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Sweet Valley
12:17:02 Anna/Jewel
The Horse
By Sweet Valley
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The noble creature
Called the horse
Is truly a work of art;
Their heads, their hooves
Their manes, their tails;
You can truly tell;
and when you're sad,
They'll comfort you.
They know how to make you glad.
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I know that one didn't rhyme but I just wrote it and love it
Ivy League Acres
12:17:00 Ivy - your slay one
Gypsy

just trying to make Vecc understand
Ivy League Acres
12:16:38 Ivy - your slay one
can yall stop giving me life lessons. i get that too much in real life. yall dont know the situation. not trying to be rude. just over it if you know what i mean. like, i accept the thought but you know...
Gypsy Family Farm
12:15:55 
Also please apologize to Vecc because that reply came off perhaps ruder than you might have intended.
Minerva
12:15:21 Min
Aww how come Myth? Im riding in an hour but trying to not fall asleep in the meantime haha, accidentally pulled a late one last night and im twatted
Gypsy Family Farm
12:14:41 
Ivy; I've been in love a lot in my life, and one thing I can say with absolute certainty (besides that love is different for everyone) is that my teenage love was not love; it was a crush- it was about so much more of my feelings for the person than the actual person. I didn't know the actual person at all, just who they were to me, if that makes sense? Same feelings I'd have for an actor/character crush.
Sweet Valley
12:14:38 Anna/Jewel
To me, teenage love isn't right unless you are 18 or older, but that's just my standards. I won't get in the way of other people's standards.
Mythological
12:13:53 Crowley
Min
Been better...you?
Crestwood Eq.
12:13:48 Ivy / poison ivy
Min

Yea but for now i dont want to think that way lol
The Pirate King
12:13:27 The Armada
It's definitely true.
Minerva
12:13:04 Min
Lol Ivy you'll look back on it one day and realise its true.

Hi Myth! How are you?
Mythological
12:12:16 Crowley
Hello Min
Crestwood Eq.
12:12:04 Ivy / poison ivy
Vecc

please dont say that. im tired of people telling me that.


min

i am crappy at times xD
Minerva
12:10:31 Min
The "crappy girl" verse is a bit much if im honest, but the rest isnt too over the top I think
Vecchia Modo
12:10:27 Vecc - TBs
Ivy - teenage 'love' is more infatuation/crush than the kind of love adults know.
Crestwood Eq.
12:09:34 Ivy / poison ivy
Min

is it clingy given my past xD
Minerva
12:09:15 Min
Oh yeah its pretty good!!
Crestwood Eq.
12:08:11 Ivy / poison ivy
Bree

of course
Crestwood Eq.
12:08:03 Ivy / poison ivy
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12:08:00 BluebonnetBree
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Sweet Valley
12:17:02 Anna/Jewel
The Horse
By Sweet Valley
------------------------
The noble creature
Called the horse
Is truly a work of art;
Their heads, their hooves
Their manes, their tails;
You can truly tell;
and when you're sad,
They'll comfort you.
They know how to make you glad.
------------
I know that one didn't rhyme but I just wrote it and love it
Ivy League Acres
12:17:00 Ivy - your slay one
Gypsy

just trying to make Vecc understand
Ivy League Acres
12:16:38 Ivy - your slay one
can yall stop giving me life lessons. i get that too much in real life. yall dont know the situation. not trying to be rude. just over it if you know what i mean. like, i accept the thought but you know...
Gypsy Family Farm
12:15:55 
Also please apologize to Vecc because that reply came off perhaps ruder than you might have intended.
Minerva
12:15:21 Min
Aww how come Myth? Im riding in an hour but trying to not fall asleep in the meantime haha, accidentally pulled a late one last night and im twatted
Gypsy Family Farm
12:14:41 
Ivy; I've been in love a lot in my life, and one thing I can say with absolute certainty (besides that love is different for everyone) is that my teenage love was not love; it was a crush- it was about so much more of my feelings for the person than the actual person. I didn't know the actual person at all, just who they were to me, if that makes sense? Same feelings I'd have for an actor/character crush.
Sweet Valley
12:14:38 Anna/Jewel
To me, teenage love isn't right unless you are 18 or older, but that's just my standards. I won't get in the way of other people's standards.
Mythological
12:13:53 Crowley
Min
Been better...you?
Crestwood Eq.
12:13:48 Ivy / poison ivy
Min

Yea but for now i dont want to think that way lol
The Pirate King
12:13:27 The Armada
It's definitely true.
Minerva
12:13:04 Min
Lol Ivy you'll look back on it one day and realise its true.

Hi Myth! How are you?
Mythological
12:12:16 Crowley
Hello Min
Crestwood Eq.
12:12:04 Ivy / poison ivy
Vecc

please dont say that. im tired of people telling me that.


min

i am crappy at times xD
Minerva
12:10:31 Min
The "crappy girl" verse is a bit much if im honest, but the rest isnt too over the top I think
Vecchia Modo
12:10:27 Vecc - TBs
Ivy - teenage 'love' is more infatuation/crush than the kind of love adults know.
Crestwood Eq.
12:09:34 Ivy / poison ivy
Min

is it clingy given my past xD
Minerva
12:09:15 Min
Oh yeah its pretty good!!
Crestwood Eq.
12:08:11 Ivy / poison ivy
Bree

of course
Crestwood Eq.
12:08:03 Ivy / poison ivy
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BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:08:00 BluebonnetBree
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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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