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Tobiano Lady
07:10:54 Tobi 👻
My mom also looks way younger than she is, to the point where people think we're sisters.
Sunni
07:09:38 Sunni bunny
Lone star XD I am under 5 foot apparently.
Tobiano Lady
07:09:23 Tobi 👻
Not even 25 yet and people I ask think I'm between 16-18. I think I look older now that I have a short hairstyle but I also haven't changed since I hit puberty. I think it's the baby face blegh.
Sunni
07:09:06 Sunni bunny
Cove I should have put him in the kennel.
But him and the dogs have been fine together so I left him out.
He likes sitting in the window.
I am just glad the kids didn't see him.
The Lone Star
07:08:42 
My mother has that youthful look too. She's 58 and she gets carded all the time at bars. Mind you, she's also 5'2".
Glacier Bay Cove
07:08:02 Arctic Katz
Crying for the grey kitten
Sunni
07:07:40 Sunni bunny
Cove sadly no, he hung himself.
We didn't find him in time.
Cpr didn't work.
Sunni
07:07:14 Sunni bunny
God I can't English right now.
Also cove I thought you where much younger for some reason.
Glacier Bay Cove
07:07:05 Arctic Katz
Is he okay
Sunni
07:06:38 Sunni bunny
Oh cove, something bad happened to the grey kitten.
Poor guy for hung in the blinds why my husband was out with the kids....
Glacier Bay Cove
07:06:28 Arctic Katz
I am 51,, but I look like I am in my twenties
Sunni
07:05:47 Sunni bunny
Cove I am 25.
Glacier Bay Cove
07:04:53 Arctic Katz
And they are surprised when I tell them my age
Sunni
07:04:41 Sunni bunny
Cove I find it as a blessing to a degree.
I can trick a lot of people just joking XD.
Glacier Bay Cove
07:04:24 Arctic Katz
Everyone always thinks that I am much younger than I really am
Glacier Bay Cove
07:02:33 Arctic Katz
I deal with the age issue too
KPH Equestrian
07:01:11 Rapcoon | Jester
No rats will be getting into the chicken coop with Dixie on guard😎
-Click-
Sunni
06:59:57 Sunni bunny
Athena I feel you on that, I almost got walked out of my job because they thought I was a lost kid XD.
Fantasy Horses
06:59:32 Fantasy | Fanta
Oh good it's working now
Fantasy Horses
06:57:58 Fantasy | Fanta
Athena
I'm on your stable page and the cursor won't load so I can't see what I'm clicking lol XD

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Tobiano Lady
07:10:54 Tobi 👻
My mom also looks way younger than she is, to the point where people think we're sisters.
Sunni
07:09:38 Sunni bunny
Lone star XD I am under 5 foot apparently.
Tobiano Lady
07:09:23 Tobi 👻
Not even 25 yet and people I ask think I'm between 16-18. I think I look older now that I have a short hairstyle but I also haven't changed since I hit puberty. I think it's the baby face blegh.
Sunni
07:09:06 Sunni bunny
Cove I should have put him in the kennel.
But him and the dogs have been fine together so I left him out.
He likes sitting in the window.
I am just glad the kids didn't see him.
The Lone Star
07:08:42 
My mother has that youthful look too. She's 58 and she gets carded all the time at bars. Mind you, she's also 5'2".
Glacier Bay Cove
07:08:02 Arctic Katz
Crying for the grey kitten
Sunni
07:07:40 Sunni bunny
Cove sadly no, he hung himself.
We didn't find him in time.
Cpr didn't work.
Sunni
07:07:14 Sunni bunny
God I can't English right now.
Also cove I thought you where much younger for some reason.
Glacier Bay Cove
07:07:05 Arctic Katz
Is he okay
Sunni
07:06:38 Sunni bunny
Oh cove, something bad happened to the grey kitten.
Poor guy for hung in the blinds why my husband was out with the kids....
Glacier Bay Cove
07:06:28 Arctic Katz
I am 51,, but I look like I am in my twenties
Sunni
07:05:47 Sunni bunny
Cove I am 25.
Glacier Bay Cove
07:04:53 Arctic Katz
And they are surprised when I tell them my age
Sunni
07:04:41 Sunni bunny
Cove I find it as a blessing to a degree.
I can trick a lot of people just joking XD.
Glacier Bay Cove
07:04:24 Arctic Katz
Everyone always thinks that I am much younger than I really am
Glacier Bay Cove
07:02:33 Arctic Katz
I deal with the age issue too
KPH Equestrian
07:01:11 Rapcoon | Jester
No rats will be getting into the chicken coop with Dixie on guard😎
-Click-
Sunni
06:59:57 Sunni bunny
Athena I feel you on that, I almost got walked out of my job because they thought I was a lost kid XD.
Fantasy Horses
06:59:32 Fantasy | Fanta
Oh good it's working now
Fantasy Horses
06:57:58 Fantasy | Fanta
Athena
I'm on your stable page and the cursor won't load so I can't see what I'm clicking lol XD

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Art criticism January 13, 2024 02:57 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Please offer me advice! Working on ibis paint with an iPad and stylus
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Edited at January 13, 2024 02:59 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 02:55 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Still looking for advice + pricing suggestions. Thank you :)
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:07 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Doubt post sorry!

Edited at January 16, 2024 03:30 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:16 PM


Amethyst Ranch
 
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I'd definitely say you could be in low tier 1 :) The hair in piece 1 and 3 is amazing <3
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:22 PM


The Unknown
 
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The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.

Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:24 PM


Sweetwater Creek
 
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I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:31 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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The Unknown said:

The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.



I repaint the whole horse depending if I like the face or not lol.
I would love shadow advice - I can never place them right I think I just don't understand light xD
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:32 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Sweetwater Creek said:
I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!


Awesome thanks a million! I really neglect the bodies of my horses which is totally my bad
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:38 PM


Zomb
 
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I personally would say high T2. I love the feel of them! But as stated above, the shadowing feels off for me. I like the lighting on the horse, some soft shadows would define them even more (if you haven't already). Along side the lack of definition in the body with muscles etc etc. but that's easily fixable with a chalk pen + a soft light layer (one for light another for shadows). I think if you could work on those two (happy to help where I can) you definitely would be T1 without a doubt :)
Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:21 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Really interested for critique and thought on this:

Based on this forum I tried to focus on muscling through the body. I hope I've improved a bit.

Edited at June 2, 2024 07:37 AM by Enoki Valley

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