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Ravenwood Farm
03:22:11 
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This is the one I need to make the embryo for, I was thinking Tesoro if he cab still do embryos, but I'm not sure about that hrt or str honestly
NightClan
03:21:54 Night
Yeah, I'm hopeful I get some nice ee based TBs with fun colors and good ratings
Minerva
03:20:55 Min
Ahh fair play! Good luck with both of them though, fingers crossed!
NightClan
03:20:26 Night
Min,
Yeah, I'd definitely bump up hrt some...the color potential is what I'm really eyeballing haha
Minerva
03:19:33 Min
Night, I didn't think the Ginkgo one matched particularly well to be honest- there's a lack in HRT for sure
Black Moon Magic
03:19:15 Mori
He was 16.3 in May, then I changed his feed and suddenly his clumsiness made more sense

Minerva
That's why I haven't got him any blankets yet XD
NightClan
03:19:14 Night
Thanks guys!
Minerva
03:18:59 Min
Thankfully I picked up 2 Kuuma straws so that's Hephaestine's second and Daeira's first sorted since they both produced WWWs with him this month. Might just chuck the other two at some untracked studs and see what happens because they're not LB material anyway
Fantasy Horses
03:17:43 Fantasy | Fanta
Night
I agree with Min
NightClan
03:17:40 Night
Min,
That was the initial plan but Ginkgo has so much color potential and they match super well so now I'm stuck xD
Rancho Redondo
03:17:09 Trini
how yall getting these beautiful Wild WWW’s >.< good luck on her wk3/4 ! and congrats hehe
Ravenwood Farm
03:17:04 
Oops, I wish you luck Min
Minerva
03:16:49 Min
I'd sven the stormrage one 100%
NightClan
03:15:41 Night
Which one do we think gets the filly sven? The other one would just get a med since I'm broke lol
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Minerva
03:15:19 Min
Oh shit I haven't even done first embryos for 3 of my 4, whoops
Ravenwood Farm
03:13:53 
Uff I still have to make the second embryo of one of my girls
Prismatic
03:08:32 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Indeed. My WB herd kind of sucks otherwise lol
Minerva
03:07:32 Min
Hopefully she matches one of the other W4 boys and you can start a proper dynasty xD
Minerva
03:07:03 Min
Fingers crossed Prism! I'm still drooling over her, she's a really impressive capture
Prismatic
03:06:24 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I am praying she has a good wk 3/4 T_T she's the first WWW I've ever had

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Ravenwood Farm
03:22:11 
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This is the one I need to make the embryo for, I was thinking Tesoro if he cab still do embryos, but I'm not sure about that hrt or str honestly
NightClan
03:21:54 Night
Yeah, I'm hopeful I get some nice ee based TBs with fun colors and good ratings
Minerva
03:20:55 Min
Ahh fair play! Good luck with both of them though, fingers crossed!
NightClan
03:20:26 Night
Min,
Yeah, I'd definitely bump up hrt some...the color potential is what I'm really eyeballing haha
Minerva
03:19:33 Min
Night, I didn't think the Ginkgo one matched particularly well to be honest- there's a lack in HRT for sure
Black Moon Magic
03:19:15 Mori
He was 16.3 in May, then I changed his feed and suddenly his clumsiness made more sense

Minerva
That's why I haven't got him any blankets yet XD
NightClan
03:19:14 Night
Thanks guys!
Minerva
03:18:59 Min
Thankfully I picked up 2 Kuuma straws so that's Hephaestine's second and Daeira's first sorted since they both produced WWWs with him this month. Might just chuck the other two at some untracked studs and see what happens because they're not LB material anyway
Fantasy Horses
03:17:43 Fantasy | Fanta
Night
I agree with Min
NightClan
03:17:40 Night
Min,
That was the initial plan but Ginkgo has so much color potential and they match super well so now I'm stuck xD
Rancho Redondo
03:17:09 Trini
how yall getting these beautiful Wild WWW’s >.< good luck on her wk3/4 ! and congrats hehe
Ravenwood Farm
03:17:04 
Oops, I wish you luck Min
Minerva
03:16:49 Min
I'd sven the stormrage one 100%
NightClan
03:15:41 Night
Which one do we think gets the filly sven? The other one would just get a med since I'm broke lol
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Minerva
03:15:19 Min
Oh shit I haven't even done first embryos for 3 of my 4, whoops
Ravenwood Farm
03:13:53 
Uff I still have to make the second embryo of one of my girls
Prismatic
03:08:32 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Indeed. My WB herd kind of sucks otherwise lol
Minerva
03:07:32 Min
Hopefully she matches one of the other W4 boys and you can start a proper dynasty xD
Minerva
03:07:03 Min
Fingers crossed Prism! I'm still drooling over her, she's a really impressive capture
Prismatic
03:06:24 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I am praying she has a good wk 3/4 T_T she's the first WWW I've ever had

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Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:53 PM


Sagebrush
 
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Looks incredible! I love the muscle definition. In my opinion,
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You need different shades of brown. Grey muzzle, maybe lighter orange/yellow around the points, like chest, armpit, flank, muzzle, etc. darker brown on the bony parts and over the back, on the withers, forehead, etc. Example
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Hair, you need more shading. It's really nice and detailed, but it's a bit strong. You can make the lighting a bit more dramatic over the whole horse, which will make it seem like it fits in better. Purple parts can be darkened (I would use a near black colour on soft light or overlay, and then smudge and blur it to get the desired effect). And then the yellow are the bright highlights, which I would make a similar colour to your backlight, so a bright red/purple. Make sure to do the shadow and highlights on seperate layers from the hair, using a clipping mask Hair idea
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Personally, I would also darken your current strands of hair a smidge, and redo some highlight strands with the shade you're currently using! I would also add some shadowy strands. (Not really sure how to describe this, sorry!
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Lighting, darken up the front of the horse because that's away from the light (but not too much because you need to still see the horse, I showed kind of where I would darken it using purple), and yellow is where I would add the lighting. Example of lighting I would do lighting similar to how I did my My firework piece I do lighting with add, overlay, or soflight and use an almost white colour on a seperate layer. Darkness I use almost black and either soft light or overlay. Blue is kinda where I'd position a shadow, and I choose a colour that's almost black and lower the opacity. I would add some more light where I added the white dot, to make it more dramatic.
Personally, I'd also make the eye a little bit bigger, as that's a central focus of the horses face.
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I love the vibe of this piece, the stock and the background work really well together and the horse really seems to be there! The patterns also turned out really nice, especially in the darker lighting! I can't wait to see how much more you improve in the future!
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Edit: forgot to mention, I would also blur the background a bit and add some vignette! And usually tobiano comes with a face marking, so that might help bring the piece together. Heres a very messy example of all the changes I've suggested implemented on the actual piece! https://i.ibb.co/9b1h0Ts/IMG-8191.png

Edited at March 31, 2024 03:18 PM by Sagebrush
Art criticism March 31, 2024 04:16 PM


Enoki Valley
 
Posts: 2295
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Sagebrush said:
Looks incredible! I love the muscle definition. In my opinion,
.
You need different shades of brown. Grey muzzle, maybe lighter orange/yellow around the points, like chest, armpit, flank, muzzle, etc. darker brown on the bony parts and over the back, on the withers, forehead, etc. Example
.
Hair, you need more shading. It's really nice and detailed, but it's a bit strong. You can make the lighting a bit more dramatic over the whole horse, which will make it seem like it fits in better. Purple parts can be darkened (I would use a near black colour on soft light or overlay, and then smudge and blur it to get the desired effect). And then the yellow are the bright highlights, which I would make a similar colour to your backlight, so a bright red/purple. Make sure to do the shadow and highlights on seperate layers from the hair, using a clipping mask Hair idea
.
Personally, I would also darken your current strands of hair a smidge, and redo some highlight strands with the shade you're currently using! I would also add some shadowy strands. (Not really sure how to describe this, sorry!
.
Lighting, darken up the front of the horse because that's away from the light (but not too much because you need to still see the horse, I showed kind of where I would darken it using purple), and yellow is where I would add the lighting. Example of lighting I would do lighting similar to how I did my My firework piece I do lighting with add, overlay, or soflight and use an almost white colour on a seperate layer. Darkness I use almost black and either soft light or overlay. Blue is kinda where I'd position a shadow, and I choose a colour that's almost black and lower the opacity. I would add some more light where I added the white dot, to make it more dramatic.
Personally, I'd also make the eye a little bit bigger, as that's a central focus of the horses face.
.
I love the vibe of this piece, the stock and the background work really well together and the horse really seems to be there! The patterns also turned out really nice, especially in the darker lighting! I can't wait to see how much more you improve in the future!
.
Edit: forgot to mention, I would also blur the background a bit and add some vignette! And usually tobiano comes with a face marking, so that might help bring the piece together. Heres a very messy example of all the changes I've suggested implemented on the actual piece! https://i.ibb.co/9b1h0Ts/IMG-8191.png


Wow. I'm a huge fan of your pieces and I love the improvements you have made - totally agree! I struggle with lighting so I will be doing a massive focus on it. Thanks for all the critique, I know I takes time. Will be taking this onboard!
Art criticism June 2, 2024 07:36 AM


Enoki Valley
 
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Just popping this up hoping for a bit more criticism. I am hoping I have taken on board some things lol. I think it's a solid improvement. If you have any input, thanks a bunch!
Art criticism June 2, 2024 09:39 AM


Sagebrush
 
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I love it!!! The soft flow of the hair, the lighting, everything is really well done.
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Problems I see is that I don't like the boots on the horse. I would've tried to cover this up with rocks or shadows or replaced the legs with different stock/done a tack removal.
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Second, there's something missing to this piece. Unfortunately I can't put my finger on it, but it's making it feel a little incomplete, hopefully some other artist can help me figure out what it is!
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Overall extremely well done,, I can't find much else to critique!

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