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WWW X dun mare no sabino
WWE WB mare WWW producer
EEW X mare no sabino
EWE X dun mare no sabino
need all gone asap! Just don't fit into my program anymore. Will accept almost any offer, trade, or payment plan!
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PPP PEP mix's SD.
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10:34:15 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
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Insignia Elites
10:23:43 Em
Less than 2 hours left! EEE+ Mares! -HEE Click-
Wild Wind Stables
10:18:38 Wind
-- Selling--
EPP Perlino Dun Rabicano Appendix colt
PEE Silver Roan Grullo Rabicano ISH filly
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Wild Wind Stables
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Hopes Life
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Horses in my main barn for sale. A few in auction and many for just normal buyout.
Angels angels
10:02:37 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
WWW X dun mare no sabino
WWE WB mare WWW producer
EEW X mare no sabino
EWE X dun mare no sabino
need all gone asap! Just don't fit into my program anymore. Will accept almost any offer, trade, or payment plan!
Sunni
09:58:35 Sunni bunny
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Times up auction started now, $1'000- and up.
These are horse that flopped this RO
PPP PEP mix's SD.
Just need these cute foals gone.
starmutt
09:53:01 happy pride! :3
LF: premium upgrade
H: art
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Circle Star TBs
09:42:44 Lily
World Class bravery KNN mare, 4k!
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Alpine Acres
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WWW SH stallion for auction!
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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

 Former Stable
 
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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