Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Year: 193   Season: Fall   
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pandemoniu_m
12:51:59 pheezy
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:51:53 pheezy
sigh the quality has been burnt, crumpled, and stomped on- not in that order- but my old coot finally has some oomf
Fantasy Horses
12:46:02 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
Her and all her little critter buddies <3
Nolified
12:21:43 noli,SH thief,bread
And you shall be gelded

-HEE Click-
Emmas Eventers
12:19:59 
I'm only on 104 days, not by choice but internet went down late on a Saturday so didn't get fixed til the Monday
pandemoniu_m
12:19:31 pheezy
okay boulder!
Boulder Creek
12:11:52 
Pheezy - add that idea to this suggestion
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Bioshock Manor
12:08:50 Storm
1337 days logged in. I need a more adventure filled life 😂
Bioshock Manor
12:07:54 Storm
Right 😭
MakeEm Fancy
12:07:33 Ally 💜
1961 days logged in :D
pandemoniu_m
12:04:55 pheezy
i wish we could trade quest items into the store for things of equal value. i got a cc medallion but i need a jumping one 😭
Bioshock Manor
12:01:56 Storm
Honestly should be able to give away questions items. St least donate to the falls. I can't stand having all this useless stuff
Lucky Ranch
11:53:40 luhckeigh
Me and derby hats are so locked in thsts my true huzz
Neverfade Manor
11:51:26 Storm
It's easier than it used to be
Skyward Stud
11:45:16 Skrangle
I love the derby hats game. it's funding my entire account at this point lol
CWY country
11:28:31 C
Roan, you're welcome :)
RealTree EQ.
11:25:00 Roan🦋⃤
thank youu!
CWY country
11:24:46 C
Roan, she's super pretty.
RealTree EQ.
11:24:44 Roan🦋⃤
Palomino,

I do as well, shes beautiful!
Palomino Meadow
11:24:08 
Love her color, Tree!

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pandemoniu_m
12:51:59 pheezy
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:51:53 pheezy
sigh the quality has been burnt, crumpled, and stomped on- not in that order- but my old coot finally has some oomf
Fantasy Horses
12:46:02 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
Her and all her little critter buddies <3
Nolified
12:21:43 noli,SH thief,bread
And you shall be gelded

-HEE Click-
Emmas Eventers
12:19:59 
I'm only on 104 days, not by choice but internet went down late on a Saturday so didn't get fixed til the Monday
pandemoniu_m
12:19:31 pheezy
okay boulder!
Boulder Creek
12:11:52 
Pheezy - add that idea to this suggestion
-HEE Click-
Bioshock Manor
12:08:50 Storm
1337 days logged in. I need a more adventure filled life 😂
Bioshock Manor
12:07:54 Storm
Right 😭
MakeEm Fancy
12:07:33 Ally 💜
1961 days logged in :D
pandemoniu_m
12:04:55 pheezy
i wish we could trade quest items into the store for things of equal value. i got a cc medallion but i need a jumping one 😭
Bioshock Manor
12:01:56 Storm
Honestly should be able to give away questions items. St least donate to the falls. I can't stand having all this useless stuff
Lucky Ranch
11:53:40 luhckeigh
Me and derby hats are so locked in thsts my true huzz
Neverfade Manor
11:51:26 Storm
It's easier than it used to be
Skyward Stud
11:45:16 Skrangle
I love the derby hats game. it's funding my entire account at this point lol
CWY country
11:28:31 C
Roan, you're welcome :)
RealTree EQ.
11:25:00 Roan🦋⃤
thank youu!
CWY country
11:24:46 C
Roan, she's super pretty.
RealTree EQ.
11:24:44 Roan🦋⃤
Palomino,

I do as well, shes beautiful!
Palomino Meadow
11:24:08 
Love her color, Tree!

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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