Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 193   Season: Fall   
$: 0
Forecast: Sunny
Forecast:
Mon 07:14am  
Stables Online:  90 
Chatbox
Wisteria Run Farm
07:13:44 Solar/Ria
I'm so happy XD
Alpine Acres
07:12:03 Lily/Alpine
Congrats Solar, she is rich!
Wisteria Run Farm
07:10:55 Solar/Ria
Oh my goodness, yay!!
-HEE Click-
Winterfell yard
07:08:29 
AL
Ok perfect thank you
ArcticLights
07:07:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL
If you aim to breed WWW, train in AD. And the more traits that goes up the better
Winterfell yard
07:06:10 
Ok I'm really sorry to be a pest again ;-; so what is it people look for in a stud what's the traits I should be aiming to breed
Hy Brasil
07:06:01 Croft
well she is garbage -HEE Click-
Paradise Stables
06:59:13 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-

I'm happy with this one though
At Wit's End
06:56:52 Gosky
I mean.. how are both her colts weak kn strength x.x

-HEE Click-
Paradise Stables
06:55:57 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-

She isn't all up either, eugh
At Wit's End
06:55:09 Gosky
Both weak in strength. Grr.
At Wit's End
06:54:27 Gosky
You couldn't have trained like your brother...

-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
06:52:23 Cali
Really struggling to pick out an age rating for my book
Paradise Stables
06:50:05 Ariel / Tara
AL, wish he went all up to be fair
ArcticLights
06:49:38 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Viktor is not oof
Paradise Stables
06:48:55 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-

That's a slight oof too
Paradise Stables
06:45:03 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-

That's an oof.. but I guess I didn't have big expectations anyway
Winterfell yard
06:37:07 
I play wolfplay 24/7 so this one's a bit different to me
Winterfell yard
06:36:44 
ZZ
I'll try and get where I want to thank you for helping me
ZequineZ
06:35:51 ZEZ - ZZ
Stable > stable activities > stable colours

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests
Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Wisteria Run Farm
07:13:44 Solar/Ria
I'm so happy XD
Alpine Acres
07:12:03 Lily/Alpine
Congrats Solar, she is rich!
Wisteria Run Farm
07:10:55 Solar/Ria
Oh my goodness, yay!!
-HEE Click-
Winterfell yard
07:08:29 
AL
Ok perfect thank you
ArcticLights
07:07:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL
If you aim to breed WWW, train in AD. And the more traits that goes up the better
Winterfell yard
07:06:10 
Ok I'm really sorry to be a pest again ;-; so what is it people look for in a stud what's the traits I should be aiming to breed
Hy Brasil
07:06:01 Croft
well she is garbage -HEE Click-
Paradise Stables
06:59:13 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-

I'm happy with this one though
At Wit's End
06:56:52 Gosky
I mean.. how are both her colts weak kn strength x.x

-HEE Click-
Paradise Stables
06:55:57 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-

She isn't all up either, eugh
At Wit's End
06:55:09 Gosky
Both weak in strength. Grr.
At Wit's End
06:54:27 Gosky
You couldn't have trained like your brother...

-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
06:52:23 Cali
Really struggling to pick out an age rating for my book
Paradise Stables
06:50:05 Ariel / Tara
AL, wish he went all up to be fair
ArcticLights
06:49:38 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Viktor is not oof
Paradise Stables
06:48:55 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-

That's a slight oof too
Paradise Stables
06:45:03 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-

That's an oof.. but I guess I didn't have big expectations anyway
Winterfell yard
06:37:07 
I play wolfplay 24/7 so this one's a bit different to me
Winterfell yard
06:36:44 
ZZ
I'll try and get where I want to thank you for helping me
ZequineZ
06:35:51 ZEZ - ZZ
Stable > stable activities > stable colours

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#997994
Give Award
(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
Posts: 1057
#997995
Give Award
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#997996
Give Award
I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#997998
Give Award
There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#998073
Give Award
One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

Moderator
 
Posts: 4101
#998115
Give Award
Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Refresh