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Kiwi Mountains
04:21:01 Kiwi
Will more than happily take that!
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Greenheart Stables
04:17:54 Green|Gren|Grenlin
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Ohh??!!
Greenheart Stables
04:17:28 Green|Gren|Grenlin
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Ooh šŸ‘€
Minerva
04:15:52 Min
Yikes
Mythological
04:15:28 Crowley
Min
People keep asking his age... 🤦‍ā™€ļø
Minerva
04:13:42 Min
Ooh that sounds interesting!
Mythological
04:13:24 Crowley
The horse is hard to see
Mythological
04:12:46 Crowley
Min
I was modding a stream šŸ’€
Mythological
04:12:20 Crowley
Oop I have to go do something lšŸ˜‚
Minerva
04:12:16 Min
I accidentally played the Sims until 2am šŸ™ˆ
Calela Eventing
04:11:51 Cali
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How's it now?
Mythological
04:10:57 Crowley
I was on YT lol
Minerva
04:05:52 Min
Oh crap so did I Myth, and I was sat at my computer
Lucky
03:51:32 luvky
Me too Mythy, i'm never here for it lol
Mythological
03:50:46 Crowley
Whoops I missed trivia last night lol
Tobiano Lady
03:38:51 Tobi | Nix
Green
Lucky!! Congrats :D
Hot 2 Trot *Showing*
03:33:30 Holly
Well for a random breeding that's alright
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Alpine Acres
03:25:40 Lily/Alpine
Cali, it's lovely! I would make the credits a little more visible though
Ponies heaven
03:21:19 Pera/ peral
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Greenheart Stables
03:16:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Nix
Had lots of love this RO from my SD, that whole barn is nothing but showstoppers after I hard culled

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Kiwi Mountains
04:21:01 Kiwi
Will more than happily take that!
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Greenheart Stables
04:17:54 Green|Gren|Grenlin
-HEE Click-
Ohh??!!
Greenheart Stables
04:17:28 Green|Gren|Grenlin
-HEE Click-
Ooh šŸ‘€
Minerva
04:15:52 Min
Yikes
Mythological
04:15:28 Crowley
Min
People keep asking his age... 🤦‍ā™€ļø
Minerva
04:13:42 Min
Ooh that sounds interesting!
Mythological
04:13:24 Crowley
The horse is hard to see
Mythological
04:12:46 Crowley
Min
I was modding a stream šŸ’€
Mythological
04:12:20 Crowley
Oop I have to go do something lšŸ˜‚
Minerva
04:12:16 Min
I accidentally played the Sims until 2am šŸ™ˆ
Calela Eventing
04:11:51 Cali
-Click-
How's it now?
Mythological
04:10:57 Crowley
I was on YT lol
Minerva
04:05:52 Min
Oh crap so did I Myth, and I was sat at my computer
Lucky
03:51:32 luvky
Me too Mythy, i'm never here for it lol
Mythological
03:50:46 Crowley
Whoops I missed trivia last night lol
Tobiano Lady
03:38:51 Tobi | Nix
Green
Lucky!! Congrats :D
Hot 2 Trot *Showing*
03:33:30 Holly
Well for a random breeding that's alright
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
03:25:40 Lily/Alpine
Cali, it's lovely! I would make the credits a little more visible though
Ponies heaven
03:21:19 Pera/ peral
-HEE Click-
Greenheart Stables
03:16:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Nix
Had lots of love this RO from my SD, that whole barn is nothing but showstoppers after I hard culled

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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