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Port Royal Equines

07:22:31 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale

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Lvl 5+ geldings.

-HEE Click-
Scatter geldings 1k.

Bermuda Triangle

07:07:51 Lost

World class auction

Including a WWW mare

-HEE Click-

06:25:46

Looking to buy an upgrade ebs ready

Fluffy's Cosy Home

06:17:48 Fluffy

PM me if selling upgrades plz

06:15:59 Enoki | Maddie

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Gelding sales

Blueberry Ledge

05:27:09

-HEE Click-

Rares up for auction!
Brindles
Chimera
Peacock
Manchado
Sootys

04:04:23 Kas

Looking for a 3 month uprade pls pm
Also have horses for sale

Wild Wind Stables

03:31:55 Wind

"Auction: Colorful foals -- including an EPE Brindle filly -- and some solid show horses
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WWW ISH mare for sale. 700k only! Need her gone

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My mares are now up for 194 including WWW producer
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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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