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Hummingbird Meadows
11:08:06 Bird
Ugh, I feel depressed tonight. I was supposed to meet with my therapist, but forgot I had clinicals.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:52:04 Arctic Katz
I am curious as to what my sign in bonus will be, tomorrow
Crimson Manor
10:49:57 Lillie Pt 2
actually no she might not be.. that was probably the other foal, she is still very cute!
Crimson Manor
10:47:50 Lillie Pt 2
she was just a quest foal so shes ToTo on top of that!
All Breeds
10:47:29 Fawn
One of the prettiest brindles I've bred in awhile
-HEE Click-
Crimson Manor
10:47:07 Lillie Pt 2
Sting
Right?! I dont know if I've seen this kind before, looks like she's dipped in gold
Ironhorse
10:44:11 Sting
Lillie, that chim is one of the nicest ive seen!
Rain Plains
10:43:34 Kelan/Rain
Really? It works when I turn my phone
Glacier Bay Cove
10:42:51 Arctic Katz
Maybe it doesn't work on cell phones, the way it does on tablets
Rain Plains
10:42:02 Kelan/Rain
Thanks Eve, I learned something new!
Cadence Farms
10:41:40 evebot
You can see it if you turn your phone sideways. :)
Rain Plains
10:37:08 Kelan/Rain
Jacob you just don't see it on mobile
Jacobs Irish Mash
10:36:22 Jacob
Is featured horse not a thing anymore? Is it just mobile?
Glacier Bay Cove
10:34:16 Arctic Katz
Oohh, I love her colors
Wisteria Run Farm
10:27:33 Solar/Ria
wow, she's so striking!
Crimson Manor
10:24:43 Lillie Pt 2
-HEE Click-
This chimera pattern is pretty cool with the other patterns! I was super surprised bt her raitings
Wisteria Run Farm
10:21:13 Solar/Ria
it seems to! I think they cut it into slices first before freezing, so they could grate it like that
Hummingbird Meadows
10:20:05 Bird
@Solar, does that even work?
Sunni
10:17:04 Sunni bunny
I might actually try that tomorrow.
Wisteria Run Farm
10:16:12 Solar/Ria
I saw a suggestion to freeze pieces of watermelon and grate it, I want to try that at some point lol

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Hummingbird Meadows
11:08:06 Bird
Ugh, I feel depressed tonight. I was supposed to meet with my therapist, but forgot I had clinicals.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:52:04 Arctic Katz
I am curious as to what my sign in bonus will be, tomorrow
Crimson Manor
10:49:57 Lillie Pt 2
actually no she might not be.. that was probably the other foal, she is still very cute!
Crimson Manor
10:47:50 Lillie Pt 2
she was just a quest foal so shes ToTo on top of that!
All Breeds
10:47:29 Fawn
One of the prettiest brindles I've bred in awhile
-HEE Click-
Crimson Manor
10:47:07 Lillie Pt 2
Sting
Right?! I dont know if I've seen this kind before, looks like she's dipped in gold
Ironhorse
10:44:11 Sting
Lillie, that chim is one of the nicest ive seen!
Rain Plains
10:43:34 Kelan/Rain
Really? It works when I turn my phone
Glacier Bay Cove
10:42:51 Arctic Katz
Maybe it doesn't work on cell phones, the way it does on tablets
Rain Plains
10:42:02 Kelan/Rain
Thanks Eve, I learned something new!
Cadence Farms
10:41:40 evebot
You can see it if you turn your phone sideways. :)
Rain Plains
10:37:08 Kelan/Rain
Jacob you just don't see it on mobile
Jacobs Irish Mash
10:36:22 Jacob
Is featured horse not a thing anymore? Is it just mobile?
Glacier Bay Cove
10:34:16 Arctic Katz
Oohh, I love her colors
Wisteria Run Farm
10:27:33 Solar/Ria
wow, she's so striking!
Crimson Manor
10:24:43 Lillie Pt 2
-HEE Click-
This chimera pattern is pretty cool with the other patterns! I was super surprised bt her raitings
Wisteria Run Farm
10:21:13 Solar/Ria
it seems to! I think they cut it into slices first before freezing, so they could grate it like that
Hummingbird Meadows
10:20:05 Bird
@Solar, does that even work?
Sunni
10:17:04 Sunni bunny
I might actually try that tomorrow.
Wisteria Run Farm
10:16:12 Solar/Ria
I saw a suggestion to freeze pieces of watermelon and grate it, I want to try that at some point lol

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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