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The Official Art Critique Forum April 23, 2022 04:43 AM


Hellscape
 
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hair doesn't like me XD at least it has volume 😂
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 07:03 AM

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Would love some critques on my lates pieces
Hooves are probably the weakest point in the piece below, was a full colour change
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 07:24 AM


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honestly, the shadow was the first thing i noticed. body prep is gorgeous, but the horse doesn't really fit in with the background
assuming the hooves are drawn, they all look great besides the front right :D i really like it !
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 07:40 AM

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Hermes Warmbloods said:
honestly, the shadow was the first thing i noticed. body prep is gorgeous, but the horse doesn't really fit in with the background
assuming the hooves are drawn, they all look great besides the front right :D i really like it !


Thanks Hermes!
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 07:41 AM


Hellscape
 
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anytime! you're getting so much better it's awesome :D
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:10 AM


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Kirralee said:
Would love some critques on my lates pieces
Hooves are probably the weakest point in the piece below, was a full colour change


I actually quite like the horse on that background. As the background is not super vibrant, the coat of the horse would not reflect the colour very strongly, which is what you have done. It fits fine. Your grounding is fine here. What a gorgeous colour change. <3
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The shadow appears to be in the correct place. The thing that can be improved about it is some blurring. Basically, since the light in the background seems to be muted and not directly on the horse, the shadow from the horse would not have a bold and specific outline. It'd be more a dark puddle on the floor. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:25 AM


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Versailles said:

Kirralee said:
Would love some critques on my lates pieces
Hooves are probably the weakest point in the piece below, was a full colour change


I actually quite like the horse on that background. As the background is not super vibrant, the coat of the horse would not reflect the colour very strongly, which is what you have done. It fits fine. Your grounding is fine here. What a gorgeous colour change. <3
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The shadow appears to be in the correct place. The thing that can be improved about it is some blurring. Basically, since the light in the background seems to be muted and not directly on the horse, the shadow from the horse would not have a bold and specific outline. It'd be more a dark puddle on the floor. :)


thats pretty similar to what i was thinking, however its pretty easy to accidentally over-blur something so i dont blame you :) been there done that millions of times
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:32 AM

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is this better? Lighter or darker?

Edited at April 30, 2022 08:35 AM by Kirralee
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:34 AM


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Kirralee said:
is this better?


Perfect! Beautiful work <3
Shadows can't really be over-blurred, especially in very misty pieces with indirect light, so you don't have to be too shy with it. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum April 30, 2022 08:36 AM

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Thank you both

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