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EWE RID Freshman! -HEE Click-
Sleepwalker Centre
04:22:56 Walker
3yo PPP-Sub mahogany bay frame WB mare for sale, not yet bred this year, 1k obo
-HEE Click-
DragonFyre Estate
04:15:33 Whip
WWW AALB stud for offers. No sabino and no roan on top of being a consistently higher AALB stud. PM me to discuss.
-HEE Click-

Also taking offers on these mares. 3EWWs and a WWW. All well bred and colorful. PM me to discuss.
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
04:05:23 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Anyone want these horses?
Munchkin Stables
04:02:14 Munn - PONs
Selling
PON stallions
EEEs and a EWE with Sabino.
-HEE Click-
Bermuda Triangle
03:57:42 Lost
Auction ends today!!
Www
-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
03:54:28 AA Breeder
Auction! Culling mares. Includes svenned girls & color (Spl, To, prl). Ratings range from EWP combos to EWW with some AD + B thrown in there
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
03:54:17 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
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Fading Light Estate
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-HEE Click- 2 year old color horses for sale
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The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2024 06:19 PM


Circle F Stables
 
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posted twice on accident

Edited at December 4, 2024 06:20 PM by Circle F Stables
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2025 07:03 AM


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Circle F Stables said:
any tips? my first time adding wings to anything and not amazing with manes and tails but getting there!


I'd say make sure that the wings are rooted closer to/in the shoulder, for anatomy!! Looks gorgeous!

Edited at January 24, 2025 07:04 AM by WeepingEye'sManor
The Official Art Critique Forum January 26, 2025 02:54 PM


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looking for some critique :D
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The Official Art Critique Forum January 26, 2025 02:57 PM


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Circle F Stables said:
any tips? my first time adding wings to anything and not amazing with manes and tails but getting there!


This is so cute!! I'd recommend erasing the part of the mane that goes over the wings, so that they look a bit more even <3
The Official Art Critique Forum January 26, 2025 03:12 PM


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Dash and Duchess said:
looking for some critique :D
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Just initial thoughts, the horse seems almost sort of dull. Technically yes the horse is in shadow but it's almost hard to see. I would recommend upping the contrast and brightness of the background and adjust the horse accordingly. You could also darken the foreground (Multiple layer, large dark green airbrush) to draw more attention to the horse. Part of the dullness I think is also the lack of color on the horse's body aside from the yellow highlights. Don't be afraid to add shadows using dark green/brown even though the horse's base coat is black/grey. Almost all black fur has either a dark blue or dark red (brown) undertone which would help make the horse look more natural.
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I absolutely love the texture and transluscency of the fabric!! I would just say to be careful about stark white outlines, particularly around the underside of the horse. I understand that you're trying to make the horse stand out a bit more but it just feels unnatural. To achieve a similar effect, I would add a new layer behind the horse, set it to Hard Light, and use an airbursh to create a soft gold outline around the lit parts of the horse, adjust layer transparency and blurring as needed.
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The hair is completely gorgeous. I just have a lil question about lighting. Looking at the section of hair in between the horse's back legs, it is highlighted once it emerges from behind the farther back leg. However, this highlight is not carried over to the horse's leg or underbelly. I think it's up to you if that area is highlighted or not but consistency is important ;D
Last thing about lighting is that the horse's face has some very strong highlights despite being on the complete opposite side of the light source. Overall, I love the definition of the musculature and the piece as a whole is very very lovely <3

Edited at January 26, 2025 03:12 PM by Gem

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