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Cadence Farms
01:40:56 evebot
That is the plan. ;)
NightClan
01:40:52 Night
DD and Capp,
Yeah the stormrage one has given me wwws before so I'm holding out for a WWW ee Rb Z ToTo filly lol
Vancouver
01:38:18 Ana / Van
Angel
Yess!
Angels angels
01:37:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
We need the barn art but in different colors lol
FirstLightFarms
01:32:24 puck
Omg omg memorial art
The Joker
01:32:06 Ari <3
Oh I like those
Cappuccino
01:31:36 Heyy it's Capp
Ive got these embryos Ill probably use
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CWY country
01:31:28 C
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These two ladies will forever be in my barn. They both gave me WWW for their maiden years.
Peachy
01:30:23 peach | abbi
excited for her! don't have a stud yet but we'll get there -HEE Click-
Angels angels
01:30:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Everyone loves Ginko lol I don't see how he isn't on the ABLB
Peachy
01:29:40 peach | abbi
oh very, very thin xD
Dash and Duchess
01:29:27 DD | ~Squizard~
Ooo love those night!
Dash and Duchess
01:29:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Peach, those other two are on thin ice? XD
Cappuccino
01:29:14 Heyy it's Capp
Nice TB matches Night!!
Peachy
01:28:58 peach | abbi
really loving that first match, night!
Dash and Duchess
01:28:48 DD | ~Squizard~
Tasi, thank you!! I'm so happy with it! Charm really made lil Petri look awesome >u<
Angels angels
01:28:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Peach
Same lol I have some on thin ice
Peachy
01:28:08 peach | abbi
i had my one who threw her first WWW...so she stays forever but the other two >.>
NightClan
01:28:03 Night
Ooo are we showing top matches? These are mine xD (I better get rabi at least once before she retires...)
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Spirtasi Whims
01:28:00 Tasi / Chat Killer
DD that art is so pretty!!

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Cadence Farms
01:40:56 evebot
That is the plan. ;)
NightClan
01:40:52 Night
DD and Capp,
Yeah the stormrage one has given me wwws before so I'm holding out for a WWW ee Rb Z ToTo filly lol
Vancouver
01:38:18 Ana / Van
Angel
Yess!
Angels angels
01:37:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
We need the barn art but in different colors lol
FirstLightFarms
01:32:24 puck
Omg omg memorial art
The Joker
01:32:06 Ari <3
Oh I like those
Cappuccino
01:31:36 Heyy it's Capp
Ive got these embryos Ill probably use
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
CWY country
01:31:28 C
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
These two ladies will forever be in my barn. They both gave me WWW for their maiden years.
Peachy
01:30:23 peach | abbi
excited for her! don't have a stud yet but we'll get there -HEE Click-
Angels angels
01:30:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Everyone loves Ginko lol I don't see how he isn't on the ABLB
Peachy
01:29:40 peach | abbi
oh very, very thin xD
Dash and Duchess
01:29:27 DD | ~Squizard~
Ooo love those night!
Dash and Duchess
01:29:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Peach, those other two are on thin ice? XD
Cappuccino
01:29:14 Heyy it's Capp
Nice TB matches Night!!
Peachy
01:28:58 peach | abbi
really loving that first match, night!
Dash and Duchess
01:28:48 DD | ~Squizard~
Tasi, thank you!! I'm so happy with it! Charm really made lil Petri look awesome >u<
Angels angels
01:28:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Peach
Same lol I have some on thin ice
Peachy
01:28:08 peach | abbi
i had my one who threw her first WWW...so she stays forever but the other two >.>
NightClan
01:28:03 Night
Ooo are we showing top matches? These are mine xD (I better get rabi at least once before she retires...)
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Spirtasi Whims
01:28:00 Tasi / Chat Killer
DD that art is so pretty!!

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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