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Glacier Bay Cove
11:37:15 Arctic Katz
Broken link, Tobi
Glacier Bay Cove
11:36:44 Arctic Katz
Trying to figure out how many Ebs I can work on earning/saving before RO gets here
Tobiano Lady
11:24:15 Tobi 👻
-HEE Click-
Welcome to the world, my first tobi WC SJ PON :P
Wild Wind Stables
11:09:18 Wind
Just got a genetic test on this guy, do you think anyone could be interested in him as a color stud?
-HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
11:06:57 Rapcoon | Jester
Glass
Looks like one of the new ones, I think it's LpLp?
Embervale Acres
11:02:07 Solar Phoenix
I want to say it's hetero, but not 100% sure
Embervale Acres
10:59:51 Solar Phoenix
I started looking for specific color studs XD

and that's because English is multiple languages in a trench coat passing itself off as something entirely different lol
Looking Glass Stable
10:59:42 IA Glass 👋
-HEE Click-

Anyone know if this is a homo or hetero Appaloosa pattern?
Fantasy Horses
10:59:26 Fantasy | Fanta
Bye everyone
Fantasy Horses
10:57:55 Fantasy | Fanta
Know what else is weird? the english language. I really hate it.
Fantasy Horses
10:57:27 Fantasy | Fanta
Nice Solar! That's a good thing to be sidetracked by lol
Embervale Acres
10:37:28 Solar Phoenix
well...I got a little distracted breeding for a PPP XD
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Rainbow
10:12:00 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
People are weird in general lol
Tobiano Lady
10:09:57 Tobi 👻
People are weird for being weird about divorced parents.
Rainbow
10:06:45 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Bird
Oh wow, yeah, you were an infant! Whatever your parents did has nothing to do with you at that point. I don't know why someone would judge a kid for having divorced parents. That's just wild.
Lunar Wilds
10:06:38 Lux - AAs
Bird
He didn’t realize, he backtracked some once he was told but he also had a habit of mansplaining that made it very funny to be a part of haha
Hummingbird Meadows
10:05:25 Bird
@Lux, sounds like he needed to vent. That or didn't realize everyone at the table had divorced parents. XD
Lunar Wilds
10:05:10 Lux - AAs
Bird
I’m sorry they were so close minded about it
Lunar Wilds
10:04:35 Lux - AAs
Bird
I once went on a double date where the other’s guy talked about how traumatic their parents amicable divorce was and how we didn’t know how divorce could be damaging for kids (they were 17 when it happened). While divorce can be traumatic and damaging, he was talking to a table full of people with divorced parents
Hummingbird Meadows
10:03:44 Bird
@Rainy, I have been looked down on it for my whole life even though I wasn't even 1 when it happened. It sucks.

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Glacier Bay Cove
11:37:15 Arctic Katz
Broken link, Tobi
Glacier Bay Cove
11:36:44 Arctic Katz
Trying to figure out how many Ebs I can work on earning/saving before RO gets here
Tobiano Lady
11:24:15 Tobi 👻
-HEE Click-
Welcome to the world, my first tobi WC SJ PON :P
Wild Wind Stables
11:09:18 Wind
Just got a genetic test on this guy, do you think anyone could be interested in him as a color stud?
-HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
11:06:57 Rapcoon | Jester
Glass
Looks like one of the new ones, I think it's LpLp?
Embervale Acres
11:02:07 Solar Phoenix
I want to say it's hetero, but not 100% sure
Embervale Acres
10:59:51 Solar Phoenix
I started looking for specific color studs XD

and that's because English is multiple languages in a trench coat passing itself off as something entirely different lol
Looking Glass Stable
10:59:42 IA Glass 👋
-HEE Click-

Anyone know if this is a homo or hetero Appaloosa pattern?
Fantasy Horses
10:59:26 Fantasy | Fanta
Bye everyone
Fantasy Horses
10:57:55 Fantasy | Fanta
Know what else is weird? the english language. I really hate it.
Fantasy Horses
10:57:27 Fantasy | Fanta
Nice Solar! That's a good thing to be sidetracked by lol
Embervale Acres
10:37:28 Solar Phoenix
well...I got a little distracted breeding for a PPP XD
-HEE Click-
Rainbow
10:12:00 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
People are weird in general lol
Tobiano Lady
10:09:57 Tobi 👻
People are weird for being weird about divorced parents.
Rainbow
10:06:45 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Bird
Oh wow, yeah, you were an infant! Whatever your parents did has nothing to do with you at that point. I don't know why someone would judge a kid for having divorced parents. That's just wild.
Lunar Wilds
10:06:38 Lux - AAs
Bird
He didn’t realize, he backtracked some once he was told but he also had a habit of mansplaining that made it very funny to be a part of haha
Hummingbird Meadows
10:05:25 Bird
@Lux, sounds like he needed to vent. That or didn't realize everyone at the table had divorced parents. XD
Lunar Wilds
10:05:10 Lux - AAs
Bird
I’m sorry they were so close minded about it
Lunar Wilds
10:04:35 Lux - AAs
Bird
I once went on a double date where the other’s guy talked about how traumatic their parents amicable divorce was and how we didn’t know how divorce could be damaging for kids (they were 17 when it happened). While divorce can be traumatic and damaging, he was talking to a table full of people with divorced parents
Hummingbird Meadows
10:03:44 Bird
@Rainy, I have been looked down on it for my whole life even though I wasn't even 1 when it happened. It sucks.

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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