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EWE-WWW WB and X mares for sale! Will take offers on any need gone!
Disney Acres
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EEW TB mare 40k will lower
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The Lazy Ninja
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Wild EEW WC Bravery 300k obo
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Two Trees Stables
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Connally Stud
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Alpine Acres
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Classic Fortune
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WWW ISH STALLION!!
Name: Astral Índalo (Indy)
Rating: WWW // Coat: 1 of 28
Price: 20.000
Min. Rat.: EWW (Any combo)
His first foal rated EWW!! And he gives very rare and colorful foals.
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Darley Heights
10:52:43 Deelad
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Auctioning off WEW stallion, starts tomorrow at 1AM gametime
DragonFyre Estate
10:40:50 Whip
WWW-EWW clearout. Includes LB and LB Lined stock. Make offers before i start FRing on RO. PM me to discuss.
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Insignia Elites
11:37:39 Em
20 minutes left of auction! EEE and EEW mares! -HEE Click-
Angels angels
11:32:16 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
EWE-WWW WB and X mares for sale! Will take offers on any need gone!
Disney Acres
11:13:46 
EEW TB mare 40k will lower
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
11:08:46 Jessie
Wild EEW WC Bravery 300k obo
-HEE Click-
Two Trees Stables
11:03:01 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Connally Stud
10:58:16 Senda
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
10:58:02 Lily/Alpine
Clifftop Appy art auction
-HEE Click-
Classic Fortune
10:56:53 Clau/Spring


WWW ISH STALLION!!
Name: Astral Índalo (Indy)
Rating: WWW // Coat: 1 of 28
Price: 20.000
Min. Rat.: EWW (Any combo)
His first foal rated EWW!! And he gives very rare and colorful foals.
-HEE Click-
Darley Heights
10:52:43 Deelad
-HEE Click-
Auctioning off WEW stallion, starts tomorrow at 1AM gametime
DragonFyre Estate
10:40:50 Whip
WWW-EWW clearout. Includes LB and LB Lined stock. Make offers before i start FRing on RO. PM me to discuss.
-HEE Click-

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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