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Angels angels
07:40:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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How does this even happpen lol
Sunset River Arabian
07:23:03 Athena - AAs
Angels
Sorry I poofed lol
Those look shiny and exciting!!
Narran Park
07:16:33 Sting
Dug this Suggestion up from the past.
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
07:08:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
One step at a time lol
Get the sabino out then work on the bay xD
Narran Park
07:08:19 Sting
I am pretty happy with this fellow from RO though.
-HEE Click-
Narran Park
07:07:12 Sting
Hopefully!
the EEAA drives me mad, but anyway.
Angels angels
07:06:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh I hope she does good for you!
Narran Park
07:05:29 Sting
Just bought my first WWW mare. Seeing i can't breed one!
Hopefully her training works out.
A good foundation for the X project.
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
07:04:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah lol Ginko is pretty cool too
Narran Park
07:03:50 Sting
Basil is probably one of the coolest chimeras ive seen
Angels angels
07:02:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
I have been showing them off all day lol I am TERRIFIED
If they flop I am probably going to quit HEE xDD
Dash and Duchess
07:00:59 DD | ~Squizard~
Angel, I'm totally stalking those 👀
Angels angels
07:00:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
I hope so lol one is a tobi (possibly homo) AA match the other is a possibly tobi TB match
Sunset River Arabian
06:59:36 Athena - AAs
Well good luck! You matches have been doing better than mine so you've got to be doing something right lol
Angels angels
06:58:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
I do too but I have two matches finally worthy of them this RO so I am going for my first ever svens lol
Sunset River Arabian
06:57:55 Athena - AAs
I might have a small fear of those
Angels angels
06:56:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have to buy two svens too..
Astral Appies
06:53:44 Athena's SA - KNNs
PONs and AAs are done and I'm just waiting on one straw and one glass for the RIDs. Than its all the AAs to match
Angels angels
06:53:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
All the straws for my matches and the items
Glacier Bay Cove
06:52:53 Arctic Katz
like what, Angels

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Angels angels
07:40:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-Click-
How does this even happpen lol
Sunset River Arabian
07:23:03 Athena - AAs
Angels
Sorry I poofed lol
Those look shiny and exciting!!
Narran Park
07:16:33 Sting
Dug this Suggestion up from the past.
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
07:08:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
One step at a time lol
Get the sabino out then work on the bay xD
Narran Park
07:08:19 Sting
I am pretty happy with this fellow from RO though.
-HEE Click-
Narran Park
07:07:12 Sting
Hopefully!
the EEAA drives me mad, but anyway.
Angels angels
07:06:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh I hope she does good for you!
Narran Park
07:05:29 Sting
Just bought my first WWW mare. Seeing i can't breed one!
Hopefully her training works out.
A good foundation for the X project.
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
07:04:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah lol Ginko is pretty cool too
Narran Park
07:03:50 Sting
Basil is probably one of the coolest chimeras ive seen
Angels angels
07:02:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
I have been showing them off all day lol I am TERRIFIED
If they flop I am probably going to quit HEE xDD
Dash and Duchess
07:00:59 DD | ~Squizard~
Angel, I'm totally stalking those 👀
Angels angels
07:00:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
I hope so lol one is a tobi (possibly homo) AA match the other is a possibly tobi TB match
Sunset River Arabian
06:59:36 Athena - AAs
Well good luck! You matches have been doing better than mine so you've got to be doing something right lol
Angels angels
06:58:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
I do too but I have two matches finally worthy of them this RO so I am going for my first ever svens lol
Sunset River Arabian
06:57:55 Athena - AAs
I might have a small fear of those
Angels angels
06:56:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have to buy two svens too..
Astral Appies
06:53:44 Athena's SA - KNNs
PONs and AAs are done and I'm just waiting on one straw and one glass for the RIDs. Than its all the AAs to match
Angels angels
06:53:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
All the straws for my matches and the items
Glacier Bay Cove
06:52:53 Arctic Katz
like what, Angels

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The Official Art Critique Forum May 17, 2022 07:50 PM


Silent Hill Equines
 
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Critique on this piece?


Any tips on body prep on Ibispaintx? I'm having a heck of a time with it! Any other criticism is also welcome :)
The Official Art Critique Forum May 17, 2022 07:52 PM


Hellscape
 
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HMH Reality Check said:
Would love some critique on this piece!


I LOVE the little hooves <3 The only things I can point out without staring into its soul is the way the tail just kind of stops between the legs, coming out onto the right side. It looks just like a blunt stop of brush strokes. What I recommend is adding the layers, making some pieces longer than others and some not so straight and perfect :)
The other thing is a very soft muscle definition. Lots of highlights, but the muscles aren't as defined after the front hooves. I prefer to make smaller shadowing lines to the highlights so there's plenty of dimension, without being too blunt or over blended.
Overall, I think its absolutely adorable!
The Official Art Critique Forum May 18, 2022 05:18 AM


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Rumble Team
 
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Thank you! The stock was pretty smooth already, so repairing was a little difficult, the I couldn't resist the stock. I will definitely apply this to my next piece!
The Official Art Critique Forum May 19, 2022 05:58 PM


The Mystic One
 
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hi friends, I'd like to hear your thoughts on this piece. I feel like something is.. off.. but I can't quite put my finger on it. The petals feel a bit out of place but it's a love/hate relationship right now. All opinions please!
The Official Art Critique Forum May 19, 2022 06:05 PM


Rivendell Steeds
 
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Personally, I think the overall piece looks great, especially the hair.
However, there is something I notice that makes the grounding look off: on the right front hoof of the horse, there is a slim but dark edge. The edge makes it seem as though the horse is supposed to be on the ground, but isn't. If you were to smooth out the botttom part of that hoof to look similar to the hoof behind it, I think just that little change would make the piece pop.

Edited at May 19, 2022 06:07 PM by Rivendell Steeds
The Official Art Critique Forum May 19, 2022 06:10 PM


The Mystic One
 
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Rivendell Steeds said:
Personally, I think the overall piece looks great, especially the hair.
However, there is something I notice that makes the grounding look off: on the right front hoof of the horse, there is a slim but dark edge. The edge makes it seem as though the horse is supposed to be on the ground, but isn't. If you were to smooth out the botttom part of that hoof to look similar to the hoof behind it, I think just that little change would make the piece pop.



Fixed!
Edited to add: thank you for the compliment! I'm quite proud of the hair, I feel I've finally found my style! I'm really proud of the "ghost" foal, it was surprisingly tricky to make haha. Overall I'm happy with how it turned out, but like I stated before I feel like it's missing something. I really want to add antlers, I'm slightly obsessed with putting antlers on horses after the piece I did for Herm xD However antlers don't really fit the theme I was given unfortunately
Edit 2: Sorry Mods, just now realizing I completely forgot credits. Will add and edit ASAP
Edit 3: Credits added

Edited at May 19, 2022 06:36 PM by The Mystic One
The Official Art Critique Forum May 21, 2022 06:44 PM


Ginger Ridge
 
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Hmm...
First off, seriously amazing job on this one, it's incredible!
A flower could add a little something to the piece. I don't know what kind of vibe you're going for, but I love putting flowers in manes and tails, and the horse could also be holding one in its mouth.
Jewelry is also cool, and it goes with almost anything. Things like necklaces, bracelets, and amulets can really spice up a piece.
I hope that helps somewhat!
The Official Art Critique Forum May 21, 2022 06:53 PM


The Mystic One
 
Posts: 432
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Ginger Ridge said:
Hmm...
First off, seriously amazing job on this one, it's incredible!
A flower could add a little something to the piece. I don't know what kind of vibe you're going for, but I love putting flowers in manes and tails, and the horse could also be holding one in its mouth.
Jewelry is also cool, and it goes with almost anything. Things like necklaces, bracelets, and amulets can really spice up a piece.
I hope that helps somewhat!


Noted, thank you!
The Official Art Critique Forum May 21, 2022 08:15 PM


Rivendell Steeds
 
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Oh! I just thought of something for that piece: add some mist or fog near the bottom of the rocks/hooves. The rocks at the bottom already appear to have some fog, so why not make it seem as though the fog is beginning to swallow the hooves/surroundings?

Edited at May 21, 2022 08:18 PM by Rivendell Steeds
The Official Art Critique Forum May 21, 2022 10:35 PM


The Mystic One
 
Posts: 432
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Rivendell Steeds said:
Oh! I just thought of something for that piece: add some mist or fog near the bottom of the rocks/hooves. The rocks at the bottom already appear to have some fog, so why not make it seem as though the fog is beginning to swallow the hooves/surroundings?


Doh! Why didn't I think of that?? 😂😂

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