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Angels angels
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Windswept
Sent one
Angels angels
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Blue
Elessairon is up for 185k, same owner and only one higher on ABLB so probably around that
Skye's Paradise
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His straws were 180. I just looked at my accountant. He'd be in that range for a LC I think.
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Does anyone have water I can have for a quest?
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Bluebonnet Estates
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Anyone remember how much rathoriel is to breed?
Skye's Paradise
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She's a nice mare.
Skye's Paradise
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I would so Sven that Blue.
Lovely angels
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Definitely Blue!

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Do it then lol
Pegasus Lane
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Uhhh depends on the year but they're on the lb? lmao they're real bitches
Bluebonnet Estates
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Should I try Sven this or use it on a different match
Crestwood Eq.
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Angel

i've never had chillis....
Perfect angels
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Ivy
Lol we went to chillis

Peg
If your mares are good producers go for it lol
Crestwood Eq.
03:06:41 Ivy / poison ivy
Angel

never ate lunch xD
Pegasus Lane
03:06:18 Peggy (or) Peg
Is it worth testing him with my own mares? They'll all need a scope glass but otherwise they match pretty well 😅
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Awesome Angels
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I am alright. Stomach hurts right now because I ate too much lol you?
Crestwood Eq.
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how are you
Awesome Angels
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Hello :)
Crestwood Eq.
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angel

hi

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Windswept
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Thank you!
Angels angels
03:26:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Windswept
Sent one
Angels angels
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Blue
Elessairon is up for 185k, same owner and only one higher on ABLB so probably around that
Skye's Paradise
03:25:59 Pickle
His straws were 180. I just looked at my accountant. He'd be in that range for a LC I think.
Windswept
03:25:50 
Does anyone have water I can have for a quest?
Bluebonnet Estates
03:22:42 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Pickle
Thank you!
Bluebonnet Estates
03:22:30 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Anyone remember how much rathoriel is to breed?
Skye's Paradise
03:19:46 Pickle
She's a nice mare.
Skye's Paradise
03:18:57 Pickle
I would so Sven that Blue.
Lovely angels
03:11:19 Angel's angels (SA)
Definitely Blue!

Peg
Do it then lol
Pegasus Lane
03:10:03 Peggy (or) Peg
Uhhh depends on the year but they're on the lb? lmao they're real bitches
Bluebonnet Estates
03:09:49 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
-HEE Click-
Should I try Sven this or use it on a different match
Crestwood Eq.
03:09:28 Ivy / poison ivy
Angel

i've never had chillis....
Perfect angels
03:09:06 (Angels angels SA)
Ivy
Lol we went to chillis

Peg
If your mares are good producers go for it lol
Crestwood Eq.
03:06:41 Ivy / poison ivy
Angel

never ate lunch xD
Pegasus Lane
03:06:18 Peggy (or) Peg
Is it worth testing him with my own mares? They'll all need a scope glass but otherwise they match pretty well 😅
-HEE Click-
Awesome Angels
03:05:04 Angel's angels (SA)
I am alright. Stomach hurts right now because I ate too much lol you?
Crestwood Eq.
03:04:17 Ivy / poison ivy
how are you
Awesome Angels
02:59:32 Angel's angels (SA)
Hello :)
Crestwood Eq.
02:59:22 Ivy / poison ivy
angel

hi

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The Official Art Critique Forum December 12, 2019 12:37 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://i.ibb.co/sCVtSv6/Untitled484-1.jpg

I'd appreciate some in depth, nitpicking crituque on this please
The Official Art Critique Forum December 12, 2019 01:07 PM


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Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://i.ibb.co/sCVtSv6/Untitled484-1.jpg

I'd appreciate some in depth, nitpicking crituque on this please


To me, the cheekbone right under the eye is a lil sharp and maybe too highlighted? Also, the feathers aren't as detailed as they maybe could or should be? I LOVE the hair and the eye. Maybe add some of the pink to the forelock as if the eye was a light source?
If I may ask, how'd you do the tail? I love it!
The Official Art Critique Forum December 12, 2019 01:11 PM


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Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://i.ibb.co/sCVtSv6/Untitled484-1.jpg

I'd appreciate some in depth, nitpicking crituque on this please

Great work overall.

First thing I notice is the horses cheek. It's extremely sharp and just doesn't look right - no horse has that sharp of a cheekbone lol. Try softening it a bit. There seems to be a lack of highlights in the horses mane and tail which make it look like a big blue lump. The edges of the wings look really choppy and rough in a few places, make sure to have smooth consistency when cutting them out. I'd try to bring just a tad more of a purple hue into the horse to flow with the background better. The horse seems overly smudged and lacks muscle definition, especially in the face. I understand some people enjoy the smudged look and it's part of your style, but it seems overboard. Try toning that down just a tad and adding more highlights and lowlights, especially to the face, for that muscle definition :)
The Official Art Critique Forum December 12, 2019 01:15 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Amera Eventing said:


Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://i.ibb.co/sCVtSv6/Untitled484-1.jpg

I'd appreciate some in depth, nitpicking crituque on this please

Great work overall.

First thing I notice is the horses cheek. It's extremely sharp and just doesn't look right - no horse has that sharp of a cheekbone lol. Try softening it a bit. There seems to be a lack of highlights in the horses mane and tail which make it look like a big blue lump. The edges of the wings look really choppy and rough in a few places, make sure to have smooth consistency when cutting them out. I'd try to bring just a tad more of a purple hue into the horse to flow with the background better. The horse seems overly smudged and lacks muscle definition, especially in the face. I understand some people enjoy the smudged look and it's part of your style, but it seems overboard. Try toning that down just a tad and adding more highlights and lowlights, especially to the face, for that muscle definition :)





Breezie Rose said:


Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://i.ibb.co/sCVtSv6/Untitled484-1.jpg

I'd appreciate some in depth, nitpicking crituque on this please


To me, the cheekbone right under the eye is a lil sharp and maybe too highlighted? Also, the feathers aren't as detailed as they maybe could or should be? I LOVE the hair and the eye. Maybe add some of the pink to the forelock as if the eye was a light source?
If I may ask, how'd you do the tail? I love it!



Thank you both
I'll see what I can do ^^
I did the cheekbone like that as it was based of a horse prep tutorial, I'll try and alter it now ^^
The Official Art Critique Forum December 12, 2019 02:09 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://i.ibb.co/q5CPw14/Untitled484-2.jpg
Does this look better?
I redid the hair
The Official Art Critique Forum December 12, 2019 02:40 PM

Former Stable
 
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The Official Art Critique Forum December 12, 2019 02:48 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Oh god all the posts are messed up
The Official Art Critique Forum December 14, 2019 03:34 AM

Former Stable
 
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Opinions on this piece?
I have been working on a new style and I'm enjoying it more 😊

The Official Art Critique Forum December 14, 2019 04:07 AM


Moonglade Manor
 
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Kirralee said:

Opinions on this piece?
I have been working on a new style and I'm enjoying it more 😊



I like it, although I think that the bright lines around the horse are a bit too thick, maybe make them a small bit thinner, maybe the actual neck is a bit too thin, it might not look as thin with a mane, other than that I can't see anything wrong with it :)

Edited at December 14, 2019 04:08 AM by Moonglade Manor
The Official Art Critique Forum December 14, 2019 12:01 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Lazy Duck Elites said:
Critique? :D


This looks awsome ari!
Try adding some lowlights and highlights to the hair, it looks just like a block of colour and doesn't have any definition
Everything else looks great to me

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