Sunni
12:32:28 Sunni bunny
That plus 10 capture map is working hard today.
Sunni
12:31:29 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
Oooo~
Gypsy Family Farm
12:25:46 
He's so shiny on the chestnut looking part.
MC Ace
12:22:22 McFossil
Oh pretty Gypsy.
Sunni
12:21:26 Sunni bunny
Thank you Diva
Gypsy Family Farm
12:17:30 
Random chimera I did not know I owned. Fun color combo. -HEE Click-
Moonrose Magic
12:12:54 🎀 Diva
2.30am
Sunni
12:06:35 Sunni bunny
Dose the games day start at 12am?
CWY country
11:49:53 C
Oh, I'll have to get a picture of our newest addition that we got a few months ago. He's about a six month old kitten who has one eye.
KPH Equestrian
11:45:51 Rapcoon | Jester
oh my goodness šŸ˜he's so handsome🄰
CWY country
11:36:46 C
-Click-

Hopefully this works?
KPH Equestrian
11:24:18 Rapcoon | Jester
aw cute<3
CWY country
11:17:23 C
The one in my lap, is a big black cat with a white spot on his chest that adopted the family when he was living as a stray alley cat. His name is Kopi.
KPH Equestrian
11:13:53 Rapcoon | Jester
I've got 5 too xD via cat distribution system lol
CWY country
11:12:58 C
We have 5 cats in the house. All have been rescues from not so good circumstances.

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The Official Art Critique Forum March 1, 2022 10:23 PM


Ironclad Roan Estate
 
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Back after making the suggested edits. Thoughts now? :3

Ironclad Roan Estate said:
Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.


The Official Art Critique Forum March 2, 2022 01:01 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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it's very good! the alteration definitely changed it for the better
The Official Art Critique Forum March 2, 2022 11:24 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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hey... i'm back again >_> i really want to try diminish any consistent faults in my art, i mean that's how you improve, no?
i think using larger red stock definitely helps my art, i mena the quality as far better.
i don't usually do softer lighting :/ so i'm not sure if it looks right, but i was super proud of the color ( it was from bay so not that impressive really, but it's neat )
edit: plz zoom, it's very big haha

Edited at March 2, 2022 11:27 AM by Bermuda Estate
The Official Art Critique Forum March 2, 2022 11:32 AM

Former Stable
 
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I love the positioning, the color, and the overall entire aspect of this. It's unique and honestly I love the blur in the foreground and the background, draws you to the detail of the horse.
My critiques are very small. You have harsher lines on the outside of the horse, and rest is very soft looking. I'd add the sharper lines to the face muscles, legs, etc. Make it crisp all over, or softer all over.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 2, 2022 11:34 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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thankyou ^-^ imma go run to ibis now lol
The Official Art Critique Forum March 6, 2022 08:44 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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i'm back with a slightly different kinda piece, based of the direhorses from Avatar ( it's clicky, please zoom )

Edited at March 6, 2022 09:13 AM by Bermuda Estate
The Official Art Critique Forum March 10, 2022 07:19 AM


Over the Garden Wall
 
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Is there a trick for turning grey noses pink? I'm using a grey horse stock, but my desired outcome has some pink. The trouble mainly is that the face is in front of the body so I'm worried about 'pinking' over areas I don't want too.

Also any tips for drawing jewellery or should I try finding stock for that? Asking mainly because I don't know how detailed to make it and I don't want it looking flat.

The Official Art Critique Forum March 10, 2022 07:46 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Over the Garden Wall said:
Is there a trick for turning grey noses pink? I'm using a grey horse stock, but my desired outcome has some pink. The trouble mainly is that the face is in front of the body so I'm worried about 'pinking' over areas I don't want too.

Also any tips for drawing jewellery or should I try finding stock for that? Asking mainly because I don't know how detailed to make it and I don't want it looking flat.



i'd draw greyish pink-orange ( anything in between the two ) on overland or possibly one of the lightening layers and jsut erase around the nose once you've blended it out :)
as for jewell's i'm afraid i can't be much help
The Official Art Critique Forum March 11, 2022 10:49 AM


Bermuda Estate
 
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Exibit A
clicky as always
i'm really proud of this haha but it still needs critique, always room for improvement
please not pick
( PS: zoom in on the people taking pictures if your looking for attention to detail :)

Edited at March 11, 2022 10:49 AM by Bermuda Estate
The Official Art Critique Forum March 11, 2022 11:02 AM


Sweetwater Creek
 
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If I zoom in some I can see the faults in your white lining. Try to clean that up a bit if you can. There's also a small sharp dip that's throwing me off. Just past where the horse body meets the fish part. Try and smooth that out (: great work though. My jaw literally dropped when I seen it.

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