Horse Eden : Critiques?

12:32:04 Walker

Nice!

Embervale Acres

12:31:26 Solar Phoenix

Oh, I hadn't noticed my girl is horse of the year for breeding o.o
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12:30:18 Walker

Remi,
my pleasure c:

Dun Fall Estates

12:29:58 Remi | Rem | PON/TB

Walker
thanks!!

12:29:26 Walker

Willow,
it's all numbers in the end B)

12:29:07 Walker

Yep! annd he gives me dusty or flurry vibes, if that gives you an inspo

Rising Stars Stable

12:28:29 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Walker
You keep soaking your team mate, XD

Dun Fall Estates

12:28:21 Remi | Rem | PON/TB

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Fixed?

12:27:37 Walker

Broken link, remi

Dun Fall Estates

12:26:29 Remi | Rem | PON/TB

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Showname ideas?

12:22:01 Walker

Ohh, thank you mcfossil

MC Ace

12:21:52 McFossil

Random Factor = RF

12:21:38 Walker

What does RF stand for in this context?

MC Ace

12:21:32 McFossil

Ah ok. I don’t breed for bravery. Sounds like a real pain. So kudos to ya’ll still rolling.

12:21:22 S҉ Sem

She must have absurd RF. Or.its a bug.

12:20:49 S҉ Sem

Angel, yes and no. You must divide between the bravery rating and the effectiveness in passing it along. They do not always correlate, same as with ratings. Some WWWs never give a W.

Motonemi

12:20:05 AL, mum to Nemi

And it seems she is bred with a bravery item too, the LBs like items

12:19:29 S҉ Sem

Fossil, there are heavy ties in the bravery rating and that is resolved by ratings, so they influence the boards.

Angels angels

12:19:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ace
Yeah but bravery breeding in general is a crap shoot. There is no way to match them you just throw them together and nine times out of ten you get crap lol

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Embervale Acres

12:32:52 Solar Phoenix

I don't really know all that entails XD

12:32:04 Walker

Nice!

Embervale Acres

12:31:26 Solar Phoenix

Oh, I hadn't noticed my girl is horse of the year for breeding o.o
-HEE Click-

12:30:18 Walker

Remi,
my pleasure c:

Dun Fall Estates

12:29:58 Remi | Rem | PON/TB

Walker
thanks!!

12:29:26 Walker

Willow,
it's all numbers in the end B)

12:29:07 Walker

Yep! annd he gives me dusty or flurry vibes, if that gives you an inspo

Rising Stars Stable

12:28:29 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Walker
You keep soaking your team mate, XD

Dun Fall Estates

12:28:21 Remi | Rem | PON/TB

-HEE Click-
Fixed?

12:27:37 Walker

Broken link, remi

Dun Fall Estates

12:26:29 Remi | Rem | PON/TB

-HEE Click-
Showname ideas?

12:22:01 Walker

Ohh, thank you mcfossil

MC Ace

12:21:52 McFossil

Random Factor = RF

12:21:38 Walker

What does RF stand for in this context?

MC Ace

12:21:32 McFossil

Ah ok. I don’t breed for bravery. Sounds like a real pain. So kudos to ya’ll still rolling.

12:21:22 S҉ Sem

She must have absurd RF. Or.its a bug.

12:20:49 S҉ Sem

Angel, yes and no. You must divide between the bravery rating and the effectiveness in passing it along. They do not always correlate, same as with ratings. Some WWWs never give a W.

Motonemi

12:20:05 AL, mum to Nemi

And it seems she is bred with a bravery item too, the LBs like items

12:19:29 S҉ Sem

Fossil, there are heavy ties in the bravery rating and that is resolved by ratings, so they influence the boards.

Angels angels

12:19:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ace
Yeah but bravery breeding in general is a crap shoot. There is no way to match them you just throw them together and nine times out of ten you get crap lol

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

Casanova

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Casanova

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

Casanova

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM